Krine_Sixty-Nine vs. c martin (4-0) KO

[c martin]

yo yo u wanna stand up bitch wanna fight?//
ill knock u out with a punch to the left and a punch to the right//
ill knock out ur lights//
ur sayin please dont kill me well a just might//
so stop prayin 2 god u pussy ur not alright//
ill unleash my fists again if u dont get outa my sight//
so listen threw ur battered brain krine i hate u//
il slice ur chest so u will bleed to//
if thats unbelievable u should see ur crew//
i let them bleed and attacked there weakness thats what i do//

[madchild]

Reminder: Drop 2 links each of votes on category or bar-by-bar.

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[Krine_Sixty-Nine]

hey dude gimme some time i just got back from indiana like 10 minutes ago and some other stuff in my life so ill try and post tonight or tommorow

[c martin]

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=61260#post61260

[Krine_Sixty-Nine]

I've never met an emcee that was under seventy pounds/
He's nine year olds, knocked out before the first round/
Before he even started he was kicked off the mic/
Everyone noticed that he was a fourty eight inch dyke/
Your only sexual experience was coming out your mom's garage*/
People wish that your just a variation of a bad mirage/
Nobody wants to believe that anyone can suck at rap like you/
I'd release a Christian song before I listened to crap like you/
You make God begin to consider commiting suicide/
Your not Eminem, so you can begin to put up all the paroxide/
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*garage* = pussy

[Krine_Sixty-Nine]

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=60166

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=4694

OPEN FOR VOTES

[child prodigy]

Consistency/Structure: Krine sixty nine
Creativity: (neither, but since it's mandatory) Krine sixty nine
Enjoyable: Krine sixty nine (although in both verses, i've heard it all before)
Flow: Krine sixty nine
Metaphors: - none -
Multies: C Martin (keep working at it, dude)
Personal: Krine sixty nine (only thing remotely close without actually being one.)
Punches: C Martin (equally weak/strong depending on how you look at it)
Vocabulary: Krine sixty nine ("paroxide", sad that is is the only one, isn't it?)
Wordplay: - none -

Overall: Krine Sixty nine

Not knocking on either of you, or even being skeptical. Practice doesn't make perfect but it comes pretty close to it. Practice, is all you need more of...then in time you will have acceled.

[DJ Diamond Dog]

Consistency/Structure: Krine
Creativity: Krine
Enjoyable: Krine
Flow: Krine
Metaphors: -
Multies: C Martin
Personal: -
Punches: Krine
Vocabulary: -
Wordplay: -

Overall: Krine

Both verses sounded pretty basic, so it's not like it was all one-sided. I thought that the punches Krine came out with were what put him on top. However, C Martin DID come out with some good (yet basic) multies.

[jersey#12]

Consistency/Structure: krine
Creativity: krine
Enjoyable: krine (all of it was funny, c martin was just plain serious)
Flow: krine
Metaphors: none
Multies: c martin (just like prodigy said, keep working on them)
Personal: - (i dont think there were any :( )
Punches: krine
Vocabulary: -
Wordplay: - (didn't see any)
Overall: Krine_Sixty-Nine

c martin did good i guess, but he needs to use punches and just quit with the i hate you shit, thats not a categorie ur gonna be voted on

I really like reading something that is funny or sumthin with good punches..i only got that from krine sixty nine..so he got my vote

[LSD RaBBiT]

Consistency/Structure: krine
Creativity: krine
Enjoyable: krine
Flow: krine
Metaphors: krine
Multi’s: krine
Personals: krine
Punches: krine
Vocabulary: krine
Wordplay: none
Overall: krine

[Krine_Sixty-Nine]

5-0 .. kick ass i win KRINE WINS!!! lol w.e. uhh mod or admin u can close this

[c martin]

congrats krine ur vese wuz tight

[madchild]

CLOSED Krine_Sixty-Nine wins by KO (4-0).