TfLaMeZ vs. Tylenol Rabbit (0-3) KO

[TfLaMeZ]

1 verse each, no line limit, you can go first, usual voting rules, same ol, same ol' shit.

EDIT: no feeding

[TfLaMeZ]

here's my links

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=60031#post60031

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=60033#post60033

stil waitin on your verse..?

[TfLaMeZ]

we set up this battle and now 4 days have past/
suprising..you havent layed your verse..(oh no).*GASP*//
oh, the suspense to read SHIT not worth my time/
i can't wait to see your week lines with infested rhymes//
your probably lookin up words in the dictionary to include/
my minds well developed, what happened to you?//
you got this dream that was meant to be unfulfilled/
your career's like hot coffee, it was meant to be spilled//
you set your limits to high, you accepted a battle outta your league/
i'm intrigued at how just one word i say can leave you fatigued//
i guess it seperates the men from the boys i'm in disbelief/
knowing that i killed you with words isn't any releif//

[LSD RaBBiT]

Your delivery is wack and your rhymes are all messed up
your punchlines ain’t bad, but they show signs of incest love/2
I told you on AIM that I was going to be busy for a while
dogg these songs you writing ain’t shit, lets hear you freestyle/4
using your age as a benefactor, you rhyme with a cheap smile
you can’t get chicks, but you’ve got smart guy on speed dial/6
you spit more gibberish than somebody in a mental assylum
my rhymes leave you colder than swimming in the polar biome/8
burning through flames, smoking more packs than a fat man
even attempting to use prozac couldn’t help you grow a sac, damn/10
you’re the type to start beef with people you don’t even know
what the fuck kind of battle is this? Eminem verses Benzino?/12
I could beat you easily without even relinquishing
guess you didn’t know that fire could be extinguished, b/14
enough of the clowning around, fuck wordplay
I’ll defeat you with simple lines..here’s one, “you’re gay”16

3) i told him before the battle started that i would be busy and he would have to wait
4) stating that these aren’t freestyles he’s posting; they are songs that he’s worked on
5) in a lot of his rhymes, tflamez tries to use his age to his advantage
6) smart guy and him both live near chicago
7) playing on the logo in his signature with the phrase saying “skitzofrenix”
9) playing on his name
10) playing on his age
12) comparing our quarrels with eminem and benzino
14) playing on his name


http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=4831
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=4780

[TfLaMeZ]

wanna go one more round?

[LSD RaBBiT]

for now lets just finish this battle with the one round that was assigned
we can have a rematch after this battle, on a separate thread, and we can have as many rounds on that as we want

UPPING FOR VOTES EVERYBODY

[Toxic]

aight, heres how i see it.

punches-T Rabbit T flamez was to simplistic
peronals-both
flow-T Rabbit
oooohhhhh factor- ehh, but T Rabbit
VOTE- T RABBIT

not a bad battle, not tha best, keep elevatin. ~Peace~

[LSD RaBBiT]

1-0 Upping For Votes Everybody

[madchild]

CATEGORIES

Consistency/Structure:
Creativity:
Enjoyable:
Flow:
Metaphors:
Multies:
Personal:
Punches:
Vocabulary:
Wordplay:
Overall:

[TfLaMeZ]

so does that vote not count? :confused:

[shinoda]

Tflamez
Comical first bar, not really a punch as such, but a personal
2nd bar: Forced words that don’t really do much and flow off-key
3rd bar: Conversational, weak punch.
4 th bar: weak punch and metaphor
5 th bar: one word leaves him tired? Not really a punch.
6 th bar: you talk and force rhyming in all that you’ve done.

Weak verse.

Tylenol
1 : how do they show you signs of incest love? What about a rhyme can? Not a personal, but first line’s a punch
2: flip and random personal
3: funny smart guy line
4: nice metaphor good vocabulary
5: grow a sac… you’re talkin about his bollocks right? Not too clear ea punch
6: Em V/s Benzino wouldn’t be this wack, sorry.
7: Played punch.weak
8: MOST PLAYED END TO A BATTLE EVER. ShiT I’ve read that too much this month and it’s not even funny. Wasted bar, you didn’t even need to put it in.

You had two bars MORE than him , and wasted BOTH bars. Your personals weren’t strong and the only reason I’m giving you the win is cause you flipped the only other punch of the battle and had enjoyment with another line.

Both were weak, ELEVATE.
Tflamez, you’re better at open-mic then battles… you don’t seem to know how to swing a hook.

If you want me to go on with the categories, I can, but I think I've explained enough.

[Mr. M]

Consistency/Structure:TyLeNoL RaBBiT
Creativity:TyLeNoL RaBBiT
Enjoyable: TyLeNoL RaBBiT
Flow:TyLeNoL RaBBiT
Metaphors:Tflamez
Multies:Tflamez
Personal:Tflamez
Punches:Tflamez
Vocabulary: TyLeNoL RaBBiT
Wordplay: TyLeNoL RaBBiT
Overall: TyLeNoL !

[madchild]

CLOSED Tylenol Rabbit wins by KO (3-0).