Killa Jones vs. Almite (3-0) KO

[Killa Jones]

I'll Leave Your Ear's Ringing Like A Non-Stop Telephone
It'll Even Effect Your Seeing, Left Blind By Killa, Cant Find His Way Home
Your Left Shell Shock, Can't Move, Like Chewing Gum Stuck To Your Shoe
Im Left With A Bed To Rock, With Your Paraplegic Mum Who Cant Move
Your Left On Cruthches, You'll Be Gliding With One Sock ON
Hob Along, Fuck It Im Gonna Break The Other One
You So Dumb, First Time You Seen A Cunt You Thought It Was A Credit Card Swipe
Throwing Heavy Punches To Your Chest Leaving You Without a Life
Blood,Trickling, From Your Nose, Blood Drop Splat's On The Floor
Then I Put Your Face To The Kurb And Say Bite Somemore
You Just Like An Egg, Almite, Coz You Yellow Inside
Praying At Night before you Log Of, Wishing We Dont Collide
You Remind Me Of A Bottle Of Pop But With The Fizz Let Out
Flow As Flat As Fuck, Not You Or Your Crew Could Even Win This Bout
Your Going, Going, Gone, Like The Price In A Sale
You Aint Even Gonna Spit,Ch-Choke, Put In Lyrical Jail
Ill Throw Punches To Your Face Leaving You With A Fat Lip
Now Your Lips Are Like Lesley Ash, So You Can Go Suck A Phat Dick
Your Sour Like Milk And I Aint The Pussy To Drink It
Gone Of And Awful, I'm Talking Bout Your Style, Why'd Do You Even Spit It?
I'll Whoop You Arse So Bad, It'll Be Left With A Bar-Code
Dont Cry, You Bitch Now You Know Killa Got A Bar-D-Mode.
Your Spit's Are So Dead I Need Pro Plus Just To Read It
Your The Type Of Person That'll Start So Many Times After You'd Have Delete'd It.
My Effects Are Like Drugs, Leaving You Freaked Out But Buzzing
Your Spraying Shit Bout My Moves, You'd Put on My T-Shirt Just To Say Your Thugging.
I Would Of Killed Off Your Whole Crew, Had They Been Here
This Is Just A Little Freestyle And You Already Fear
If You Want To Go More, We'll Go Extra Rounds
Didn't Even Say Shit When I Spat Sound's
Ripped You In Audio, Now Im Killing The Text
Fuck Almite, Band News And the Rest(Rhyme Effect)

[shinoda]

links to things you've voted on

[Killa Jones]

My Votes:-
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=56876#post56876

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=4500&page=1&pp=10

[AlMitE]

http://forum.eminem.net/showpost.php?p=56923&postcount=20
http://forum.eminem.net/showpost.php?p=41571&postcount=15

[AlMitE]

u dont wanna fuck with me dawg i stay rappin and clappin/
im the type thatyll show up at the crime scene like "what happened"/
i'll bust yo ass and yell "someody just got shot here"/
cuz when the cops get here, i play like i just got here/*rymed shot with got*
hah how u like that killa j i just took your style/
the internet gangstyle that gets me sicker than west nile/
it looks like killa must be jonesin fo a loss/
dont u know that i be stingin these rappers like a wasp/
killa recordz dawg you'll all lose/
cuz u make netgansta nursery rymes like a thug dr suess/
except dr suess is more gangsta than you/
i heard he ate your bitch ass in a battle along with winnie tha pooh/
i heard ur girls gonna beat your ass and im thankin her 2/
she said shes gonna leave your eye black and blue/
i can make your who cliqe crack a dozen of ways/
and i can make you head crack like a dozen of eggs/
dont step off third man u better watch your base/
u aint even lost your mind dawg u lost your face/
u tryed catchin up to me and lost your place/
he tryed runnin this site and lost the race/
its all jokes but its fun makin u choke/
can u handle my weed, but better yet can u handle my gun smoke?/
i already let loose so bite me/
im not bruce i got the power cuz im ALMITE-E/
u try and knock my style and try breakin this automatic habit/
so killa just call it a day and walk that 8 mile road with rabbit/

west nile- a virus that spreaded by misquitoes a couple years back in pittsburgh.



votes

[AlMitE]

any votes???

[shinoda]

Killa Jones
I'll Leave Your Ear's Ringing Like A Non-Stop Telephone
It'll Even Effect Your Seeing, Left Blind By Killa, Cant Find His Way Home

random punches... imagery/metaphors

Your Left Shell Shock, Can't Move, Like Chewing Gum Stuck To Your Shoe
Im Left With A Bed To Rock, With Your Paraplegic Mum Who Cant Move

haha@paraplegic... oh I said somethin like that to Infinitee live once :D
Um... two punches and metas again

Your Left On Cruthches, You'll Be Gliding With One Sock ON
Hob Along, Fuck It Im Gonna Break The Other One

Threat... hm

You So Dumb, First Time You Seen A Cunt You Thought It Was A Credit Card Swipe
Throwing Heavy Punches To Your Chest Leaving You Without a Life

Random ... took a while to click, nice punch

Blood,Trickling, From Your Nose, Blood Drop Splat's On The Floor
Then I Put Your Face To The Kurb And Say Bite Somemore

ha weird

You Just Like An Egg, Almite, Coz You Yellow Inside
Praying At Night before you Log Of, Wishing We Dont Collide

filler...punch?

You Remind Me Of A Bottle Of Pop But With The Fizz Let Out
Flow As Flat As Fuck, Not You Or Your Crew Could Even Win This Bout

haha punch

Your Going, Going, Gone, Like The Price In A Sale
You Aint Even Gonna Spit,Ch-Choke, Put In Lyrical Jail

lol (I think)... punch meta

Ill Throw Punches To Your Face Leaving You With A Fat Lip
Now Your Lips Are Like Lesley Ash, So You Can Go Suck A Phat Dick

punch meta

Your Sour Like Milk And I Aint The Pussy To Drink It
Gone Of And Awful, I'm Talking Bout Your Style, Why'd Do You Even Spit It?

punch meta

I'll Whoop You Arse So Bad, It'll Be Left With A Bar-Code
Dont Cry, You Bitch Now You Know Killa Got A Bar-D-Mode.

bar-d-mode??? wha

Your Spit's Are So Dead I Need Pro Plus Just To Read It
Your The Type Of Person That'll Start So Many Times After You'd Have Delete'd It.

didn't really work as a multi, aight punch

My Effects Are Like Drugs, Leaving You Freaked Out But Buzzing
Your Spraying Shit Bout My Moves, You'd Put on My T-Shirt Just To Say Your Thugging.

not really a punch and flowed horribly

I Would Of Killed Off Your Whole Crew, Had They Been Here
This Is Just A Little Freestyle And You Already Fear

flow off again... threat filler

If You Want To Go More, We'll Go Extra Rounds
Didn't Even Say Shit When I Spat Sound's

assonance

Ripped You In Audio, Now Im Killing The Text
Fuck Almite, Band News And the Rest(Rhyme Effect)

nice closer

6/10

Almite
u dont wanna fuck with me dawg i stay rappin and clappin/
im the type thatyll show up at the crime scene like "what happened"/

um... kinda like you didn't commit it cause you were at home on eminem.net trying to vote for yourself?

i'll bust yo ass and yell "someody just got shot here"/
cuz when the cops get here, i play like i just got here/*rymed shot with got*

you don't need to point out that shot n got rhyme... I passed kindergarten. doesn't really work. no punches, just a story

hah how u like that killa j i just took your style/
the internet gangstyle that gets me sicker than west nile/

nope... not really great... though explains the retarded line above

it looks like killa must be jonesin fo a loss/
dont u know that i be stingin these rappers like a wasp/

nice... personal on the name and riding stingers dick

killa recordz dawg you'll all lose/
cuz u make netgansta nursery rymes like a thug dr suess/

dr suess lines suck

except dr suess is more gangsta than you/
i heard he ate your bitch ass in a battle along with winnie tha pooh/

Why why why

i heard ur girls gonna beat your ass and im thankin her 2/
she said shes gonna leave your eye black and blue/

nope

i can make your who cliqe crack a dozen of ways/
and i can make you head crack like a dozen of eggs/

ways... eggs... how does that rhyme

dont step off third man u better watch your base/
u aint even lost your mind dawg u lost your face/

um. ok

u tryed catchin up to me and lost your place/
he tryed runnin this site and lost the race/

riight

its all jokes but its fun makin u choke/
can u handle my weed, but better yet can u handle my gun smoke?/

gun smoke... stop trying to force badflowing multies

i already let loose so bite me/
im not bruce i got the power cuz im ALMITE-E/

nice line... best you've dropped

u try and knock my style and try breakin this automatic habit/
so killa just call it a day and walk that 8 mile road with rabbit/

groupie :P

.05/10


west nile- a virus that spreaded by misquitoes a couple years back in pittsburgh.


Killa won

[AlMitE]

whatever 1-0

[RipShit]

Killa Jones
I'll Leave Your Ear's Ringing Like A Non-Stop Telephone
It'll Even Effect Your Seeing, Left Blind By Killa, Cant Find His Way Home

Decent intro

Your Left Shell Shock, Can't Move, Like Chewing Gum Stuck To Your Shoe
Im Left With A Bed To Rock, With Your Paraplegic Mum Who Cant Move

Metaphor, punch

Your Left On Cruthches, You'll Be Gliding With One Sock ON
Hob Along, Fuck It Im Gonna Break The Other One

Threatening you'll break his leg... came off as a filler to me.

You So Dumb, First Time You Seen A Cunt You Thought It Was A Credit Card Swipe
Throwing Heavy Punches To Your Chest Leaving You Without a Life

Punch, nice line

Blood,Trickling, From Your Nose, Blood Drop Splat's On The Floor
Then I Put Your Face To The Kurb And Say Bite Somemore

Filler

You Just Like An Egg, Almite, Coz You Yellow Inside
Praying At Night before you Log Of, Wishing We Dont Collide

Punch, like the first line, yellow meanin he be afraid

You Remind Me Of A Bottle Of Pop But With The Fizz Let Out
Flow As Flat As Fuck, Not You Or Your Crew Could Even Win This Bout

haha, best bar you had.

Your Going, Going, Gone, Like The Price In A Sale
You Aint Even Gonna Spit,Ch-Choke, Put In Lyrical Jail

Punch

Ill Throw Punches To Your Face Leaving You With A Fat Lip
Now Your Lips Are Like Lesley Ash, So You Can Go Suck A Phat Dick

Punch, metaphor

Your Sour Like Milk And I Aint The Pussy To Drink It
Gone Of And Awful, I'm Talking Bout Your Style, Why'd Do You Even Spit It?

Metaphor, 'nother punch.

I'll Whoop You Arse So Bad, It'll Be Left With A Bar-Code
Dont Cry, You Bitch Now You Know Killa Got A Bar-D-Mode.

Don't like this line, and what the hell is a bar-d-mode.

Your Spit's Are So Dead I Need Pro Plus Just To Read It
Your The Type Of Person That'll Start So Many Times After You'd Have Delete'd It.

Punch, but came off weak.

My Effects Are Like Drugs, Leaving You Freaked Out But Buzzing
Your Spraying Shit Bout My Moves, You'd Put on My T-Shirt Just To Say Your Thugging.

Another punch, bad flow on this bar though.

I Would Of Killed Off Your Whole Crew, Had They Been Here
This Is Just A Little Freestyle And You Already Fear

Filler, didn't need to be in here.

If You Want To Go More, We'll Go Extra Rounds
Didn't Even Say Shit When I Spat Sound's

Another filler.

Ripped You In Audio, Now Im Killing The Text
Fuck Almite, Band News And the Rest(Rhyme Effect)

Ok close, bad flow.

7.5/10

Almite
u dont wanna with me dawg i stay rappin and clappin/
im the type thatyll show up at the crime scene like "what happened"/

Bad opening. Doesn't even make sense.

i'll bust yo ass and yell "someody just got shot here"/
cuz when the cops get here, i play like i just got here/*rymed shot with got*

Take it you busted a lotta ass in your time huh?

hah how u like that killa j i just took your style/
the internet gangstyle that gets me sicker than west nile/

Musta missed where he said he would shoot you. Guess a punch in some way, since you said he makes you sick?

it looks like killa must be jonesin fo a loss/
dont u know that i be stingin these rappers like a wasp/

Filler.

killa recordz dawg you'll all lose/
cuz u make netgansta nursery rymes like a thug dr suess/

Bad flow. Weak punch.

except dr suess is more gangsta than you/
i heard he ate your ass in a battle along with winnie tha pooh/

Flows off again. Punch.

i heard ur girls gonna beat your ass and im thankin her 2/
she said shes gonna leave your eye black and blue/

Weak personal.

i can make your who cliqe crack a dozen of ways/
and i can make you head crack like a dozen of eggs/

Doesn't rhyme, therefore, bad bar.

dont step off third man u better watch your base/
u aint even lost your mind dawg u lost your face/

Filler.

u tryed catchin up to me and lost your place/
he tryed runnin this site and lost the race/

Didn't happen.

its all jokes but its fun makin u choke/
can u handle my weed, but better yet can u handle my gun smoke?/

How'd he choke if he spit first?

i already let loose so bite me/
im not bruce i got the power cuz im ALMITE-E/

This line has been overused. Seen it done with you at least 10 times.

u try and knock my style and try breakin this automatic habit/
so killa just call it a day and walk that 8 mile road with rabbit/

Decent close.

4/10

Killa Jones gets my vote. He's on a different level then you, more punches, stronger punches, more metas, all around better.

[AlMitE]

no im not counting that cuz thats straight hate vote. sure he broke it down but ways and eggs do ryme (your just takin that from shinoda). no theres alot more just dont feel like explaining it. dont count

still 1-0.

im not bein a sore loser im just sayin because if maks vote didnt count in bad news's battle....no its bullshit...no dont count.

1-0

[RipShit]

Thats straight hate vote? what the fuck, haha. I even gave you props on some of your lines. And, eggs and ways do not rhyme, even if you rap it in audio, they dont rhyme man. Killa Jones killed you in this battle, but whatever man.

[AlMitE]

Thats straight hate vote? what the fuck, haha. I even gave you props on some of your lines. And, eggs and ways do not rhyme, even if you rap it in audio, they dont rhyme man. Killa Jones killed you in this battle, but whatever man.

sure u gave me props on some lines....to hide the fact that its a straight hate vote. if u woulda been like everything sucks then everone coulda pointed it out. whatever about him killin me in this battle its ripshit...come on its ripshit...doesnt really mean much no more posts after this this is a battle ripshit.

sry bout that madchild or whoever cares i had to clear that up right quick.

[shinoda]

2-0
eggs and ways DOn'T rhyme at all. Record it and tell me how

[AlMitE]

fuck you pip-ler i'll do whatever i want u fucking bitch. no it doesnt count. hate vote. u may go to hell now

[shinoda]

Uh huh, you're banned and it wasn't even a hate vote. You make people hate you by being this stupid, you know that?

[open_mic]

Killa wins, 3-0 KO i dont think i even need to explain it

[madchild]

Killa wins, 3-0 KO i dont think i even need to explain it

Um actually you do. Don't do this again. Vote not counted.

[Killa Jones]

To Shinoda
The bite some more line if u dont get it watch american history X

[shinoda]

Say what?

[Killa Jones]

The film american histroy x
and in your bar by bar break down u said u didnt understand just explaining like

[shinoda]

OH ok cool

[Killa Jones]

ne more votes or do i win coz hes banned?

[madchild]

ne more votes or do i win coz hes banned?

It's still open for votes. Win legit.

2-0 for Killa Jones.

More Votes Needed!

[Eluzion]

Do I have to break this down by bar? If so..PM me and i'll comeback and do it, if not..

Consistency/Structure: Killa Jones
Creativity: Killa Jones
Enjoyable: Killa Jones
Flow: Killa Jones
Metaphors: Killa Jones
Multies: Almite
Personal: Killa Jones
Punches: Killa Jones
Vocabulary: Killa Jones
Wordplay: Killa Jones

Overall: Killa Jones

[madchild]

CLOSED Killa Jones wins by KO (3-0).

P.S. - Since it was in my best move not to vote on this battle, I still read Almites' verse and found it rather good in most parts. He got side-tracked in a few spots and got sloppy. It's a shame, he couldn't behave in a reasonable manner. :rolleyes: