a lil piece i wrote

[americanpsycho]

yo ima lay down this shit plain and simple
fuckin with me is a big problem like one big pimple
i come from the city known as sin city
my rhymes are as good as one big titty
when i beat u u will wonder what happened
ill be sittin there laughin while u just got flattened
so if u wanna mess with the nigga out of 702
hit me back and lets see what u gonna do

[Flawless]

IM THE ILLEST MC,
CAN’T NOBODY TOUCH ME, LIKE M.C., HAMMER,
IM LIVIN LIFE IN GLAMOUR, MY DIAMONDS-KEEP-GET-IN FATTER,
IM EATIN OFF SILVER PLATTERS, MY MONEY IS NEVER SCATTERED SO SHUT THE FUCK UP LIL DADDY AND PAY ATTENTION WHILE IM RELEASIN THIS NEW INVENTION, CREATIN TENSION PLACIN YA ENTIRE LIFE IN SUSPENSION, THIS THAT NEW SHIT MUTHAFUCKERS WILL NEVER FORGET TO MENTION MY NAME, WHEN IM DOWN IN THE HALL OF FAME FOR WRITIN THE ILLEST RHYMES AND HAVIN THE SICKEST AIM WHEN IPULLTHEGLOCK, YEAH IM RUNNIN THE BLOCK SO SHUT THE FUK UP ‘FO U CATCH A COCK IN YO MOUTH, FUCK THE SOUTH THIS THE NORTH IM REPRESENTIN THE D, ITS THAT 313, AND 810,THE 586, I GOT CHIX THAT KNOW ME IN JERSEY, ROCK THE DETROIT JERSEY U BITCHES AINT WORTHY TO FLOW AGAINST ME, RUN A SHOW AGAINST ME, ROCK YOUR RIDES AGAINST MINE MAN U RUNNIN OUTA TIME, ITS ALMOST OVA FOR U, MY SKILLS R SUBLIME ITS MY TIME TO SHINE, U NEED TO LET GO A DIS SHIT U GETTING OLD, IM COMIN UP EVERYDAY ITS ESCARGOT, I GOT S CARS THAT GO AND CL’S THAT GO, ZERO TO SIXTY IN LESS THAN FOUR POINT O, GET THE SHOW ON THE ROAD HOMEBOY MY TIME IS HERE, SO STAY CLEAR AND LET THIS HIT U IN YA EAR…

[C*Note]

Flawless that is ill I like yo style keep it up.

[JD da MC]

WTF?!
ok, that first verse was pretty lame, too short, and you need to just keep elevating, keep at it, that was too simple
ok, second verse, shouldn't even be in there, this is somebody elses thread, and please learn to set your verse out properly... plus, you trying too hard to get multis

[JD da MC]

oh yeh, and Mods might as well delete this, i don't think this guys coming back with the link