mako vs. CookiezNCream20 (3-0) KO

[mako]

no bar limit
first to 5, 3-0 k.o.

links to my votes...

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=4223&page=2&pp=10
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=4277&page=1&pp=10

[mako]

Build n destroy like a game of "tetris" Exist in my own world you cant "get this"/
Up and comin, I'm on everybodys "threat list" I choke cream throat like a "tight necklace"//

Straight up I might slap a "dork"/ For playing the cornball role better than Michael Rappa"port"//
You fail cause I'm good, breaking off a "true geek (20=twenty)"/ Your tales from the hood faker than a horror "movie"//
This kid's is fake....so I’d "told you"/ I'm a john Edwards this cat to death help him "cross over"//
I’m Enough Of Man/ To Crumble A Coo"kie"/ But You So Little To "Me".
You get Blown Away From A "Gust" of the "Dust" on my Fan/ I will stop your dreams and beat cents (sense) into your "ass"/ till you shit like a god damn slot machine really "fast"//

Cookie Flow Couldn’t Touch Most Or Any Lines Of "Mine"/ Fragment His Spine Punching Through His Chest and Wrinkling The Fabric of "Time"//
Fuck a Teflon, Leave your chest "gone", cause my goons got more pumps than "Exxon"//

my punch lines crush minds cookie I'm bout to change your "faith"/ fuck thinking outside the box u need to change the "shape"//
c'mon, cookie don't want to go against me on this "rap shit"/ I put his lyrics under pressure like thongs on a "fat chick"//

son you "jock me"/ like fags looking at Ashanti you dwell on the "cock piece"//
Ask your slut I'm drilling the "hole"/ according to her, your cock the only 9 millimeters you "hold"//
I’m stomping` Cookie n Cream, Shooting` "Baskets"/ while your future looking towards the losers "bracket"// But I could beat any man "born", Elite 4 like Ben Wallace/ Cookiez weaker than Keith Van "Horn"//

[CookiezNCream20]

I can't believe I got this kid thinkin he can hang with me
I'm the best bitch jus like Muhammed Ali
My wordz go float together like a butterfly but sting like a Bee
I'm the best in the bussiness kid wake up and u'll see
Itz funny how you think you can hang with this thatz jus a Dream
To even be close to bein good as ur ol boy Cookiez&Cream
Your wardrobe for a fag but mine is stylin wit the gangsta lean
I don't see how everyy1 can hate me, and expect me not to be mean
And where did u eva get the thought that i say i was from the hood
I sayd i'm from the suburbs man i think you jus misunderstood
Me for one of those kidz who jus tries to be hood
But i do get sick and tired of people tellin me to act like a white man should
And i think i've finally figured out why ur rhymes are always so lame
It's simply because like the tin man u don't have a fuckin brain*
And you tried to scare me like i'll back down from this shit in the start
You're good as long as u winnin, but ur like the lion and got no fuckin heart*
You might as well quit kid because you have jus been dis owned
So you can jus be like Dorathy and say that there is no place like home


the *s are references to the Wizard of OZ if no1 caught it

[child prodigy]

Consistency/Structure: CookiezNCream (kept good structure. mako and CookiezNCream both had a certain amount of consistency.)
Creativity: mako
Enjoyable: mako
Flow: mako (structure a little off but when it's read, flows well.)
Metaphors: CookiezNcream (Wizrd of Oz thing. although it's more of an allusion.)
Multies: mako
Personal: CookiezNCream (none were very visible from either verses.)
Punches: Mako (for multies and wordplay) Both verses were quite funny.
Vocabulary: mako (but both sides were pretty simple.)
Wordplay: mako

Overall: mako

- I know you could do better CookiezNCream. -

[$tingeR]

Consistency/Structure: c and c
Creativity: mako
Enjoyable: mako
Flow: mako i think
Metaphors: mako
Multies: mako
Personal: mako
Punches: mako
Vocabulary: hmm not much on display i say mako though
Wordplay: mako...but i didnt much of it.

its unanimours...mako gets this easily. c and c i know u can do a lot better. where were the punches?

[Killa Jones]

Consistency/Structure:mako
Creativity: mako
Enjoyable: mako
Flow: mako
Metaphors: CookiezNcream
Multies: mako
Personal: CookiezNCream
Punches: Mako
Vocabulary: mako
Wordplay: mako

overall: mako

[madchild]

CLOSED mako wins by KO (3-0).