Rappone vs. Shinoda Part 3 (0-5) KO

[Rappone]

Okay here are the rules

NO HATE VOTES, NO DICKRIDING, NO FEEDING SINCE IT IS A ONE ROUND BATTLE.

Sorry bout no feeding but it aint fair sice ud be the only one feedin off since I gotta spit firs

12 BARZ MAX, 6 BARZ MIN

Thats very valid and nice ^^

ONE ROUND BATTLE, FIVE VOTES NO MATTER WHAT. 5-0 KO not 3-0

Yeah well, I start => My rules ;)

I Will Post my verse TOMMorow ASAP since I aint got much tiime AND I might not be able, that way just disqualify me or halt the battle til I post since were hoppin away from here.

MY LINX WILL BE POSTED WITH MY VERSE.

FUCK YOU

Peece.

[shinoda]

Ha, aight those rules are fine. If there's no feeding it doesn't matter who goes first. If I feel like writing up a verse I'll write something soon. Voting on categories or bar by bar only though.

[Rappone]

LMAO yo man errr I wasnt able to post today many ppl swarmin around my head so Ill post on tuesday sorry man Peaze Out R.A.P.P.O.N.E > > > :cool:

[shinoda]

"A verse Inspired by Styles’ ingeniosity.

Your blonde because ur blonde and ur also gay
I said Your blonde because ur blonde and ur also gay,
Because you have gay hair and your blonde because god made u gay,
U’ll hafta have a new sig list when Im done with this okay?
Because your blonde because your gay and your also hay,
Come out and play shinoda is busy today,
He has to go to the barber for four hours to cut,
Hes gay because hes gay and he has blonde hair on his butt,
Hes blonde because hes gay, oh yea and hes a slut,
One day before today styles so to that your fucked"

Thanks for that email Rappone... Um... why though?

[shinoda]

The kid thinks he's livin the hard life of hiphop
Because he's logged on MSN 'n read some shit from Microsoft/
Callin criticism "beef" and ceasin friendships childishly
Only dissed my audio cause I said his voice was squeaky/
Sides with whoever he thinks'll win a situation
This guy's loyalty's miscomplacent, friendship's vacant/
It's blatant when he's hatin, votes like him not taken serious
It's like a rap battle between Eminem and Ludacris/
It's ludacrus how supersticious this kid seems to get
Thinkin if he don't diss me he'll be the worst on Em.net/
Easy to chin check, couldn't ever control a crowd
If he were Hitler, Stalin and the whole regime, proud/
Of the things he does that havent got any effect
He named his company after exerting cum straight down their necks/
Retort through spite, Exort For Life ain't ever gonna accomplish
And as I write this, let it be known, it is finished/

Has multies, some good vocab, punches, personals, creativity* referring to the control of dictators, flows well... just waiting for the votes to say my name.

[Rappone]

Haha...

Yo, Your Lack of skill is beginning to Kill My Patience
Shit, I ain't gotta insert colors for where I Instill Amazement/1
I'm an Ill Creation, and everywhere I spit I satisfy All Categories
Uniquely Collossal, You'd never notice a Dawg Ahead-of-me/2
Cz There Ain't any, and there won't be with no Competition
And voters realize I'm way ahead even if they have Low Recognition/3
Mr Shin, If you alone pick the Voters I'll still Remain Victorious
Because this verse next to yours, is Insanely Glorious/4
Yours looked distorted, Roughly held up with Little Support
Not from talent, but from dickriders, Reflectin whackness while my verse is Drippin With Thoughts/5
Yo Man, You couldn't win me if you hurled your verse at me in a Kaleid-o-scope*
With God next to you Spending your Days-in-hope/6
Yeah, My Mind works better than Sonnator Vets**
And I come with intense heat, that even your Monitor Sweats/7
Fuck it, I'm about to finish this verse, Finishing You Along
You thought your the one that's winning? Well now you know your wrong//8

*Kaleidoscope, an instrument with 6 mirrors, so if he puts the verse in a kaleidoscope it will be reflected six times IE six times the power - creativity.

**Sonnator Vets (sp?) are people that strategize crime with animals

[shinoda]

U need your links up, again, mine are up. Uppin for votes.

[Rappone]

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=56768#post56768


http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=4019&page=1



Herrrrr are my links

[shinoda]

Uppin For Votes

[Rappone]

VOTES FUCKERS. These bitches vote on the wrong battles :cool:


Category Help:

Punches: -
Personals: -
Metaphors: -
Wordplay: -
Vocab: -
Multies: -
Enjoyment: -


OVERALL: ---

[pimpchimp]

Punches: - Shin. Sorry, Rapp, you had some good stuff, but anyone knows that a Personal combined with a Punch is far more effective than a Punch alone.
Personals: - Shin, man. If you've heard Rapp's audios, you know where he's coming from.
Metaphors: - Eh, I'll give this to Rapp. He had more content over Shin (although the flow left much to be desired)
Wordplay: - Rapp again. Shin had good vocab and punches, but not too much wordplay.
Vocab: - Shin had this down. Rapp might argue that he had mad vocab in his, but for ME, most of those words are everday shit, so that's my reasoning. But Shin, you try too hard. Read a book or something - get that stuff in there NATURALLY.
Multies: - Yeah, Shin. Rapp had mutli-syllable rhyme schemes, but not too many multies.
Enjoyment: - Rapp. I enjoyed it until the middle, and then it started to crumble at the end. You BOTH had weak finishers.


OVERALL: --- By a slim margin, because both of y'all could've done... and spelled... better - I say Shin won.

[shinoda]

1-0 uppin

[Rappone]

Aight 0-1 uppin fo mo, I clearly had the multiesin every line but oh well :D

[Kruxx]

Rappone Fell Off Shinoda is God, I don't need to explain my vote. I agree with Pimpchimp basically:

Punches: - Shin. Sorry, Rapp, you had some good stuff, but anyone knows that a Personal combined with a Punch is far more effective than a Punch alone.
Personals: - Shin, man. If you've heard Rapp's audios, you know where he's coming from.
Metaphors: - Eh, I'll give this to Rapp. He had more content over Shin (although the flow left much to be desired)
Wordplay: - Rapp again. Shin had good vocab and punches, but not too much wordplay.
Vocab: - Shin had this down. Rapp might argue that he had mad vocab in his, but for ME, most of those words are everday shit, so that's my reasoning. But Shin, you try too hard. Read a book or something - get that stuff in there NATURALLY.
Multies: - Yeah, Shin. Rapp had mutli-syllable rhyme schemes, but not too many multies.
Enjoyment: - Rapp. I enjoyed it until the middle, and then it started to crumble at the end. You BOTH had weak finishers.

The only thing I disagree with is Multies and enjoyment. Rappone had multies, and I enjoyed shins rhyme more...


My vote counts.

[Rappone]

No Kruxx you fucker I wrote NO HATE VOTES so shut the fuck up and back the fuck off.

1-0 Uppin.

[shinoda]

Rappone Fell Off Shinoda is God, I don't need to explain my vote. I agree with Pimpchimp basically:



The only thing I disagree with is Multies and enjoyment. Rappone had multies, and I enjoyed shins rhyme more...


My vote counts.
LOL, *waits for anyone else to bother voting*

[child prodigy]

Too lazy to break down bar-by-bar. i'll put in comment when/where necessary.
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Punches: Shinoda. (Hard to decide since both skills varied in so many ways.)
Personals: Shinoda. Although i like Rappone's line, "Yours looked distorted, Roughly held up with Little Support
Not from talent, but from dickriders, Reflectin whackness while my verse is Drippin With Thoughts" (didn't flow too well but i liked the message that was sent. Still, Shinoda had more attacks.
Metaphors: Rappone, it seemed to be forced upon but...it got you the catagory.
Wordplay: Rappone has this. (but, also seemed forced.) Rappone had more wordplay than Shinoda, since shinoda concentrated on personals and vocab.
Vocab: I used to read a lot, so words that are seldomly heard are quite common to me. I'd say Shinoda took this. Only vocabulary that seemed complex from Rappone was "Kaleid-o-scope". It seems both of you constantly force to put complex words in just to get a vote for that catagory. But you do what you have to do, right?
Multies: Shinoda. I couldn't really find the multies that Rappone was talking about. (sorry dude.)
Enjoyment: Shinoda..although i enjoyed some hooks that Rappone delivered i have to give it to Shinoda.


Overall: Shinoda.

[shinoda]

2 - 0 uppin

[Killa Jones]

Punches: - Shinoda
Personals: - Shin
Metaphors: -Rap
Wordplay: -Shin
Vocab: -Rap
Multies: -shin
Enjoyment: -shin


OVERALL: --- Shinoda, He outsmarted Rappone with the break down by colours.

[shinoda]

3-0 uppin

[shinoda]

First to five apparently... *awaiting more*

[Eluzion]

Punches: - Shin, he had more effective, sorry Rapp.
Personals: - Shin, no explanation.
Metaphors: - Rappone, more effective.
Wordplay: - Rappone, Shin had alot of good vocab, but not a whole lot of word play.
Vocab: - Shin, you always win in this catagory.
Multies: - Shin, no explanation.
Enjoyment: -Shin, enjoyed the vocab usage and stuff.


Overall: Shinoda, but it was a good battle.

[shinoda]

Punches: - Shin, he had more effective, sorry Rapp.
Personals: - Shin, no explanation.
Metaphors: - Rappone, more effective.
Wordplay: - Rappone, Shin had alot of good vocab, but not a whole lot of word play.
Vocab: - Shin, you always win in this catagory.
Multies: - Shin, no explanation.
Enjoyment: -Shin, enjoyed the vocab usage and stuff.


Overall: Shinoda, but it was a good battle.4-0

uppin for tko

[Deagle50]

Punches: - Shinoda
Personals: - Shinoda
Metaphors: - Rappone
Wordplay: - Rappone
Vocab: - Shinoda
Multies: - Shinoda
Enjoyment: -Shinoda

Overall:Shinoda

I basically saw what what everyone else did :clap:

[shinoda]

5-0 Tko