Toxic vs. DaPropect (3-0) KO

[Toxic]

aight heres how it goes.
6-16 lines
3 votes a KO
5 votes to win, verses due by Tuesday.
anyone can drop at any tyme
g luck homie.
~Peace~

[shinoda]

Drop your two votes links with your verses

[DaProspect]

Where da fuck are u From Britney spears seamon ,Toxic???(song on mtv dayts gay)
Have Elton John rapin ur ears,while ur screamin cock sick//
Tic toc bitch the clok stopped and ya lifes ova
U is like a snake but im A mongoose dat strikes a cobras//
U sober u could spell ma name right on the thread
Git ma skill* fo respect sever ya neck and Pawn Ya head//(skills a chainsaw)
Look bitch stick ya dick Wit CUNT-ry music
The only way u'll win da battle unless Neil Mcoy is choosen//
Ur losin hung to a loose nuce from lyrical abuse
i Go to law suits in suits annd faggots Fearin ma boots//
Fuck u lost da fees free fuck da cost
This Faggots baggin his dick fuck i slipped and cut it off//
His membrane i shut it off and u like a cop insane
U drop bombs im wit hussain droppin Planes//
Anyway i said to die Faggot
this is rap dont even try to hack it//

I edit cause ma mom walked in and had to post so she didnt see
srry fo da truble
PayaCe

[DaProspect]

u gonna drop???? :confused:

[madchild]

u gonna drop???? :confused:

Do you want to take the DQ win, or keep this open for a bit longer? He broke the callout rules that he set.

[DaProspect]

Keep it open

Its not a win unless theres a challenge

[Toxic]

Dawg, that brittney spears line has been reused like a recyclin center /1
faggot ass cant think of nothin better rather be gettin it like a car in the rear fender /

bitch frontin talkin bout how he doin coke lines to save~ya /2
cant express his shyt verbally spillin cola on his pay~pa /

fuck it, i aint fort knocks ill beat u wit 3 bars of golden~material /3
and u'll only hear the first 2 sounds, "snap, krackle" cause at the end u get "pop"ped like rice krispy cereal /

sorry fo tha lateness been busy uppin fa votes

[DaProspect]

Yo nice spit Dawg

Uppin Fo votes

[Krine_Sixty-Nine]

Where da fuck are u From Britney spears seamon ,Toxic???(song on mtv dayts gay)
Have Elton John rapin ur ears,while ur screamin cock sick//
Made no sense whatsoever...
Tic toc bitch the clok stopped and ya lifes ova
U is like a snake but im A mongoose dat strikes a cobras//
Original, but sorta stupid and pointless
U sober u could spell ma name right on the thread
Git ma skill* fo respect sever ya neck and Pawn Ya head//(skills a chainsaw)
... I have no idea what your saying ...
Look bitch stick ya dick Wit CUNT-ry music
The only way u'll win da battle unless Neil Mcoy is choosen//
lol funny yet absolutely no flow or rhyme
Ur losin hung to a loose nuce from lyrical abuse
i Go to law suits in suits annd faggots Fearin ma boots//
1st line was good but "i goto lawsuites in suits" ... WTF are you trying to say
Fuck u lost da fees free fuck da cost
This Faggots baggin his dick fuck i slipped and cut it off//
Do u mean "Fuck you lost, the fees free, fuck da cost" without pauses it makes no sense and it still doesnt really ... what fee
His membrane i shut it off and u like a cop insane
U drop bombs im wit hussain droppin Planes//
why wud u drop planes over bombs ... ... im lost that makes no sense
Anyway i said to die Faggot
this is rap dont even try to hack it//
u spelled faggit rong ...
This could of been way improved if you had read what you had written after you had wrote it because this was a huge disapointment.

Dawg, that brittney spears line has been reused like a recyclin center /1
faggot ass cant think of nothin better rather be gettin it like a car in the rear fender /
lol ... "rear fender" lmao it took me a minute but thats definetely original ... nice opener
bitch frontin talkin bout how he doin coke lines to save~ya /2
cant express his shyt verbally spillin cola on his pay~pa /
1) whos he trying to save 2) since when does he do coke to save someone 3) since why does not being able to write make him spill coke on his paper
fuck it, i aint fort knocks ill beat u wit 3 bars of golden~material /3
and u'll only hear the first 2 sounds, "snap, krackle" cause at the end u get "pop"ped like rice krispy cereal /
nice not the most original cuz ive heard the snap crackle pop thing a lot of times but it had a original spin on it somehow ...



This was a terrible battle ... both verses could of been way improved ... daprospect you had several bars and none of them really hit or did n e thing for that matter and toxic ... you had one good bar and a second somehwat good one but not a good battle from either at all ... read what you wrote before you post ...

VOTE - TOXIC

[TfLaMeZ]

Multis: Prospect
Flow: Toxic(you need to add multi's, youd have some really good stuff if you did)
vocab: neither, i didn't see anything that stood out at all
Punches: Toxic
Structure: Toxic, Prospect, you gotta make sure you fit everything together as one, and make it a whole, you had choppy lines
Personals: neither
uh...
Rhymes: Prospect

OVERALL MOTHA FREAKIN VOTE:::: TOXIC

[JaggyA]

Multis: Prospect, had some aite multis
Flow: Toxic
Punches: Toxic,only three bars but killed it on punches...
Structure: Toxic
Personals: didnt really see any personals dnt tink
Rhymes: Toxic

Overall Vote - Toxic...

[Toxic]

thanx fo votin errebody, and thanx fo tha battle, props. yea i know that wasnt my best shyt, ive been hella busy fo tha week. but good battle and thanx fa votin. ~Peace~

[madchild]

CLOSED Toxic wins by KO (3-0).

However, if you wish to continue battling on Em.net, you must drop 2 links each of where you voted on battles by categories or bar-by-bar breakdown. Post underneath this one.

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[madchild]

Alright I have both your numbers marked if you ever come back.