bwoi vs. big mann 313 (3-0) KO

[bwoi]

yo i cant do da 2 link thang so here's my verse........and i'll be away at work till sunday mane so post yours and i'll be back then........

lookie here my 1st battle and i gotta destroy a former friend/
dis is destiny like da story of Caesar and Brutus, its just without its normal end//
all da hoods u rep, whats da prob ya mom and pops cant get along/
so u move from place 2 place tryin 2 find a spot 2 call ya home//
now u an Iraqi and u rep da flag i see, u think its all forgotten/
somebody alert da authorities and check his IP please, i think i found Bin Laden//
and wit dat said, dis battles over in 10 lines as fast as it began/
now im nervous cuzz i served dis bitch, and he might get back up from da Taliban//
u comin against me shows u got a deathwish, when u respond leave ya weak shit on da shelf/
i'd tell u to go fuck yaself, but ya hands already screamin for u to go fuck wit somebody else//

[BigMann313]

boy oh bwoi this motherfucker another tonka toy
another obstacle for me to find and completely destroy

just some nigga livin in houston, sayin dont mess with texas
what am i suppose to be careful, and treat u like a new lexus*

betta think twice bout wut you sayin bout my religion
or ill have you attacked by a massive shit load of pigeons**

former friend huh bitch, it takes you 2 names just to blend
but when its ya dad, it only takes once to get u to bend***

24 years old, battlin on the net, because you never made it
neva went underground cuz you shit was neva hot, just faded ****

i only move three time to escape faggets like you
ya lost man just dont let you face turn the color blue :confused: *****

i think ya should stay at work cuz you gonna come back in tears
u ain gonna see me doing that cuz u got confused with the years ******

you got alot of shit to say but you ain got the guts to do
what you want, one thing is, i am iraqi, but i ain bow down to u ********


*hes from texas
**said shit about my religion
***he got like names, ridlo, bwoi, some others
****24 years old, kinda old to be on hear but who cares
*****i moved three times
******he said he gonna be at work alot i'll be away at work till sunday mane so post yours and i'll be back then........
******* i pray and when i do theres a poin i bow down and it ain to him

LINKS:
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=4262
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=4006

[SmithNWessy]

Bwoi oh Bwoi.....I liked it...fo sho'
Hey man, the only thing I can say about that verse that wasn't all that great...was the flow...each verse I read, I read it aloud...and honestly I kept stumblin' over the flow...you had good punches, you worked the whole Iraqi thing...and you even ended it with a funny ass punchline...i give you props...pretty good. I give it about a 7.5/10

Biggman
"I'll have you attacked by a massive shit load of pigeons!"
Thats the first time I have actually busted out laughin', that shit was funny as fuck! Mad props! However...started off hot with the tonka toy line...liked it....lexus line was ok...pigeon shit was funny...then it kinda fizzled out...overall not a bad battle though...I think your verse would be better if it wasn't so vague, that way you wouldn't have to put all of the **** at the end explaining what you meant- just my opinion, you can take it or not.....doesn't matter. Honestly I'd have to give you about a 6.5 maybe 7.

Vote is for Bwoi on this one...just barely edged it out....Good battle!

[bwoi]

preciate ya vote smit-n-wess
1-0.....lets get dis crackin.......
more votes please

[CookiezNCream20]

Creativity: bwoi
Enjoyable: bwoi
Flow: bwoi
Metaphors: big mann
Multies: big mann
Personal: bwoi
Punches: bwoi
Structure: big mann
Vocabulary: neither really
Wordplay: big mann
Overall: bwoi

[Eluzion]

Creativity: bwoi
Enjoyable: big mann
Flow: bwoi
Metaphors: big mann
Multies: big mann
Personal: bwoi
Punches: bwoi
Structure: big mann
Vocabulary: bwoi
Wordplay: bwoi

Overall: bwoi

Good battle..

[madchild]

CLOSED Waiting for Bwoi to PM me 2 links (if battles are available to vote on).