Lyrikal Loser vs. Shinoda (7-0) TKO

[shinoda]

LL

*laughs*

You think bangin the opposite ~gender's absurd~? ~Everyone's heard~
That fuckin wit sickness'll literally make your new ~pecker "the bird"~!


HARDCORE MODE

~Petty hostage, wince~ as I'm ~steady carvin your skin~
~Caution you missed~, now got more than 3 times as ~many losses as wins~
My plenty chaotic spits make yours look ~calm and organized~,
Now that you're ~soft and mortified~ you'll get ~stomped then torn in five~,
I'm that constant thorn in your side, ~torture til you die~,
Fortified, plus I "see the causes of death" out of the ~"coroner" of my eye~,


FINISHER

You spit borderline like rappin between the ~States and Mexico~
Not tryna be annoying, I bust your balls cuz I ~hate your testicles~

iight iight uppin fo ur verse

[shinoda]

Quick keystyle, his verse didn't impress me at alll.

Mockstyle

To illiterate, the inconsiderate asshole, inarticulate, non-animate though arrogant, ain’t progressin’ like slides an’ no gradient
You’re fakin it, rappin bars with bends like prison sentences, an ass- clown inviting to all, through false pretenses, all hail my spit//
One day with it, I’m mixin on decs modifying my flow to cause car wrecks, quick to checkmate those pawn stars whilst my Kingdom’s prepared
Two bars, thirty scars a line, I’m quick defining your time is up an’ showing ain’t no reason to be scared//

LyK oH ShIt I dRoPpEd sOmE oN HiM

Better get back to editing, better yet, move back to **********, cause you should not be battling, you’re wacker than how boy bands sing
It’s amazing how you’re failing to increase any incriminating damaging spits, yet you’re top of the list, one flow from me and all MCs be desisting//
Back down ho, on your knees, I’m overpowering, your future crumbles like the world trade, whilst I’m outstanding,
Watching your fall, I stay tall and keep beats pounding, this quick key styles brought to you in part by your new King.//

[madchild]

If you're expecting votes, I expect links.

[shinoda]

Give me battles to vote on and I'll give you votes.

[madchild]

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=4795

[shinoda]

Voted there http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=4795
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=61113#post61113

[Tech Skillz]

Consistency/Structure:shin
Creativity:Shin
Enjoyable: shin
Flow:LL
Metaphors:Shin
Multies:Only saw a few, Shin
Personal:Shin
Punches:Shin
Vocabulary:Shin
Wordplay: Shin
Overall:Shin

[Killa Jones]

Structure:shin
Creativity:Shin
Enjoyable: shin
Flow:shin
Metaphors:Shin
Multies: Shin
Personal:Shin
Punches:Shin
Vocabulary:Shin
Wordplay: Shin

Overall :- shin

work more Lyrical LOSER! no offence, just a joke

[shinoda]

2-0, uppin for 3-0 KO

[TfLaMeZ]

Consistency/Structure: shinoda
creativity: shinoda
Enjoyable: shinoda
Flow: LL
Metaphors: i didn't see anything that stuck out
Multies: shinoda
Personal: i couldn't tell
Punches: shinoda
Vocabulary: Tie
Wordplay: Shinoda
Overall: Shinoda

You're right, his verse didn't have anything special, but he did alright with what he was getting at. I really liked youru wordplay shinoda, it made your verse stand out A LOT

[shinoda]

thanks
I got "KO"'d on the site that he runs by that verse somehow.

[RiKoChet]

Aight TFlames, i didnt see any wordplay in any 1 of those verses....
I woulda voted like this ...

Consistency/Structure:LL...
creativity:Tie...
Enjoyable:LL...
Flow: LL...
Metaphors/Similies:LL...
Multies:LL...
Personal:None...
Punches:Tie...
Vocabulary:Shin...
Wordplay:None...
Overall:LL...
LL's verse was the top one right?....if not then Shin won.....
Shin had alright vocabulary but didnt throw hard punches, LL didnt either...so i say thats a tie...Multies to LL cuz Shin Didnt really have any i saw....no1 threw a personal that i saw either, which kinda brought this battle down....Structure and flow went to LL obviously i thought... I couldnt catch Shins flow...LLs had alot more structured bars too....LL had a Similie..The 1st line of his finisher....thats how i saw it...im pretty sure LLs verse was the top 1 right?.....
-PeAce

[TfLaMeZ]

yeah which verse is which? and what the hell is your definition of wordplay, cuz i thought shinoda's verse was the top one

[shinoda]

I was second, and my verse had multies every 2 words so I don't know how I'm missin out on that.

Personals: He's illiterate - he spells his name lyriakl ffs.
Punches: I had two per line everyline.
Vocabulary: How could I NOT get that? "To illiterate, the inconsiderate asshole, inarticulate, non-animate though arrogant, ain’t progressin’ " Do you read my lyrics or just skim through it
Enjoyable: whatever, I don't care if you liked mine or not
Flow: Each bar is one continuous flow, fast, easily rapped
Metaphors: I didn't use too many/any I don't think
Creativity: Iuno

[$tingeR]

You think bangin the opposite ~gender's absurd~? ~Everyone's heard~
That in wit sickness'll literally make your new ~pecker "the bird"~!
wtf? this bar sucks dick, it doesnt really mean anything and its been drawn all over by a child or something?


HARDCORE MODE
^interesting

~Petty hostage, wince~ as I'm ~steady carvin your skin~
~Caution you missed~, now got more than 3 times as ~many losses as wins~
again why has it been scribbled on? these arent even full multies really, so why are they all accentuated? very weak punch wise and first line is filler really
My plenty chaotic spits make yours look ~calm and organized~,
Now that you're ~soft and mortified~ you'll get ~stomped then torn in five~,
when i read this bar my immediate reaction was to say "and..." just filler really and more forced multies for the sake of it
I'm that constant thorn in your side, ~torture til you die~,
Fortified, plus I "see the causes of death" out of the ~"coroner" of my eye~,
filler again and coroner of my eye? i dont like that because.... your either saying corner or coroner, you cant say coroner and expect it to also mean corner... and if your saying coroner then it doesnt make sense in my view.


FINISHER
do we really need to be told?
You spit borderline like rappin between the ~States and Mexico~
Not tryna be annoying, I bust your balls cuz I ~hate your testicles~
weak punch and the second line was filler and you wouldnt be expected to like his testicles anyway

all in all i thought that was terrible, with highlighted things everywhere, forced multies, filler, weak punches etc etc.

Mockstyle

To illiterate, the inconsiderate asshole, inarticulate, non-animate though arrogant, ain’t progressin’ like slides an’ no gradient
similie, punch, vocab
You’re fakin it, rappin bars with bends like prison sentences, an ass- clown inviting to all, through false pretenses, all hail my spit//
One day with it, I’m mixin on decs modifying my flow to cause car wrecks, quick to checkmate those pawn stars whilst my Kingdom’s prepared
Two bars, thirty scars a line, I’m quick defining your time is up an’ showing ain’t no reason to be scared//
pawn stars is wordplay isnt it? which gives shin the worplay category by default as loser guy had none.
LyK oH ShIt I dRoPpEd sOmE oN HiM

Better get back to editing, better yet, move back to **********, cause you should not be battling, you’re wacker than how boy bands sing
punches, flows
It’s amazing how you’re failing to increase any incriminating damaging spits, yet you’re top of the list, one flow from me and all MCs be desisting//
punch again, nice vocab
Back down ho, on your knees, I’m overpowering, your future crumbles like the world trade, whilst I’m outstanding,
Watching your fall, I stay tall and keep beats pounding, this quick key styles brought to you in part by your new King.//
similie, punch etc.... shinoda obviously wins this because he actually punched, had vocab, flow, similies etc. and he didnt draw on his verse.

[shinoda]

lol@Didn't draw on his verse.

[TfLaMeZ]

i just re read both verses and realized how much insignificant blabber on shit he had in his verse, i do like the way he rhymes though, its creative. And he still does have good ideas, he just sucks at putting them down

[Krine_Sixty-Nine]

To illiterate, the inconsiderate asshole, inarticulate, non-animate though arrogant, ain’t progressin’ like slides an’ no gradient When I read that I thought of 8 Mile where future was rapping outside the club. "... words that could put an x on you, sound complex to you...".

[RiKoChet]

Alot Of Shins Punches were just disses(name calling)but he/she(i dunno sorry).i didnt really read the whole verses b4.....but yea i missed the wordplay sorry, and now that im not high or anything, Shins is a bit better....LLs flow was better still though, couldnt really see someone doing Shins verse in audio, unless Twista did it.....I still dont feel Shins Punches hit hard..but LL didnt even really throw any and his most of his multies were not multies...the '~'s dont make them multies..i use them but still, just makes it easier to see yuh multies.......take it easy though.....
-Peace

[shinoda]

Read before you vote next time retard.

[$tingeR]

"... words that could put an x on you, sound complex to you...".

*cough* put a hex on you syllables that sounds complex to you *cough*

but yeah now that u mention it it is very reminiscent of that :clap:

[HooD]

Consistency/Structure:shin
Creativity:Shin
Enjoyable: shin
Flow:shin
Metaphors:Shin
Multies:shin
Personal:Shin
Punches:Shin
Vocabulary:Shin
Wordplay: Shin
Overall:Shin