Killa Jones vs. Cookiez N Cream 20 (3-5)

[Killa Jones]

Im all for eating cookies, but not so fussed on cream
Welcome newbie, youve meet killa the extreme.

Im'a fuck u up, leaving you with more holes than a supermarket trolley
Your more confussed than scobby doo reading wheres wally?

Im the ultimate test and i aint even one of the best
Go battle the rest, and meet your net-cee death

You like a tumbling football player, with your fake rolling and rolling
Your over exagerating, i said football player not bowling

Ill break you up like an oreo cookie
leave you a pile of crumbs, aint a full biscuit, just a rookie

Another new netcee coming to flaunt his talent
I recone this guys gonna be the new jimmy mallet(Uk only)

Last bar, i cant wait for your spit
i bet you think your amazing, when u really really shit.



2 verses remember, warm up as always lol

[CookiezNCream20]

I love how you say I'm a rookie, but you're jus pickin on the name, Cookies&Cream//
But don't you realize i'm gettin a label, admit it son I'm livin your dream//
And yea so wat if i'm a football player//
It don't matta i'll beat you here or there, this is my world, welcome to lare//
You say the you're the ultimate test//
And yet even tho u act big balled i still see you with a bulletproof vest//
I can't believe you ever thought u were good kid, you're jus lookin a mess//
After I'm done with you i'll lay u in the grave like I did the rest//
I don't see how you even think that you're the best//
When the 5-0 is afta you, you've done sumtin bad, it seems like they don't even need a warrant for my arrest//
Thatz only cuz they want to get the realest and illest killaz off of da street//
They kno that if you piss me off enough, ur gonna be in a pool of blood about knee deep//

[CookiezNCream20]

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=51857#post51857

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=51859#post51859


here are my two links by-tha-by

[Killa Jones]

Dude why u stressing and messaging me saying im choking
man i was kickin back watch tv, what the fuck you smoking?
Oh by the way was that you spit? you must be joking!
Was there one punch, if you did throw one i ducked it
Came straight back with an uppercut and the crowd really loved it
You an Mc looking for a chance?to do what?
It definatly aint rap, your better of to stick to sucking cock
Tasting the 'cream' and living your spoken dream
Now your think is net battling so mean!

Your a plain up joker, while im high like an ace
Whooping your ass with a royal flush, then spitting in your face

Your like hi-tech trainers, cheap and warnout
At the back of the shoe, where people dont seek out

Speaking of 5-0 ive bet your never meet
your really an upper class toof, with loyalty and respect(for police)

Im dissing you all over, like icing on a cake
Sticky and wet, your so sad those words make you wanna masturbate.

You plain up fake, with no place in this race, hip hop game will make a mess of your face.
People's will diss you wildly, no holdings back on lyrical weapons, you'll be down on your knees praising and respect um.
Become the group lackie, who sits back and washes laundry, and all along you thought you was to taunt me.
Fucking bitch, look now, ive made you look so dumb, know back down on your knees your favorites about to come.

[CookiezNCream20]

Haha ur tryin to bite but you suck....You must be the one thats joking//
It's people that r fake like you that make me laugh, by the way it's grass i'm smoking//
Just admit it you're better at making people smile...sing a Chirstmas carrol//
You'll be the only one not smiling on christmas..becuz i shot your parents in the stairwell//
And then they fell face first and caught a mouth full of gravel//
Don't worry u pussy I can send you to hell with em...I got another bullet still left in the barrel//
See I don't see how you can say u were relaxing and watching TV//
I kno that u were actually sitting there thinking of lyrics that could eat me//
And then all of a sudden you tried to spit bullshit, I can see it clearly//
I told you that makin fun of my name is freakin old...did you not hear me?//
Once I'm done with you I'll tell your friends where they can find "Killa Jones"//
But i'll make sure to warn them that I broke your bones with sticks and stones//
Now try to handle that I don't try to glaze the truth like a chocolate coating//
Go ahead be ready to lose...and open this battle for voting//

[shinoda]

OPEN FOR VOTES

[TfLaMeZ]

alright, here's the deal. I always forget the categories, and get to lazy to go look for um. so i'm gonna give some good feed back and opinions.

I'd say that you both had extremely equal verses. Killa, your first verses in a lot of your battles with two verses are very weak, You really have to work on making your flow tie in with your punches, but before that make sure you develop your punches and make them strong. killa's 1st verse=6/10

cookies. You got your point across in your first verse reallly well, by using quality punches and flow. I think in the first round your verse won it, But mainly your disses came from feeding, but otherwise your verse was really good. cookies 1st verse=7/10

killa, your second verse was a lot better then your first, everything was upped to a higher level. You had more multi's, punches, wordplays, personals, and metaphors, so you really came back a lot harder in your second. killas 2nd verse=8/10

cookies. your second verse was actually weak. After seeing your laid back 1st verse i expected something extremely strong. your flow and structure got confusing, but you had some okay disses, and personals, and your closer was really good. cookies 2nd verse=6/10

ALL IN ALL=KILLA= 14/20
ALL IN ALL=COOKIES= 13/20

[CookiezNCream20]

1-0....Killa

[Killa Jones]

uppin for more votes guys

[SmithNWessy]

verse 1: Killa
-Scooby Doo, rolling football players, bowling, and the words "really really shit", really really turned me off of that verse...try to mix styles...that 2 line 1 bar shit, where every last word rhymes is gettin' old...3/10

verse 1:Cookies
-i've heard of your label, "Kiebler Elf Records" right? Geez...stick to football. Niether of these two verses impressed me at all...however...C&C had a better flow, better words, and Killa was at a disadvantage by starting first anyway. Cookies, you edges him out with a 4 in that round, congratulations.

verse 2:Killa
-Much better verse than the first one....your reference to the cards was your best lines i thought...i didn't understand the whole hi-tech trainers shit...anyway...every line was directed towards your opponent but you could have done better... 6/10

verse 2:Cookies
-The only part I liked was the end of it. "Go ahead be ready to lose...and open this battle for voting"...Clever way to end it but thank god both have ended. When you write or freestyle or whatever, have a beat goin' or and idea of a rhyme pattern. There's no Rhetoric in either verses. Thats what makes a rap song sound like a rap song! All of it was a bunch of words that rhymed at the end. Punchlines were weak...so on and so forth.
I feel that when you go first in a battle, that shit has to be raw...Cookie's verses didnt have to be "extremely strong" in order to when this one, he held his own in a weak battle...so i have to give Cookie's a 6/10 on that one too.

Killa-9
Cookies-10

[CookiezNCream20]

aite....1-1.....more votes

[BigMann313]

Punches: KJ
Flow: CC
Creativity: CC
Effectiveness:KJ
Vocab: KJ
Multi's: KJ
Overall: KJ

nice battle i enjoyed it

[Killa Jones]

2-1 uppin 4 more votes

[angel_gurl]

Consistency/Structure: kj
Creativity:cc
Enjoyable: cc
Flow:cc
Metaphors:kj
Multies:kj
Personal:cc
Punches:cc
Vocabulary:kj
Wordplay:cc


Overall:cc it was a good battle ya'll both did good but cc had the flow an the punches.kj uneed to step up a lil wit ya punches

[CookiezNCream20]

2-2......uppin

[Eluzion]

Punches: Killa
Flow: CNC
Creativity: CNC
Effectiveness:Killa
Vocab: Killa
Multi's: Killa

Overall: Killa Jones

Nice battle.

[NjeCt]

Punches: Killa
Flow: CC
Creativity: CC
Effectiveness:Killa
Vocab: Killa
Multi's: Killa
Wordplay: CC
Enjoyment: CC

Overall: CC

I give it to CC becuase as u can see it was a tie from my rating but becuase of enjoyment i give to CC

[bad news]

Consistency/Structure: kj
Creativity:kj
Enjoyable: cc
Flow:cc
Metaphors:cc
Multies:kj
Personal:cc
Punches:cc
Vocabulary:cc
Wordplay:cc

nice flow cc, killa u need to work on ur flow man but all in all i enjoyed that battle.

[Killa Jones]

3-4 uppin

[Queen of Wise]

Consistency/Structure:kj
Creativity:cc
Enjoyable: cc
Flow:cc
Metaphors:cc
Multies:kj
Personal:cc
Punches:cc
Vocabulary: cc
Wordplay: cc

Overall:cc

nice;)

[CookiezNCream20]

Thanx for voting every1.....5-3....good battle Killa Jones

[madchild]

CLOSED CookiezNCream20 wins 5-3.