Stitch vs. TfLaMeZ (1-5)

[TfLaMeZ]

1 verse each, no line limit, take as much time as you need to write it, usual voting rules. Alright then, you go first

here's one of my links for now, i'll get the other when more battles can be voted on

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=53135#post53135

[StitCh]

im /rockin\ no /stoppin\ the 'herb' then ill be /droppin\ these powerful 'verbs'
/overclockin\ your 'nerves' after this your gonna [fuckin] 'learn' that im [sumthin] that will kill you with only one 'word' your
a HATER' STAYIN' SPRAYED' you need to 'earn' my respect or youll get -rolled- and -thrown- in a GLADE' theres no WAY'
you will be RAIDING my lyrical SPACE' ill RAISE' my flows and ull be wishin u had better DAYZ'
ill =rollup= and bake u like a =dougnut= gettin GLAZED' my NAME' is Lil 'Stitch my lyrical sensibility
will make your body CRAVE' and 'twitch your BABE' is good when she 'licks only on the right side of my 'dick
shes horrible with her LEFT, i could LAY' there and not even ERRECT but NEXT lemme get to the other side of the REST
ur a |FAGGOT| sayin that u |HAD IT| cuz u know im the BEST but better YET ill pop u wit a TECH first pop it
in your NECK you suck like that singer named BECK now that i have earned my RESPECT your lyrics are a blur
and unheard like HEIROCLIPHICAL TEXT

[TfLaMeZ]

your text is almost as confusing to read as the sound of your audio/
you even raised the question of quits after you saw text and said you gotta-go/
what are you? the new age no show, scared to take a "mental" "mind" blow//
dont worry man, i wont embarrass you too bad, you claimin skills you dont have/
pretty soon we'll see a "big fake wanna be writing" fad..ashame, thats to bad//
you've made more mistakes then michael jackson's had surgeries/
so dont think your hurtin me, this is obserd you see, all the purgeries//
less mental capacity then head room in deep water sumarines/
you need to reconsider words before you get to judging me//
so many fakes, and so little time to point em' out to diss you/
my jabs and punches are direct, they'll definately never miss you//
you've just been "owned" as many on here would refer to it/
cuz i surpassed the wall your trying to make, went right through it//
the new center of jokes, people break down every word you spoke/
scared to choke, rememberin the day your conscience finally broke//
you'll never escape the whole you just dug out for yourself/
your just dust collecting over time on this giant book self//
you serve no purpose, consider joining the circus////

EDIT
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=53989#post53989

[shinoda]

Multies and wordplay go to stitch
flow to tflamez although a little slow
enjoyment stitch
ease of reading? tflamez, because what the hell is up with your lack of punctuation or anytime to stop? reading it how it's written it was over in 10 seconds
punches tflamez i felt were better e.g. more mistakes than michael jackson's had plastic surgeries, as opposed to glazed like a donut
personals Tflamez spoke of audio as well... so yeah, Flamez
Vocabulary - i liked hyrogliphics, although neither really used much original vocab, stuff like submarines surgery and purgery gave it to Flamez though
Metaphors:didn't see many... draw?

Overall I give it to flamez.

[NjeCt]

Flow: Stitch
Creativity: Stitch
Wordplay: Stich
Structure: Stitch
multis: Stitch
enjoyment: Stitch
punches: Stich
Personals: neither
Blah factor: flame
OVERALL VOTE: Stitch

[Killa Jones]

Flow: Stitch
Creativity: flamez
Wordplay: Stich
Structure: flamez
multis: Stitch
enjoyment: Stitch
punches: flamez
Personals: flamez
Blah factor: flame
OVERALL VOTE: flamez

[Tobias]

Flow: flamez
Creativity: flamez
Wordplay: Stich
Structure: flamez
multis: Stitch
enjoyment: flamez
punches: flamez
Personals: flamez

OVERALL VOTE: flamez

[shinoda]

3-1 first to five people, keep voting.

[bad news]

Flow: stitch
Creativity: t
Wordplay: t
Structure:
multis: t
enjoyment: t
punches: t
Personals:t
OVERALL VOTE: t flameZ

[$tingeR]

Flow: tflamez although still quite weak
Creativity: tflamez
Wordplay: stitch
Structure: tflamez (stitch your shit needs to be a bit clearer)
multis: stitch
enjoyment: tflamez
punches: tflamez
Personals: tflamez
OVERALL VOTE: t flameZ

[shinoda]

5-1 well done Flamez wins.