Mr. M vs. Shinoda (0-4) KO

[Mr. M]

rules:
1] 2 verses each
2] min: 10 lines
3] feeding allowed
We start tomorrow, im kina exhausted now..

[shinoda]

Just signin in :)

link 1:http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=4730
link 2:http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=4651

[Mr. M]

A thug mind getting ready to unveil my beef,
Trip shinoda and the rest of his crew with my teeth,
A hound dogg with a vengeance cutting loose the leash,
Run wild with independence ground you down, kapish,
I take center stage, i reduce my rage,
feelin good, its nice to be out the cage,
I dont meadle with freaks, geeks, pursuin great feats,
You shit! U got a great mind like mine to defeat,
Grab your shit and leave, I got a life to lead,
Grim face but a lotta dumb lice to beat,
My crews so THUG'D OUT! Dont pretend were not!
Sizzlin ice, without beef, check the shoes, were HOT!

[shinoda]

The rug grinds, wetting steadily labelled as my lyric sheets
Sleepovers, bare-wet-breasts as is due when me and your mother meet
I found shock sentances, sentancing you to not get free
Locked you in a world of mystery, your history sees delete
Erased, not from the page but from the book of life
I don’t beef sweets, I eat MCs and straight up ignite
Light a method for you to follow, give you my cock to swallow
I ain’t even gonna borrow words from you just feed your sorrow
Dance obtusely as a white man do
Make a fool of myself, whilst steal beating your crew
Ain’t nothing thug’d bout you, I got more gangsta in my socks
Than you’re collection of highschool failures and outdrops

(I'll get my links up soon)

[Mr. M]

Only a guy like you can accept a blowjob from a man,
I would slap the gay shit out you, wait hold on, i can,
My book of life's still almost empty,
the years to come hold nothing but envy,
from pricks like you! Il Right click your crew,
Delete the crap and all the bullshit you chew,
I thought you knew, better than to mess with thuug'd out,
We stay focussed none of our rhymes are booored out,
Go-head and spit, Im on the harlem shit,
East side muufuckers throwin cards and shyyt.

[shinoda]

I threw through you to choose who blew, suckin who and loosing nooses that were hanging you
Thinking rhyming words but spelling it different shows your talented, “shit” and “shyyt”, ARE you
Feeding and quoting are supposed to be quite separate
You realise saying what I said is biting, *sigh* poor illiterate
Saying YOU SUCK don’t mean you’ve got to oblige
The fact we beat your crew doesn’t come as a surprise
I spy with my little eye a guy who tries always falls
Doesn’t fly, like Superman takin backhands, this was an inverted call
Two lines …what to say
Um.. You’re gayer than gay, yay, I’m J… wahay

[Mr. M]

Wait, which verse did I bite? truth is you suck,
I'm like a trillion rocks, U like a buck,
You cant flow, your shit's even worse than young Buck,
Proud of your crew, tryin to be the shyyt? well tough luck,
Rollin with my blade tucked in, Swaggin right past ya,
Feelin love on tha block, My p-ple's lovin my posture,
I repeat myself, Your SHIT!
Your punk ass hair, it deserves to get LIT!
Why you so gay? is-it cause ur dick got bit?
Look around you dogg Take in the worlds beauty,
Coz in a minute, you are destroyed, its my duty.

[shinoda]

Um "Rules - 2 verses each" *counts* 1...2...3

Dude can't follow his own rules, so how's he gonna get wins?
Seems to wanna cypher insteada battlin cause he ain't punchin'
Buck buck buck buck you sound like you got taught fake swear words
[You can't beat me, I rep a rockstar...]
Concepts ain't too strong for you, take this one, NERD
You're a geek repping words that are weak and not offencive
Telling stories about glorified ideas, you're not inventive
My incentive is to give people meaning out of something
I'm like the letters on the page without me your raps are nothing
I stay Fo'real, no kid like you's got any angle, i'm reworking
I Dilate your People , crush your crew quickly, just flirting
Got the DickJocket, "Diamonds in his asscrack" cause you're diggin down deep
Like a dog tryin to bury your bone in his cave, but now I'm puttin that dog to sleep
And don't even speak of the Lady you call MsShady facial wears
Who's too big for her clothes, using tents cause simple clothes just tear
An incredible hulk of mass, afraid to show her true persona
Having online relationships are ill-fated like that of fair Verona (Romeo n Juliet)
Silly loners, combining their talent to equate to nowt
This is over, why're you trying to keep uppin this bout?

[Mr. M]

lost count sorry, now people VOTE!

[Krine_Sixty-Nine]

Structure: mr. m
Creativity: shinoda
Enjoyable: shinoda
Flow: shinoda
Multies: mr. m
Personal: tie
Punches: shinoda
Vocabulary: shinoda
Wordplay: shinoda
Overall: shinoda

this was a hell of a nice battle and extremely close but shinoda got it ... it did sorta turn into a cypher tho ( as shinoda sed in one of his lines ) ...

[Mr. M]

hahaa.. cool i already lost this, good battle shin :clap:

[$tingeR]

Structure: tie
Creativity: shinoda
Enjoyable: shinoda
Flow: shinoda
Multies: shinoda
Personal: shinoda
Punches: shinoda
Vocabulary: shinoda
Wordplay: shinoda
Overall: shinoda

oh, mr.m, your down to a 2 man crew now because ladyshady told me via text msg that she has been permanently banned from the internet! what is it with parents banning people from the internet :rolleyes: i need it :mad:

[Mr. M]

oh shit!, did u even read my verses?

[$tingeR]

of course i did...

[shinoda]

Ladyshady's gone???
*coughs n moves on*

[Eluzion]

Structure: -
Creativity: Shin
Enjoyable: Shin
Flow: Shin
Multies: Mr. M
Personal: Shin
Punches: Shin
Vocabulary: Shin
Wordplay: Shin

Overall: Shin

[blueridden]

my vote goes to shin since i never saw someone with a more fucked up haircut then he does and get away with it LMFAO!!!

[shinoda]

As much as I'd love to count your verse Blue, it's not breaking down the categories, so I can't. Though "gettinawaywithfuckeduphair" should be added to the categories.

[shinoda]

3-0 bye