Thug'd Out vs. Skitzofrenikz [0-3 KO]

[Mr. M]

rules:
1] max 20 lines min. 10
2] one verse from each
3] I'll begin
4] order: as suggested by pimpchimp: Mr. M, Shinoda, Diamond, $tinger, Lady(Shady), and pimpchimp
5] Battle begins 14th July

A shit crew, like a little bit of poo, thats you,
U all dazzled not really knowin what to do,
Like an animal coming right up to his preey,
I pounce, bounce and beat you all up todaay,
Lookin fresh, straight crip-walkin tha deck!
Smooth moves, a quick swish straight slits ya neck!
Moon-walk right back to my clique like Heey,
Better get onto your bike and pedal awaay,
We'l get into tha zonda, the porsche or the lambo,
Shinoda quit the blowing start actin like rambo,
Try to run, one of us will be right inyour faace,
Lady(shady), d-dog and mr m from the baase,
Makin our way to the top!
U keep steppin, we'l always be ownin tha hop!

[shinoda]

My mind's in mental states creating devistation whilst you post
We got KOB, Heavyweight and European champs to boast
SKitzofrenixz got the topicals, we got the Audios
Your crews about as thug'd out as fuckin Oreos
LadyShady the rapeartist, talents farthest away
Nothing's attainable, shouldn't be writing, get back to dick suckin all day
Mr M, damn, you done finished yourself quickly
20 lines is way too many for me to rip these

Style flip like I got banned or something

12th line, your dizzy decline devised the minds destruction
Denchers broken, I could blow up like an eruption
No need for skill, fuck this, we breed corruption
I'ma let the others battle, I'm just followin instructions

[DJ Diamond Dog]

Yo, wat da fuck!! You gon' ryme against me??/
Wit dat teenage style?? Bitch!! Get down on ya knees/
And bow down to da master who'll teach ya da game/
I'm Diamond Dog & you're....uh...what's yer name??/
That's right dawg!! You ain't got nuttin on ma peeps!!/
In fact, we're da wolves & y'all ain't nuttin but da sheep!/
I'll creep up on ya wit my lyrical grenades!!/
It's a battle here, dawg!! So, in battle I will engage!/
Yo, Shin...the hair, dawg!! I jus don't know!!
Ya flow is tight!! But da hair's gotta go!!!/
Oh!! Audios & oreos are close...but no rhyme!!/
Why ya rushin it, dawg?? Ya scared?? Got no time??/
There's 6 verses in this battle, but this is da hot one!/
Ya said "no need for skill". Well, son...you ain' got none!!/
So, pucker up, son!! It's time to kiss my ass!!
Cuz you jus been hit witta Thug'd Out blast!!/
BOOM!! That's it!! Game Over!!! It's all done!!/
You been beat down, boys!! In fact, this was fun!!/
Yo, I didn't even take 20 bars to finish them!!/
So I'll give a shout out to Lady Shady & Mr. M!!/

No disrespect!! Haha!! All's fair in battle!! ;)

[$tingeR]

forget verbal abuse- you bring abuse of the verbals
its like a track event where your shorter than the hurdles
one thigns for sure- these thugz wont be "jumpin" us
"thug enough" to join? how about "chump enough"
why`d you call us out- to get made an example of?
it seems...typing a legible line you cant pull off
so Dj cant spell but has an attempt at some personals
ladyshady advertises herself like she stars in commercials
mainstream fans love rap just cos its the in thing
you think n type for days, skitzos just key out of instinct
that`ll do...

*edit* missed a word :)

[ladys(hady)]

yeah me!! :D

ok lets go/
first off, I dont like ur flow/
cuz like u no, i could prolly beat u wit one singular toe/
fo real i hav a much stronger skill/
but 4 u 2 get stronger u'll hav 2 take a steroid pill/
ur lyrics dont kill, they hav no worth/
u guys hav been verbally constipated since birth,
lets go wit shinoda/
dude...i think ur hair just got a bonar../
how about pimpchimp?/
ur lyrics r limp...i aint bothering wit u..ur just a wimp/
and then there is $tingeR/
forget about hip hop... but u would make it as a country singer/
i am new and much fresher/
ur gonna get killed...sliced like cheddar/
I am soo much betta/
dont b jealouse..dont hav a vendetta/
u better remember wot we r about/
shout out our names..we r tha one and only we r THUG'D OUT!!

[pimpchimp]

Y'all can't rap for shit, all your vocabulary's savage
Our crew is schizo, battling ourselves is more of a challenge
You were quick with the rhythms that you've given
But if you'd rap to save your lives then your whole crew wouldn't be livin'
You're thugged out, with your Tims and your buttons up
You bugged out at how quick we just shut you up
I won't lie, aiyyo, we didn't even try
And the rhymes you spit belie the fact you need an alibi
A reason why y'all spit so rancid - here's your answer
You thought it was punches, but all you spat was banter
Shin to the O-D made you O.D. on flow, see
Took Mr. M's and "Forced" him to quit - like Kenobi
Diamond tried to spit but the stupid DJ got stung
So hopefully no other raps will come off his tongue
And then you got Lady Shady - baby, quit
All you rap is either crap or it's maybe shit
This thug'd out crew needed to learn a lesson
While schizo knows the outcome, aiyyo, we got 'em stressin
We slice the competition in ribbons with our three-way flow
Only one way this will end - a schizo TKO.

[ladys(hady)]

good battles frm u all...now vote!!...

[DJ Diamond Dog]

Yo!! My 1st battle!! Lemme throw some props out to all!! Skitzos...y'all is like... real good!! It's all about livin & learnin!! Mr. M & Lady (Shady)...I'm glad y'all got my back!!

[shinoda]

no more freeposting. VOTES

[Killa Jones]

Mr.M

A shit crew, like a little bit of poo, thats you,
U all dazzled not really knowin what to do,
Filler
Like an animal coming right up to his preey,
I pounce, bounce and beat you all up todaay,
A starter, but still a filler.
Lookin fresh, straight crip-walkin tha deck!
Smooth moves, a quick swish straight slits ya neck!
I liked it, went well.
Moon-walk right back to my clique like Heey,
Better get onto your bike and pedal awaay,
Contiuned it with the moves line, but still weak.
We'l get into tha zonda, the porsche or the lambo,
Shinoda quit the blowing start actin like rambo,
Didnt go
Try to run, one of us will be right inyour faace,
Lady(shady), d-dog and mr m from the baase,
Ok bar.
Makin our way to the top!
U keep steppin, we'l always be ownin tha hop!
Ok-ish.
Overall:- 5-10

Shinoda
My mind's in mental states creating devistation whilst you post
We got KOB, Heavyweight and European champs to boast
Nice opener.
SKitzofrenixz got the topicals, we got the Audios
Your crews about as thug'd out as in Oreos
Made me laugh.
LadyShady the rapeartist, talents farthest away
Nothing's attainable, shouldn't be writing, get back to dick suckin all day
Nice punch.
Mr M, damn, you done finished yourself quickly
20 lines is way too many for me to rip these
Anohter good punch
Style flip like I got banned or something

12th line, your dizzy decline devised the minds destruction
Denchers broken, I could blow up like an eruption
No need for skill, this, we breed corruption
I'ma let the others battle, I'm just followin instructions
Very nice finisher
Overall:-7-10

Diamond Dog
Yo, wat da !! You gon' ryme against me??/
Wit dat teenage style?? Bitch!! Get down on ya knees/
Lame opener And spelling lol
And bow down to da master who'll teach ya da game/
I'm Diamond Dog & you're....uh...what's yer name??/
Funny. I like that
That's right dawg!! You ain't got nuttin on ma peeps!!/
In fact, we're da wolves & y'all ain't nuttin but da sheep!/
Ok bar
I'll creep up on ya wit my lyrical grenades!!/
It's a battle here, dawg!! So, in battle I will engage!/
Nice
Yo, Shin...the hair, dawg!! I jus don't know!!
Ya flow is tight!! But da hair's gotta go!!!/
Gave him props, but the hair line was funny
Oh!! Audios & oreos are close...but no rhyme!!/
Why ya rushin it, dawg?? Ya scared?? Got no time??/
To me audios and oreos do rhyme, maybe its coz were british?2nd line was ok
There's 6 verses in this battle, but this is da hot one!/
Ya said "no need for skill". Well, son...you ain' got none!!/
Nice punch
So, pucker up, son!! It's time to kiss my ass!!
Cuz you jus been hit witta Thug'd Out blast!!/
ok
BOOM!! That's it!! Game Over!!! It's all done!!/
You been beat down, boys!! In fact, this was fun!!/
Ok
Yo, I didn't even take 20 bars to finish them!!/
So I'll give a shout out to Lady Shady & Mr. M!!/
Ok finisher
Overall:- 6-10

Stinger
forget verbal abuse- you bring abuse of the verbals
its like a track event where your shorter than the hurdles
Very nice opener
one thigns for sure- these thugz wont be "jumpin" us
"thug enough" to join? how about "chump enough"
Nice punch
why`d you call us out- to get made an example of?
it seems...typing a legible line you cant pull off
Nice
so Dj cant spell but has an attempt at some personals
ladyshady advertises herself like she stars in commercials
Lol. funny
mainstream fans love rap just cos its the in thing
you think n type for days, skitzos just key out of instinct
Nice finisher
Overall:-8.5-10

Lady's Hady

ok lets go/
first off, I dont like ur flow/

cuz like u no, i could prolly beat u wit one singular toe/
Lame opener
fo real i hav a much stronger skill/
but 4 u 2 get stronger u'll hav 2 take a steroid pill/
Ok.
ur lyrics dont kill, they hav no worth/
u guys hav been verbally constipated since birth,
Made me laugh duno y?
lets go wit shinoda/
dude...i think ur hair just got a bonar../
simple but funny
how about pimpchimp?/
ur lyrics r limp...i aint bothering wit u..ur just a wimp/
Lame.filler
and then there is $tingeR/
forget about hip hop... but u would make it as a country singer/
Weren't feelin it
i am new and much fresher/
ur gonna get killed...sliced like cheddar/
filler
I am soo much betta/
dont b jealouse..dont hav a vendetta/
ok
u better remember wot we r about/
shout out our names..we r tha one and only we r THUG'D OUT!!
ok
Overall:- 4-10

Pimpchimp

Y'all can't rap for shit, all your vocabulary's savage
Our crew is schizo, battling ourselves is more of a challenge
very nice opener
You were quick with the rhythms that you've given
But if you'd rap to save your lives then your whole crew wouldn't be livin'
Nice punch
You're thugged out, with your Tims and your buttons up
You bugged out at how quick we just shut you up
Didnt feel it
I won't lie, aiyyo, we didn't even try
And the rhymes you spit belie the fact you need an alibi
Lol
A reason why y'all spit so rancid - here's your answer
You thought it was punches, but all you spat was banter
ok
Shin to the O-D made you O.D. on flow, see
Took Mr. M's and "Forced" him to quit - like Kenobi
Mulities, Nice punch aswell
Diamond tried to spit but the stupid DJ got stung
So hopefully no other raps will come off his tongue
ok
And then you got Lady Shady - baby, quit
All you rap is either crap or it's maybe shit
lol
This thug'd out crew needed to learn a lesson
While schizo knows the outcome, aiyyo, we got 'em stressin
Nice
We slice the competition in ribbons with our three-way flow
Only one way this will end - a schizo TKO.
Very nice finisher
Overall:-8-10

Thug'd Out Overall:- 15/30
Skitzophrenix Overall:-23.5/10

Killa's Advice(LoL Like ne1 gives a fuck!)
Thug'd out you need to practice more guys, just keep spitting it will eventually come.

Skitzo's no advice needed

[shinoda]

NO MORE FREEPOSTING. ONLY VOTES TIL 3-0 KO/4-1 TKO. Then feedback.

[madchild]

1 member from each crew must put up 2 Links of where they've voted. Lots of battles need votes, and if you want people to vote on your battle (where there is 6 verses to read), I suggest you get your links up.

[Killa Jones]

Example: Killa Jones has a lot of battles that need voting! joke! but madchild is right there aint enough voting going on!

[shinoda]

Someone else can go voting, cause I can't be arsed to vote after that tournament :D

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=4772
and the Stinger v/s PimpChimp Tournament semi.

[Killa Jones]

Someone else can go voting, cause I can't be arsed to vote after that tournament :D

LOL good One.

[$tingeR]

mr.m get some links and get this battle voted on and closed...

[DJ Diamond Dog]

Here's my links.....

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=4780&page=2&pp=10

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=4792


OK...let's get the voting over here......!!!!

[Mr. M]

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=3238
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=4223

[madchild]

Votes Needed!

Consistency/Structure:
Creativity:
Enjoyable:
Flow:
Metaphors:
Multies:
Personal:
Punches:
Vocabulary:
Wordplay:
Overall:

[Eluzion]

Consistency/Structure: Skitzo's
Creativity: Skitzo's
Enjoyable: Skitzo's
Flow: Skitzo's
Metaphors:Skitzo's
Multies: Skitzo's
Personal: Skitzo's
Punches: Skitzo's
Vocabulary: Skitzo's
Wordplay: Skitzo's

Overall: Are you kidding me? SKITZO'S

Skitzo's took everything in my opinion..weak verses from Ladys(hady), Mr. M, and DJDiamonddogg..

Good verses from SkitzofrenixZ

[Tech Skillz]

Consistency/Structure:Skitzo
Creativity:Skitzo
Enjoyable: Skitzo
Flow:Skitzo
Metaphors:Skitzo
Multies:Skitzo
Personal:Skitzo
Punches:Skitzo
Vocabulary:Skitzo
Wordplay: Skitzo
Overall:Skitzo

[madchild]

2-0 for Skitzos'. More votes!

[child prodigy]

Title and votes are self-evident

Consistency/Structure - Skitzo
Creativity - Skitzo
Enjoyable - Skitzo
Flow - Skitzo
Metaphors - Skitzo
Multies - Skitzo
Personal - Skitzo
Punches - Skitzo
Vocabulary - Skitzo
Wordplay - Skitzo
Overall - Skitzo

Like DJ Diamond said 'you live and you learn'...so keep at it you guys.

[shinoda]

3-0 KO. SkitzoFreniXz win.