$tinger vs. Child Prodigy (4-0) KO

[child prodigy]

My Links:

(1) http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=4470

(2) http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=4522
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Rules and Regulations:

16 lines max (8 bars)... 1 round... and cos its one round no feeding
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You wanted to battle? let's get it on son/
You want to be a scorpion? you'll be treated as one/
You'll get stomped on and shit upon just for fun.
Like i told Shinoda, i don't feed off rhymes, i've already been fed/
There's nothing you can say to me that hasn't already been said:
You can claim i'm not a Prodigy or even call me a Child/
Make fun of rhymes, in what you see and how it's styled.
Telling me you'll win, and about all the things you'll do to me/
All these things have been said, show something new to me.
You can call me a biter for applying what eminem's rap did/
Only reason you fight? You're jealous of my skills cuz you lack it
I think you stung yourself, making you think you're an arachonid/
Don't even try to redeem yourself when you're only just an act kid.
I'm not a biter becasue with everything i say i show it.
Just because you held a title doesn't mean you know shit/
When even PimpChimp murdered you on your own spit.


- i apologize....next time (when i beat you again) it will be a decent one. -

[$tingeR]

the filler king, most of his words and lines have no purpose
your rhymes are out of place, like a murderer at a circus
letting your opponent create rules- cos u dont understand
the only way your gaining votes is by something underhand
beat me again? i know that may be your idealism
but dude you cant rap, please lets face realism
as an 18 year old "monk", i guess your forever a virgin*
you claim to harbour skills- when they gon` start emergin`?
i dont need to use techniques in this, its to easy
when i said your big diss sucked didnt you believe me?
started to get confident, then backfired in your face
battling people with skill reminds us your a disgrace (lost to shinoda)
you may think your good, but theres a lot to work on
your flows are below standard, like a diamond made of zircon**
fuck it i could spit 1 bar and still have this on lock
at least i didnt need to think, just did a keystyle drop.

*see his sig. monks are sworn to chastity i believe.
**zircon is a mineral used to make immitation diamonds.

well as you did crap your only getting a quick keystyle. so blah. try harder when you lose to me again.

[$tingeR]

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=57891#post57891
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=4522

votes please.

[$tingeR]

come on lets get some votes in here...

[child prodigy]

Saying you didn't try (how original), you're only in denial...... :(

"Make fun of rhymes, in what you see and how it's styled."
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Sorry, it's simply coincidental that it rhymes.

oh and being a virgin isn't a diss. i'll leave you to ponder whether or not i'm avirgin...
(anything to get you off is none of my business. different "strokes" for different folks...)

more importantly...

VOTES PLACE THEM NOW! please & thank you!

[madchild]

Child Prodigy:

You wanted to battle? let's get it on son/
You want to be a scorpion? you'll be treated as one/
You'll get stomped on and shit upon just for fun/

Nothing really interesting here.


Like i told Shinoda, i don't feed off rhymes, i've already been fed/
There's nothing you can say to me that hasn't already been said:

Alright. Hoping it leads up to a punch ... *crosses fingers*

You can claim i'm not a Prodigy or even call me a Child/
Make fun of rhymes, in what you see and how it's styled.

Alright.

Telling me you'll win, and about all the things you'll do~to~me/
All these things have been said, show something new~to~me.

Getting a little repetitive so far. You're not really dissing him. Your bars could be used against anyone so far.

You can call me a biter for applying what eminem's rap did/
Only reason you fight? You're jealous of my skills cuz you lack it

Alright. I guess you guys have some personal beef somewhere?

I think you stung yourself, making you think you're an arachonid/
Don't even try to redeem yourself when you're only just an act kid.

Pretty good. Dissing him from his tournament spit.

I'm not a biter becasue with everything i say i show it.
Just because you held a title doesn't mean you know shit/
When even PimpChimp murdered you on your own spit.

Pretty good closer. You lacked metaphors and creativity a bit.

$tinger:

the filler king, most of his words and lines have no purpose
your rhymes are out of place, like a murderer at a circus

Pretty good opening line. However, I don't get the "murderer at a circus", isn't that a prime place to kill someone and get away with it?

letting your opponent create rules- cos u dont understand
the only way your gaining votes is by something underhand

Alright.

beat me again? i know that may be your idealism
but dude you cant rap, please lets face realism

Pretty good.

as an 18 year old "monk", i guess your forever a virgin*
you claim to harbour skills- when they gon` start emergin`?

I liked it. Good personal, finding something to diss him on.

i dont need to use techniques in this, its to easy
when i said your big diss sucked didnt you believe me?

Alright. Sort of a filler.

started to get confident, then backfired in your face
battling people with skill reminds us your a disgrace (lost to shinoda)

Pretty good.

you may think your good, but theres a lot to work on
your flows are below standard, like a diamond made of zircon**

Nice

it i could spit 1 bar and still have this on lock
at least i didnt need to think, just did a keystyle drop.

Also a decent closer.

Both battles sort of lacked those bars that make you sit back in your seat and go "Holy Fuck, that was good."

Vote: $tinger

[shinoda]

I'm sorry, but I gotta agree with Madchild. I could break this down bar by bar, but I agree with all he's said about it, and feel me re-writing it wouldn't be a good use of my time. Vote:Stinger

[S.W.A.T]

Dont really need to explain it...
Stingerv just came alot harder

VOTE: Stinger...

[Killa Jones]

VOTE PROPERLY U LAZY FUCK^^^^^

Consistency/Structure: stinger
Creativity: stinger
Enjoyable: stinger
Flow: child
Metaphors: stinger
Multies: -
Personal: child
Punches:stinger
Vocabulary: stinger
Wordplay: stinger
Overall: stinger



Vote: Stinger

[$tingeR]

3 (or 4)- 0 k/o to stinger, thanks for the votes.

[child prodigy]

i can't say "good battle" since i didn't put my best into it. for that i'm sorry. i meant no disresepct in not putting up my best,, you cand i (as well as everyone else here) know it was far from what i normally put out. But i won't complain, you won fair and square congratulations.

by the way, i'm game for another battle, how about you? whenever, where ever...i'm up for it.

4 and 1, i could have dealt with but 4 and 2? nooooo!

Maybe Shinoda put a curse on me? hahahahahhahahaha!

I WILL REDEEM MYSELF! next tourney, i'll sign up...

peace.

MADCHILD: spin that shit to the vault!

[$tingeR]

lol, this wasnt near my best either u` know! yeah we will battle some other time. it was a crap battle. :D

[madchild]

CLOSED $tinger wins by KO (4-0).