C martin [Winner] vs.Switch [DQ'ed] Part 2 (rematch)

[c martin]

yo this time bring all u got
because ull need it after my ak gets cocked
u what the fuck u talkin bout beefs quit cryin
after i shoot u i promise u will be diein
yo u pussy want another shot
afte i kill u ill bury u in salems lot
im givin it all that iv got
switch i think u actually tried
2 bad after the battle i shot and u died
i let all ur gay sex orgys slip and slide
i dont think u came here 2 battle just to dick ride
read this hole thing u might learn sumtin
i seen u in the fab 5 were u pickin out close nah u were prolly fuckin
ya i know ur gay cuz u were wit some gays dick suckin

[Switch]

yo this time bring all u got
because ull need it after my ak gets cocked
u what the fuck u talkin bout beefs quit cryin
after i shoot u i promise u will be diein
yo u pussy want another shot
afte i kill u ill bury u in salems lot
im givin it all that iv got
switch i think u actually tried
2 bad after the battle i shot and u died
i let all ur gay sex orgys slip and slide
i dont think u came here 2 battle just to dick ride
read this hole thing u might learn sumtin
i seen u in the fab 5 were u pickin out close nah u were prolly fuckin
ya i know ur gay cuz u were wit some gays dick suckin

Okay Hold up....

Alright for one kid do you even know what an orgy is/
I know you've never had one but me and your mom did//
I guess im a pussy cause I can actually hit the spot/
Dog when you gonna learn quit fucking your balls an't even droped//
Through me in salems lot vampires love freash blood/
They an't after me they after this wanna be thug//
Hommie tell me something how do you claim you pop gunz/
Your two young no way you can own one//
You say every thing get popped/
But the only thing around you that get dropped//
Is the floor when your overweight mom falls and does a belly flops/
Yo she's taking of her swim suit tell that fat hoe I said stop//..laughs
You said multible times that Im dead/
Dumb ass maby you the punk that got laid out instead//
Why dont you ever bring up your age still you know you still suck/
Reading through them rymes I guess Im gay and Im think what the //
You say shit about pussy but you never exsperianced the cotton patch/
I see you'll ass talkin about popping me witha gat Im watting for that//
I still live to this day/
Still talk shit 's but yet Im not straight//
Dog he claims Im gay Im thinking at ht what he would like to do to me/
How the hell can you say shit dog this eleven year old an't even hit pubeity//
Dog IM out

[RipShit]

haha, ok.... rinse... and repeat

Consistency/Structure: Switch
Creativity: C martin
Enjoyable: C martin
Flow: Switch
Metaphors: none
Multies: C martin
Personal: C martin
Punches: Switch
Vocabulary: weak vocab on both
Wordplay: none
Overall: C martin

C Martin - 5
Switch - 3

Final Vote - C martin

Switch, have a nice day. My favorite line was where you said you weren't straight, that was very creative.... haha

[Switch]

You have to vote section by section according to madchild...

[RipShit]

No you don't, have you actually read the battle rules? Here is what Madchild said -

From now on, you must vote by bar-by-bar breakdown unless you can understand the categories (cause you clearly don't).

I am very clear with what the categories mean, so therefore, I voted by category.

[Eluzion]

Consistency/Structure: Switch
Creativity: Switch
Enjoyable: Switch
Flow: Switch
Metaphors: -
Multies: C martin
Personal: Switch
Punches: Switch
Vocabulary: -
Wordplay: Switch

Overall: Switch

Switch I you killed that shit man.

[madchild]

Battlers: You must get your 2 links up for voting.

C Martin - If there are no battles available for you to vote in (since you may have already voted in them), you may be excused. But make sure you've voted in all the battles waiting for votes.

[jigga_man]

Bar Structure:Switch
Creativity:Switch
Enjoyable:C Martin
Flow:Switch
Metaphors:
Multies:C Martin
Personal:C Martin
Punches:Switch
Vocabulary:Switch
Wordplay:Switch

Switch-6
C Martin-3

Vote-Switch

Peace

[Switch]

Battlers: You must get your 2 links up for voting.

C Martin - If there are no battles available for you to vote in (since you may have already voted in them), you may be excused. But make sure you've voted in all the battles waiting for votes.

Alright I havnt voted on any thing yet...

That 2-1 keep it going

[c martin]

madchild, i said same rules last time the rules were 14-16 lines he went way over the limit

[c martin]

First to five wins
3 to 0 K.O
10 to 15 lines
no Dick rydin votes

those were the rules i called same rules and he wrote like 20 lines man that aint fair

[SmithNWessy]

Consistency/Structure: Switch was the better
Creativity: Switch
Enjoyable: Switch
Flow: Switch
Metaphors: none- Salem's lot...but I think Eminem has said that before
Multies: they were hard to tie into any kinda flow, but Switch has them there.
Personal: Switch...C Martin is pretty mean but maybe you'll write better once your balls drop...lol
Punches: Switch
Vocabulary: no abundance of sophisticated terms for either party
Wordplay: no puns, metaphors, hidden meanings, couldn't find any...point them out if i missed them.
Overall: Switch

C Martin! I think your getting nervous, the only dickridin' vote came from Ripshit in my opinion...I think your verse was very poorly written...you called him gay and said you were going to shot him, and you were going to shoot him again...with what? NO elaboration, no structure, no rhythm, just ugh...all I can say is keep tryin' and hopefully you'll get better. Cleverness is the key...but what do I know...I've battled twice and lost both of 'em, right? Trust me...

Switch you could have done better structure-wise, your use for wordplay was sorta weak...leading into the Salem's lot line was done fairly well... "rhyme-wise"...i notice your "Switching"..no pun intended....you won this battle. Not too bad though.
S-N-W

[madchild]

CLOSED until I get the 2 links (read the battle rules, it's been > 24hrs) and PM about what you want to do about these rules. You battlers need to clarify them each round better, so they are clear to everyone (including me, since I'm not running around looking for them).

[madchild]

CLOSED C Martin wins by DQ. I gave Switch ample opportunity to PM me 2 links, he acknowledged my request in an earlier post, but never fulfilled it. Plus he didn't stick to the rules of the battle.