Shinoda vs. Child Prodigy (5-2)

[child prodigy]

Rules & Regulations as quoted by Shinoda

"2 rounds, you're startin it. voting on categories, no bar limit... don't really need any other rules. Set it up when you can."


My Links:

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=4017&page=2&pp=10 (http://)

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Shinoda, no offense but i think your mind's gone/
We both know you lost as soon as you signed on.
What? You couldn't make it for real so you moderate posts?
Or that no label gave you a deal so you're a rap forum host.
It's a rhetorical question, no need to answer back/
Even if it weren't you know you wouldn't answer that.
Now before you lay a verse down, don't say i can't take it/
Or try to take things out on me since you can't make it.
Moderator is just a title. It's nothing that's sacred/
Don't think you're so great when you let your bitter ass fake it.
I know your strategy: you pinkslip anyone that opposes you/
Not everything you say is what a rapper's supposed to do!
I know you're trying to be nice by giving advice/
But everytime you post some it's like you're giving it twice.
You just use multies as a filler to win the catagory/
But after these lines, i'm taking away your glory.
You can hardly maintain or regain...
Or even attain from the pain you try to sustain
We haven't even fought and i can see you complain.
Face the facts boy I’ve got you going insane.
Don't even lay a verse, you’ve already been slain.
If only you could get up, I would do it again….

:p - no beef. just chicken - :p


and about the edit: i was about to add something but got hungry so i went out to get something to eat. but despite that you can use this excuse to your advantage...you'll need all the help you can get.

[child prodigy]

sorry. this is the link. (found out the other didin't work)

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=4017 (http://)

[shinoda]

gone/

Not in the Nsync state, I was with my Girlfriend
It's Gonna Be Me getting the win In The End

What? You couldn't make it for real so you moderate posts?
Or that no label gave you a deal so you're a rap forum host.

I chose to join the site to improve myself verbally
I ain't my fault you sold yourself commercially
Too many kids wishin that they'd heard of me
So they had REAL personals to use when they're versing me

It's a rhetorical question, no need to answer back/
Even if it weren't you know you wouldn't answer that.

Fact or fiction, your diction's not actual truth
Your talents like cutlery in the Matrix, "there is no spoon"

Now before you lay a verse down, don't say i can't take it/
Or try to take things out on me since you can't make it.

I wouldn't bother wasting time on a fake as wack as you, kid
Haste got you thinkin you won't lose though your stupid
Look before you leap, prepare before you step
Don't crawl if you're crossin my path, you'll get wrecked

Moderator is just a title. It's nothing that's sacred/
Don't think you're so great when you let your bitter ass fake it.

If it's just a title, whats your obsession, second guessin
Wishin this was your situation, it's blatant
Envious like the colour of fruit unriped
Your raps aren't ready, come back when they've heightened

I know your strategy: you pinkslip anyone that opposes you/
Not everything you say is what a rapper's supposed to do!

I've never pinkslipped a person in my life, that's either 2 Good
Young Legend, Rappone or someone else, you should
Just put effort into research and not tell me what you think's true
Because, we know, your hollow lies are easy to see through

I know you're trying to be nice by giving advice/
But everytime you post some it's like you're giving it twice.

Giving what twice, advice and knowledge, education
Tellin people how to develop, instructing elevation
Obvious to me you didn't read or learn how to
Instead you tried ignoring, look where that found you
You "keep on fallin"... and I ain't talkin about love
Even if I were the floor, I'd be above

You just use multies as a filler to win the catagory/
But after these lines, i'm taking away your glory.

Um... want me to quote you and your above use of nice advice twice slice the lice whilst I spice it up and splice the wise like my nickname's smart guy?

Guess not... as you've provided more below... you know, your usual position

You can hardly maintain or regain...
Or even attain from the pain you try to sustain
We haven't even fought and i can see you complain.
Face the facts boy I’ve got you going insane.

That was lame, my reign is something you can't reach
Why waste multies if you couldn't use them in usual speach
How long have you spent trying to find a word to match that approach
You're useless, like leavin the weed and straight blazin the roach

Don't even lay a verse, you’ve already been slain.
If only you could get up, I would do it again….

Hahaha, what was that?

You're a wannabe Madchild, hence how your name starts
And if you need real punches, try dissing the band Linkin Park
Or maybe diss me, my real name's Jon.
I'm a Moderator because of the fact that I'm strong
My mind's capable of making decisions properly
My leisure layout means I've got the means to be stopping these
I haven't pinkslipped, so your accuracy's so off
And if you really think I put effort in this, you're wrong...

Give me a DECENT battle. I'm not putting thought into anything if you bring shit like this.

[shinoda]

My links are tournament zone battles.

[child prodigy]

Unlike you i don't feed off old material like a vulture/
Feeding off rhymes hurts one's mind and their culture.
Although your efforts were valiant you weren't a challenge/
You're lost in the misconception that you ever had talent.
You lack serious conscience all i read is lyrical nonsense
Which explains why you have such rotten responses.
I can feed off rhymes too but i've already been fed/
All you REALLY do is invert everything that I've said.
Great show of sportsmanship, now who is lying?
Your verse would be nothing without my lyrics supplying.
You had to break down my verse to further understand it/
Your comprehension must be slow: left in how you planned it.
My rhymes aren't useless, you're just too sad to face it/
Your words are tasteless becasue you copy and paste it.
But you like to call it something else right, a keystyle?/
Meanwhile your lack of perception makes me smile.
You misunderstand what i'm telling you, let me spell for you/
Because apparantly you don't know what the hell to do.
So you don't pinkslip but you also made a mistake inadvertantly/
Tell me, when have i EVER sold myself out commercially?
Excuse me but this whole concept is new, you see.
I never encountered a rapper that lacked enginuity/
When they failed to mention what they'd do to me.
I have a hard time believing your word and it's meaning/
Than your mother had conceiving your turd-ass from being.
Thanks for the advice it shows that you care for me/
I'm glad that you're there for me, but this isn't therapy.
Just admit that i have pinned down and scared of me.
Deny all you like, the truth that i bring to the table/
I see you're unstable and not capable to live up to your label.
Super whatever, keep telling yourself things but a dream/
Anything for your ego or to higher your self-esteem.
Madchild and Child Prodigy may share similarities
But come on, is that line really apparant to me?
Unlike others, i go beyond Linkin Park parodies.
Well Jon, as much as i'd like to further comment you/
Your lyrics are already a joke, I though it was comic view.
Well, until next time you overrated freak/
Maybe you're the one to look before you leap.

[shinoda]

Only thing you've got locked's your chastity belt
Resembling Madchild means I'm beating you as well
If only one person takes you out of this game
Jon'll be the name to tame your lyrics, so refrain
From trying to attain my reign, one you can't gain
You couldn't wane it let alone inflict some pain
You've got nothing to lose, which is why I quoted you
To point out the shitness I had to read through
Dont' get confused by my status, save us from boredom
I'm a firestarter who burns you like U's album
Have you Confessing the only swing you've got is sexuality
No punches could connect, you can't touch my mortality
I remove immorality, it should be wrong to be that wack
Like Kobe and Michael Jackson, you're simply mismatched
Quit changin, it's blatant your failing
Like a comedian out of jokes, who sits down explaining
Child Prostitute, my parodies aren't even existing
The falseness of you holds me back from resisting
It's too tempting to mention how many times sections
Are dedicated to members who lived in detention
And never attended education to face this
So bring along a commentary like soccer critics
I disperse of MC's like evaporating water
Condensing all these lines, like how you ought-ta

Shouldn't really worry, cause this hasn't been a fight
Open it for votes, I'll check back later tonight

Yo, good spit. Ain't really feelin to respond to it, got lots of work / sleep, so you can accept this verse or I'll go write you a decent one later on if work ends. Up to you. Otherwise, open for votes.

[Deagle50]

Consistency/Structure: shinoda
Creativity: child
Enjoyable: shinoda
Flow: shinoda
Metaphors: shinoda
Multies: shinoda
Personal: child
Punches: child
Vocabulary: child
Wordplay: shinoda

Overall: shinoda


You lack serious conscience all i read is lyrical nonsense
Which explains why you have such rotten responses
had a little case of eminem?

[Killa Jones]

Shin Fav Line :- Fact or fiction, your diction's not actual truth
Your talents like cutlery in the Matrix, "there is no spoon"


Consistency/Structure: shinoda
Creativity: shinoda
Enjoyable: shinoda
Flow: shinoda
Metaphors: shinoda
Multies: shinoda
Personal: child
Punches: shinoda
Vocabulary: child
Wordplay: shinoda

Overall: shinoda

[SmithNWessy]

Thank you for battling..both of you...Shinoda and Child Prodigy
I liked both of them...this is the first battle I've read that all 4 verses were very good...I thought Mad Child came with it....I thought Shinoda hit back just as hard, excellent flow, structure, all that shit...I guess this vote doesn't count cuz I'm considering it a tie...I liked both of 'em...just wanted to let you two know...Im taking notes......yo, CP i liked the therapy line! S-N-W

*yeh Killa said it..the spoon line was dope as hell too

[child prodigy]

Like all the rappers i encounter, i respect them and thank them for giving me more experience, and you're no different. :worship: No matter the outcome of THIS battle, it's not over yet. YOu'll be certain to hear from me again. Good battle. Until next time.

[madchild]

...I thought Mad Child came with it....

Sorry for the freepost, but was I even in this battle? It's good I make my presense known without even dropping a word.

[SmithNWessy]

lol...oh shit...my bad....Child Prodigy*...way to catch that one...yall knew what i meant....lol

[Rappone]

Consistency/Structure: shinoda
Creativity: Madchild
Enjoyable: Madchild
Flow: shinoda
Metaphors: shinoda
Multies: shinoda
Personal: Madchild
Punches: Madchild
Vocabulary: Madchild
Wordplay: shinoda
5-5 tie :D, woopth I mean I think the more importent categz are for Child.

Maddie gets my vote.

[child prodigy]

i hope you realize it was me in the battle and not madchild unless it was some sort of sarcasm or satire for the mistake that SmithNWessey made. but i won't rant since i know it's me that you mean.

You're right madchild, you have such an influence that people actually vote for you when you're not in the battle (although mentioned in it)... :worship:


hahahahahahhahahaha

[shinoda]

Did you even read this? Madchild wasn't in this battle dumbass.

[madchild]

So, that's what: Shinoda: 2 Child Prodigy: 0 Madchild: 2? I'm doing pretty good for not even laying a word.

[Rappone]

LMFAOOOOOOOOOOOO I messed up with the names, too many children, sorry, plus madchild posted the brakedown shit right after the battle messed me up even mo when I read it, sorry, I mean child pordiggy

[shinoda]

lol@ the randomness

[child prodigy]

sorry for the delay.

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=4503

anymore votes? lay them down.

[-MaKaVeLi-]

Consistency/Structure: child
Creativity: child
Enjoyable: child
Flow: child
Metaphors: shinoda
Multies: shinoda
Personal: child
Punches: child
Vocabulary: child
Wordplay: shinoda

Vote - Child Prodigy

[Eluzion]

Consistency/Structure: Shin
Creativity: Shin
Enjoyable: Child
Flow: Shin
Metaphors: Shin
Multies: Shin
Personal: Child
Punches: Child
Vocabulary: Shin
Wordplay: Shin

Vote - Shinoda

[shinoda]

3-2 shinoda. uppin

[AlMitE]

Consistency/Structure: Shin
Creativity: Shin
Enjoyable: Child
Flow: Shin
Metaphors: Shin
Multies: Shin
Personal: Child
Punches: Child
Vocabulary: Shin
Wordplay: Child

Vote - Shinoda

[shinoda]

4-2, Uppin

[child prodigy]

so shinoda, just want to know how long we keep the votes open for, your call...

PM me or just post the outcome here.

if i don't beat you this time, i can always beat you next time. :D



peace.

[shinoda]

They can stay open for however long. Don't mind

[child prodigy]

i don't mind either.

i guess whenever/whatever you and madchild decide to close it.

until then: i guess...

VOTES ANYONE?

[jigga_man]

Consistency/Structure:shinoda
Creativity:Child
Enjoyable:Child
Flow: shinoda
Metaphors: shinoda
Multies: shinoda
Personal:Child
Punches:Child
Vocabulary:shinoda
Wordplay: shinoda

Child-4

Shinoda-6

Vote-Shinoda

Peace

[shinoda]

5-2 closed (shinoda wins)

[madchild]

CLOSED Shinoda wins 5-2.

Battles stay open until they are finished on by the callout rules. Only circumstance that they will be closed is when someone gets DQ'ed or links aren't dropped.