-Makaveli vs. SmithNWessy- (5-0) KO

[SmithNWessy]

Terms:
-2 verses each
-no verse limit (get your point across)
-first one to 6 votes is winner

*Since I'm new and its my first battle on here, I'll spit first...let me know if you want to change anything before I post.

[SmithNWessy]

Fuck it....rules are rules...first spit!

Theres no better opponent for me to get my feet wet
by defeating this phony "Makavelian" street vet
So you're the Don Killuminati with a 7 day theory?
Well I'm the villainous killa tauntin' the spirit I envy...
I gotcha in a frenzy cuz your friend's see that your a fake
So stop "Coming back" and takin' 2pac's name to be great
There's no connection with you and his Ressurection ok???
Inspect your reflection and find a new direction to take...
or else this battle section is gonna be threaded with threats
Im stealin' your site credits while ya fightin' debt...
and I will never regret slappin' you back with a rhyme
I'll stick my dick in your ear so I can fuck wit' ya mind!

....take your time, this one was short and sweet.....

[SmithNWessy]

http://forum.eminem.net/showpost.php?p=52432&postcount=14
http://forum.eminem.net/showpost.php?p=52427&postcount=10

[-MaKaVeLi-]

listen son, ur nothing, ur just enhanced in a fantasy
jealous of my skill, i laugh at ur envious imagery
new direction??bitch theres only one route to take
im named after a legend, ur whole concept is fake
smith n wessy?? i can tell by ur name ur a fraud
i post the post flawless while ya whole raps is flawed
u dreaded this battle cuz u feared elimination
ur assumptions were correct, ur charachters an imitation
i never took pacs name to be great, youre mistaken
no laughs, no gurls, no friends, youre forsaken
your verse is failure, ur left deserted and lonely
u got nothing, ur a bitch, ull never "own me"


there...

[-MaKaVeLi-]

My links:

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=3948&page=2&pp=10
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=4064&page=3&pp=10

[TfLaMeZ]

can we vote?
if so: here goes
Creativity: Mak
Enjoyable: Mak
Flow: Mak
Metaphors: Didn't see any
Multies: Smith
Personal: Smith
Punches: Mak
Structure: Mak
Vocabulary: Smith
Wordplay: neither
Overall: MaKaVeLi

[bad news]

Creativity: Mak
Enjoyable: Mak
Flow: Mak
Metaphors: Mak
Multies: Smith
Personal: Smith
Punches: Mak
Structure: Mak
Vocabulary: Mak
Wordplay: none
Overall: mak

my vote: mak

[-MaKaVeLi-]

2-0 thx both of y'all

[Killa Jones]

Creativity: Mak
Enjoyable: Mak
Flow: Mak
Metaphors: smith
Multies: Smith
Personal: Smith
Punches: Mak
Structure: Mak
Vocabulary: Mak
Wordplay: Nah
Overall: mak

[-MaKaVeLi-]

3-0...thx killa..more votes?

[sparkaholic2006]

1Creativity: Mak
2Enjoyable: Mak
3Flow: Mak
4Metaphors: Mak
5Multies: Smith
6Personal: Smith
7Punches: Mak
8Structure: Mak
9Vocabulary: Mak
10Wordplay:
~Overall: MAK~

MY vote goes to MAk

[-MaKaVeLi-]

thx alot spark.....4-0...

more plz...

[Tobias]

Creativity: MaKaVeLi
Enjoyable: MaKaVeLi
Flow: MaKaVeLi
Metaphors:---
Multies:---
Personal: MaKaVeLi
Punches: MaKaVeLi
Structure: MaKaVeLi
Vocabulary: MaKaVeLi
Wordplay: ---

Overall: MaKaVeLi...easy

:clap: good job man..

[madchild]

CLOSED -Makaveli- wins by KO (5-0).