C.L.K Stivie320 AGAINST Rappone! Awesome Matchup!

[Rappone]

I'ma use bars, for first spitt. YEAH This is gonna be a tight matchup.



Yo CLK Your The Bitch~That~Chose~Me, Front With What Ya Rich~Ass~Shows~Me, Spit~The~Best~You~Got, Camon, We'll See If I'ma Rip~Ya~Chest~or~Not//1

When Rappone~Front, Shit Becomes Like A Bone~Hunt, I Throw~Stunts, They "Stick On The Walls Of" Low~Cunts, [Peep Wordplay], I Play~With~Words, Slay~The~Verse, Worse, Than The Hunter Slays~The~Birds//2

You CLK, Get Back~In~Your~Car, Coz Your Dyin, When I Attack~You~With~Bars, [Peep double-wordplay and personal], My Flows Take~You~To~Mars, Punch~You~SO~Hard, That They Make~You~See~Stars//3

Ya Verses Easier To Rip Than A Piece~Of~Paper, You Cant Combine words, Bitch, Need~A~Stapler? When I Peep You I Dont See~A~Hater, I See~A~Jerk, Y'all Judges Best prepare A Hospital Bed For CLK coz He~Got~Merked//4

I'ma Tell~You, This is The Final Bar I'ma Write to KILL~You, Bury you Beneath~The~Dirt, Well I Breathe~The~Dirt, To Entomb You While I Cleave~Ya~Verse, Remember Dawg, Im The Illest G~On~Earth//5


K~Fuckin~O lol

[jersey#12]

damn clk me and rappone the only ones gettin better cuz of our new style, u betta watch out dawg...u gonna go down way below em.net's list :D

[Flawless]

lol bitch please when i get home from school i'll drop one

[InfiniteE]

lol...hahaha......battles be heatin up

[jersey#12]

y u laughin clk, u dont know how good me n rappone been gettin :D

hurry up n post bitch

[Flawless]

This is y im laughin jersey... :lol:

This lil bitch gettin drained like mass breast reduction,
talkin shit out the same ass this fag gets fucked in,
I’ll take this time as introduction, new alias ‘“Flawless,”’
Punches like mike tyson but I leave u ‘jawless’,
U cant chain-saw this lyrics hard as rock,
Rip ya verse in reverse bmob tsrif like tu-pac,
U perpetually spit slop split n quit hip-hop,
I’m known round the block in demand like hot stock,
This shits a walk, straight through the park, and “back out”,
Ill flows, hit so hard I’ll blow ur “back out,”
Spit--fire turnin ya punk ass to ashes,
Pones new style is Bold squiggles n slashes ~//~, [hahaha]
Ma lyrics are cash you can take em str8 to the bank,
Your lyrics are ass even when I read em they stank,
U shoulda left your page blank, u wouldnt’ve got that ass kicked,
Test the highest rank now ur bleedin in a casket...

[Flawless]

O yah ...

K~Fuckin~O :thumbsup:

[Rappone]

Lmao aight verse 2 ;)

Woooooooo

I Hit The Clutch of ya pedal and Rise,
Shoot lyrics that strike you between your eyes,
Ya face would bleed so much niggaz would think you in for halloween disguise,
I Energize, "Never Say Die" Just like the battery, (Energizer ;))
I pound you, tough luck you chose to battle me,
Immortal,
Geared up to teach you some Morals,
That you dint learn from ya mom coz she was too hectic givin you Oral,
No time to Teach you what you need to learn,
No time to advise you what kinda Beef to Burn,
I turn the Whipped shit to a whiplash,
I dont understand how you survived to spit back,
But that doesnt matter, though now the matter turns pitch black,
Judges Sit Back, And watch me whip a bitched fag,
That names himself after a car, Mercedes, (CLK)
Well watch me dry you up worse than from Grapes to Raisins,
I win you fast faster than when Muslims Fast In Ramadan,
I'll have you kneeling in a Mosque, Preaching the Holy Qur'an,
I can make you diss christianity,
I aint rascist nor satanic, I just lost my sanity,
You fuckin car, I'ma Empty your fuel,
Too bad you juss Had to tempt me to duel,
Man I rule,
My flows are encrusted in Jewels, [Personification: Flow like Throne (I rule => King (?)]
My lyrics take wing and knock you with a Mass-Strike,
Puncture your wheels, melt your engine, and Break ya flashlights… ;)

:thumbsup:

[jersey#12]

ha ha i knew it, yo clk u gonna lose fo' real...damn homie rappone murdered u twice, first flow and last flow..why do i say this? hmm cuz he had better punches..better personals..better multi's and plus he's better :D

[jersey#12]

what happened clk, u got scared that someone is better than u :D

[Rappone]

Im sick Ima give him 12 more hrs then Ima take the mic.

[TEMP Flawless]

Rappone ma bad dawg I just been too busy to reply...
I had some time in between classes and I just wrote a verse though...
Jersey, U just got too much time on ur hands kid lol...
Read the parenthesis after u finished reading the verse... they r just adlibs

Check it...

Since when does a pedal have a clutch, u ignorant drop out,
U jelous of ma riches, cause cars? u without, (haha)
Without a doubt drivin ya bike screamin u a gangsta,
Ridin down ur street while flashin ya mommas pay stub… (broke ass)
U say stuff thinkin ways to over-pun me,
U tryna make careers? I do this for fun g, (this shits easy)
Mix words in slurred spurts no need for third verse,
I’ll cut ya face worse than a vision-blurred nurse, (damn)
Lift up this nerds skirt, let his feminine side squirt, (feminine side = your pussy :D )
Flows sweeter than candy ur tangy like sherbert,
Gay fucked, in trucks, so much, this fags turd hurts, (thas nasty)
I hurl verbs, I aint talking throwin dictionaries,
U stuck ur dick in cherries u still a virgin u fairy, (pone loves fruits :lol: )
Its so scary, this broke ass don’t even got a car,
Dissin on ma shit while he steady holdin his handlebars,
U made a mistake thinking u won n got the votes,
Tryna hide and drive away with broken wheels n spokes, ( :D )
U fuckin joke, u beating me is contradictory, (it dont make sense)
U mean shit to me, I give a fuck for u like reading mysteries,
U pissed to see an mc decease ur history,
Twist u out ur misery, this battle? FLAWLESS victory... (damn) :2guns:

[TEMP Flawless]

I say we get at least 3 judges to vote this one out i aint down with that one judge vote shit even if i win... what u think rap...?

[RapAplaN]

WHpoooooooo U guys got some muhfucking skills,,, Close One,, Dunno wich one 2 choose

[S.W.A.T]

thats sound fair

[$pade]

LOL, yall both had some funny shit :D Hard choice...but I'm gonna sit back and review the spits, the vote will come soon. :wink:

[InfiniteE]

tight shit

[Rappone]

Aight three judge vote, Im down... So its bucksta, $pade, and shinoda... Btw, tight shit you got ;)

I'ma call bucksta over he'll help out

[TEMP Flawless]

id rather have another judge than bucksta cuz id want it to be fair and i know he's ur boy like that... lets have the admin vote...

[S.W.A.T]

if admin wont vote can i vote?

[jersey#12]

no cuz your in the tourney :lol:

[Admin]

Ill pass ;) Stive is my boy so.. :D Besides, I hardly have any time ATM.. :)

[TEMP Flawless]

lol iight... wanna pick a judge for us then admin... ? Random ones who wont take sides...?

[$pade]

Yo...clk.....you had some really tight shit, especially the second verse. :D

Rappone, I liked your verses as well.....style was unique...everything was tight bro.

WINNER: Rappone

Clk....you had some tight shit but it seemed a lil too simple. You were VERY close of gettin my vote tho. Good job both of you. :D :wink:

[Admin]

Id say Bounty or maybe hm.. dont kno, gotta take a pi#s now.. ;) l8a :P

[S.W.A.T]

lol

[$pade]

:lol:

[TEMP Flawless]

ahh i just love the judges we have on this website lol :lol:

[jersey#12]

well at least we have a good loser in here and not a sore one :D (clk)

[TEMP Flawless]

it aint over yet jerzey... i showed a couple of my boys the battle and they saw a winner very clearly :wink: ... its all good though i dont mind losing i know i ripped it hard...

[jersey#12]

rappone won this clearly :wink:
if u want another mic lost then we should battle :D

[TEMP Flawless]

jerzey ur without a shadow of a doubt one of the worst "lyricists" on this website.... I wouldnt even call u a lyricist... Ive ripped u so many times, I dont even know where ur finding room to say anything kid... do yourself a favor and quit tryin to act hard calling me out how u are... everyone's alreddy seen me put ur lil 14 year old ass to sleep so like i sed, do urself a favor :thumbsup:

[S.W.A.T]

that hit home

[jersey#12]

im 15 :D

[Flawless]

can we get the votes in and get this tourney over alreddy... :roll:

[shinoda]

I was writin a detailed vote. CLK WINS, thats it

[shinoda]

RAPPONE
Yo CLK Your The Bitch~That~Chose~Me, Front With What Ya Rich~Ass~Shows~Me, Spit~The~Best~You~Got, Camon, We'll See If I'ma Rip~Ya~Chest~or~Not//1
In my opinion that was weak.Got/Not/Best/Chest/Me/Me/... just didn't seem cool

When Rappone~Front, Shit Becomes Like A Bone~Hunt, I Throw~Stunts, They "Stick On The Walls Of" Low~Cunts, [Peep Wordplay], I Play~With~Words, Slay~The~Verse, Worse, Than The Hunter Slays~The~Birds//2
None of this seemed related to each other... it just seemed random. Yeh you rhymed a lot of words, but in what aid...

You CLK, Get Back~In~Your~Car, Coz Your Dyin, When I Attack~You~With~Bars, [Peep double-wordplay and personal], My Flows Take~You~To~Mars, Punch~You~SO~Hard, That They Make~You~See~Stars//3
OK, CLK reference with car is ok, nothing particularly special, I liked the second half though --Take you to Mars, punch SO hard u'll see stars... I enjoyed that

Ya Verses Easier To Rip Than A Piece~Of~Paper, You Cant Combine words, Bitch, Need~A~Stapler? When I Peep You I Dont See~A~Hater, I See~A~Jerk, Y'all Judges Best prepare A Hospital Bed For CLK coz He~Got~Merked//4
I liked this verse for the first half... easier to rip than paper need a stapler... but never like rhyming words with MERK

I'ma Tell~You, This is The Final Bar I'ma Write to KILL~You, Bury you Beneath~The~Dirt, Well I Breathe~The~Dirt, To Entomb You While I Cleave~Ya~Verse, Remember Dawg, Im The Illest G~On~Earth//5
Just thought this was random and weak... sorry...
4/10 for that



FLawLESS
This is y im laughin jersey...

This lil bitch gettin drained like mass breast reduction,
talkin shit out the same ass this fag gets fucked in,
Ok, I really liked this start. clever use of of draining like breasts reductions and way of saying he's talkin shit

I’ll take this time as introduction, new alias ‘“Flawless,”’
Punches like mike tyson but I leave u ‘jawless’,
Flawless by name,flowed well, could've chose a better boxer, but yeh was good

U cant chain-saw this lyrics hard as rock,
Rip ya verse in reverse bmob tsrif like tu-pac,
clever way of writing, not effective when read out loud. not really to special though.

U perpetually spit slop split n quit hip-hop,
I’m known round the block in demand like hot stock,
first line was a little confusing, though understood, nice use of assonance, with the second appearing simple but understood

This shits a walk, straight through the park, and “back out”,
Ill flows, hit so hard I’ll blow ur “back out,”
Spit--fire turnin ya punk ass to ashes,
Pones new style is Bold squiggles n slashes ~//~, [hahaha]
Personal, and simple. Effective none the less. Clever First two lines didn't do much for me. Both rhymes were back out... just seemed pointless double use

Ma lyrics are cash you can take em str8 to the bank,
Your lyrics are ass even when I read em they stank,
first line good, second could've been a lot better... let it down

U shoulda left your page blank, u wouldnt’ve got that ass kicked,
Test the highest rank now ur bleedin in a casket...
hehe comical in my opinion, I liked
6/10



RAPPONE
Lmao aight verse 2

Woooooooo

I Hit The Clutch of ya pedal and Rise,
Shoot lyrics that strike you between your eyes,
Ya face would bleed so much niggaz would think you in for halloween disguise,
In set of three, clutch of pedal doesn't exist, nor does it relate to rising... 3nd line was smart and related to second line... without the first line these 3 would've been better

I Energize, "Never Say Die" Just like the battery, (Energizer )
I pound you, tough luck you chose to battle me,
ENERGISER!!!!!!! ahem yeh the second line was aight, continuing to profess your status.

Immortal,
Geared up to teach you some Morals,
That you dint learn from ya mom coz she was too hectic givin you Oral,
Loved the Immortal to moral quickness... then u did the mom thing... should've made the last line a lot shorter to be more effective...

No time to Teach you what you need to learn,
No time to advise you what kinda Beef to Burn,
burning beef? these two lines seemed unneccessary and unrelated

I turn the Whipped shit to a whiplash,
I dont understand how you survived to spit back,
But that doesnt matter, though now the matter turns pitch black,
Judges Sit Back, And watch me whip a bitched fag,
That didn't impress me. Just seemed like you kept reusing words hoping they sounded comical. sorry didn't do nethin for me

That names himself after a car, Mercedes, (CLK)
Well watch me dry you up worse than from Grapes to Raisins,
And by drying him up you achieve what? Although nice reference... It just makes me wonder wtf you're on about
I win you fast faster than when Muslims Fast In Ramadan,
I'll have you kneeling in a Mosque, Preaching the Holy Qur'an,
Ook, so you're gonna be quicker than a guy who doesn't eat and you're gonna make a guy rest on knees not his feet... that isn't that wonderful... just not really offencive
I can make you diss christianity,
I aint rascist nor satanic, I just lost my sanity,
You fuckin car, I'ma Empty your fuel,
Too bad you juss Had to tempt me to duel,
Uh huh... greeeeeeeeeat
Man I rule,
My flows are encrusted in Jewels, [Personification: Flow like Throne (I rule => King (?)]
My lyrics take wing and knock you with a Mass-Strike,
Puncture your wheels, melt your engine, and Break ya flashlights…
I found the pointing out of areas you've "done well with" was annoying and made them lose effect. I enjoyed to an extent the way this was put together, but not to a high extent



FLAWLESS
Since when does a pedal have a clutch, u ignorant drop out,
U jelous of ma riches, cause cars? u without, (haha)
Comical, refered to your rhyme and insulted you

Without a doubt drivin ya bike screamin u a gangsta,
Ridin down ur street while flashin ya mommas pay stub… (broke ass)
U say stuff thinkin ways to over-pun me,
U tryna make careers? I do this for fun g, (this shits easy)
Ok, another personal. Not really offencive though

Mix words in slurred spurts no need for third verse,
I’ll cut ya face worse than a vision-blurred nurse, (damn)
comical use of imagery blurred vision cut face

Lift up this nerds skirt, let his feminine side squirt, (feminine side = your pussy )
Flows sweeter than candy ur tangy like sherbert,
ew... u tasted him :S

Gay fucked, in trucks, so much, this fags turd hurts, (thas nasty)
I hurl verbs, I aint talking throwin dictionaries,
U stuck ur dick in cherries u still a virgin u fairy, (pone loves fruits )
Hehe, poppin cherries... good use, and so badly fucked ur turd hurts lol...

Its so scary, this broke ass don’t even got a car,
Dissin on ma shit while he steady holdin his handlebars,
Ow

U made a mistake thinking u won n got the votes,
Tryna hide and drive away with broken wheels n spokes,
U fuckin joke, u beating me is contradictory, (it dont make sense)
U mean shit to me, I give a fuck for u like reading mysteries,
Yeh continuin the bike topic was good, the second half was a bit random

U pissed to see an mc decease ur history,
Twist u out ur misery, this battle? FLAWLESS victory... (damn)
KILLER InSTINCT REFERENCE! ahem, yeh Fo'real, you lost Rappone... sorry dawg

[Flawless]

couldnt of said it any better myself shinoda... :lol:

[Rappone]

lol auight, 2 more judges needed to vote as agreed.. hurry da fuck up lol