Mr. M vs. Eyedea (2-5)

[Mr. M]

Rules in callout, il start...

[Mr. M]

An imposssible situation, U die
Difference for me is that Il cap a nigga, then I watch him cry,
Yo punk ass don even think about the consequences,
Il watch your decline, while calmly sippin feedin my senses,
Your crap, your head don got no ideas,
why the hell u callin yo punk ass eyedea?
After the gay rapper who youve probably slept with,
I'm chillin with the chick, whom last night, I stepped with,
Dick ryders on the forum wanna see me loose,
But this time the dick ryders gonna feel the booze,
in they ass, when truck roll past, low ryder settin the chassis,
The next second you crash, your punk ass in the dash.

[Eluzion]

Damn dude, I thought you was a rapper, not just a bitch
Mr. M? That's so uneducated, and "Thug'd out", you fuckin wish
Your a fake, if you think you could get a bitch, then your wrong
And if i'm fuckin gay, then why the hell did I sleep with your mom
We all know your the real fag, and you just to scared to admit it
And if a bitch ever took off her clothes, you'd blow it before you hit it
This kid can't even spell, I think he needs "huked un fonixz"*
Can't even spell "lose" right, I think "Muggyville" got you hooked on Chronics**
You ain't never shot nobody, ya heat never got hotter
Cause the only gun you even have held, was filled with water

*I spelled it wrong because it's a reading, and spelling program.
**Muggyville, is where his locatin is, in his info.

Votes Needed.

[Eluzion]

Uppin for votes..

Droppin my links.

http://forum.eminem.net/showpost.php?p=60311&postcount=16

http://forum.eminem.net/showpost.php?p=58140&postcount=22

[Tech Skillz]

punches-M
flow-M
multies-none
structure-eyedea
creativity-not that much
overall-M

[Eluzion]

WHAT THE FUCK MAN..he didn't even have one punch..learn how to vote..

0-1.

[Eluzion]

I don't wanna be a dick, but it's been 24 hours..isn't that a DQ?

[LSD RaBBiT]

wordplay:eyedea
vocab: mr m
structure:mr m
metas:mr m
enjoyment:eyedea
flow:mr m
multies:mr m
punches:eyedea
personals:eyedea

mr m, by very lil

[SmithNWessy]

wordplay: Mr. M used "ideas and eyedeas"....Eyedea used "huked on fonixz"...not much from either..."you'd blow it before you hit it has two meanings to it....so Eyedea gets the edge in this category.
vocab: i think Mr. M used the most uncommon word which was "consequences"...once again...nothing to really vote for.
structure: I honestly dont know what to LOOK for when it comes to these two structures...both are similiar...the only rhymes come at the end of each line...tie i guess
metas: None from either....
enjoyment: I kinda liked Eyedea's ending with the water pistol line...
flow: Mr. M
multies: Multi's are supposed to be like, Em for example, "please leave me with the keys to ya jeep eagle"...Mr. M has some in the last two lines of his verse so he wins this category.
punches: Eyedea gets it.....Mr. M was kinda random - gonna shoot, gonna drink, gonna make me feel this booze??? Not sure what your talkin' about but O-kay :confused:
personals: Eyedea...he got Mr. M on the spelling and the Muggyville i guess

*Gentleman, not too impressive....Better luck next time...I think Eyedea got this one. S-N-W

[TfLaMeZ]

wordplay: neither
Punches: eyedea
flow: eyedea
vocab: Mr. M
decent rhymes: eyedea
multis: neither
metaphors: eyedea
enjoyment: eyedea
Overall: eyedea

mr. m-your verse was all over the place, you had some good stuff, and some not so good stuff.
Eyedea-i saw consistentsy, i didn't see many weak points to your verse, i liked your overall verse a lot.

[Eluzion]

Thanks SNW, and thanks Tflamez, it's good to here you liked my verse man.

Mr. M-2
Eyedea-2

[Deagle50]

wordplay: Eyedea
Punches: Eyedea
flow: Eyedea
vocab: Neither
multis: Neither
metaphors: Eyedea
enjoyment: Eyedea

Overall: Eyedea

[shinoda]

Nothing personal here, but Mr M’s punches weren’t strong, were simplistic and weren’t bringing strength “You slept with a guy”… that’s just immature dammit. No real complexity yet. Also, Ideas/Eyedeas was and overly played punch before he even joined the site unfortunately.

Weak intro… more conversation than rapping, and your mum jokes… oooh wee damn they’re old. The scared to admit it / blow before you hit it was the only decent line in the whole of this battle, followed by the watergun line… I give this to eyedea

[Eluzion]

Thanks for the votes Deagle, and Shin..

Your right this batttle wasn't very interesting..I was really tired when I spit this..well keystyled..

Mr. M-2
Eyedea-4

[-MaKaVeLi-]

wordplay: neither
Punches: eyedea
flow: eyedea
vocab: Mr. M
decent rhymes: eyedea
multis: neither
metaphors: eyedea
enjoyment: eyedea
Overall: eyedea


my votes exactly like flamez....that wasnt very tough...
mr.m is dope but eyedea perrsonally had my vote becuz i think he did better... more punches, less fuillers..m had a couple of fillers...so ya

vote ~ Eyedea

[Eluzion]

Thanks for the votes, Tflamez, Deagle, Shinoda, Makaveli, and SmithNWessy..

Eyedea-5
Mr. M-2

Close it.

[madchild]

CLOSED Eyedea wins 5-2.

Mr.M, this is a warning. Before you drop a verse in another battle, you MUST get 2 links up first of where you voted on battles by the categories or bar-by-bar breakdown.