TfLaMeZ [Winner] vs. 2 Good [DQ'ed] (1-0)

[TfLaMeZ]

2 verses each line max is 30, Order: you, me, you, me. i wanna ask that only madchild, shinoda, and one more person vote. After those 3 votes, who ever has the majority wins the battle...Alright lets go.

[2 Good]

no here are the rules

we will do 5 bars each (10 lines)
the order goes, you me you me (sinc eit was your callout)
maddchild will not vote as he sucks, the voters will be

shinoda
kruxx
hawkeye
stinger
rappone

after them anyone can vote

[TfLaMeZ]

boastin about roastin and 'ownin' me and hip hop genius/
so what if he hasn't got "any," at least he's gotta penis//**
braggin, but, you have less value then the k-mart prices/**
exactly my point that your rhymes dont suffice it//
i beat you once, i'll do it again, one more time, then again/
you dont cause me pain, or fill me with any adrenaline//
and on top of your lack of skill and useless brain claims/**
it says i'm 14, not 12, look next to "TfLaMeZ"//**
i think its almost gotten to about 0 and 6 now/**
wait a second..styles actually thinking...but HOW?//

(EDIT)
** he's always talkin about how he beat me and hhg, but he didn't
**K-mart always has the Roll back, so their prices are practically nothing
**always is sayin that he is smart, and CAN beat anyone..(not true)
**always thinks my age is 12..when i've said 14 more then once
**he's made the same guess about 6 times and got it wrong

[2 Good]

i dont talk about owning you i actually do own you/
yeah ya might be 14 now, but you been gettin molested since u were 2//
i dont see why you had to bring up hip-hop genius/
fuck man now u got me wondering how you know hes got a penis//
talk about K-MART, ill SERVE YOU up like they SERVE soda/
shit you wudnt even be able to rhyme if it wasnt for shinoda//
paranoid about your age KID, ill make you a deal/
if you stop talkin shit about me ill buy you a happy meal//
prepare to be raped, when ya dad gets home, get on ALL-FOURS/
dam fuck it, i keystyled this shit and its still better than yours//

[TfLaMeZ]

c'mon check your sig man, it should be 0 and 2/
i'm just stating the facts of when i beat you//
in this game, you move slower then a turtle/
your place is at the old folk home, wearin a gurdle//
i'm super glued to this escalator, i keep goin up/
i kicked you off the bottom, and you still gettin fucked//
and dont be dissin madchild with the way he votes/
you couldn't even pick out punches, LEARN THE ROPES!//
if anyone needs a beating, its the one claimin his "style"/
your sayin i suck when you've gotten beat all the while//


(for the record...these are all keystyles)

[2 Good]

you beat me son please your wack, you get votes out of pity/
just a young ass boy listenin to, to much fiddy// (50 cent)
for the record tehse are freestyles, say what, maybe mine/
but your aint keystyles, i can see on ya posts the difference in time//
took a whole 45 minutes to spit just to spit that wack verse/
i reply back in 10 minutes dawg and your verse is still worse//
first HHG now you bringin up maddchild, son hop off dick/
im just thinkin about you son, to much dick will make you sick//
its cool when i beat ya kid, keep ya hea up and smile/
but yo, why did u set this battle up as 2 good when ya keep refferin to styles//

son wastin my time, it took you 45 minutes to kick a freestyle i wanted this battle over in 10 minutes

anyways vote up

[TfLaMeZ]

alright i'm sicka this, 45 minutes cuz i have a fucking life, i was takin care of some other stuff, I never said i'd give 100% commitment to a fucking battle online, I left the website and my email up while i went and ran some errands, If thats a sin..then tell me. AND I'M NOT ON ANYONES FUCKING DICK, will you give that shit up. You are pathetic. Same old disses, one after one. ANYWAYS, we need those votes

EDIT

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=50143#post50143

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=50137#post50137

[$tingeR]

boastin about roastin and 'ownin' me and hip hop genius/
so what if he hasn't got "any," at least he's gotta penis//**
rather generic...but fairly smooth opener
braggin, but, you have less value then the k-mart prices/**
exactly my point that your rhymes dont suffice it//
liked the first line, maybe coulda been more explorative on the 2nd line
i beat you once, i'll do it again, one more time, then again/
you dont cause me pain, or fill me with any adrenaline//
makes a point...bit filler ish though
and on top of your lack of skill and useless brain claims/**
it says i'm 14, not 12, look next to "TfLaMeZ"//**
kinda weak diss, but not a bad bar anyway
i think its almost gotten to about 0 and 6 now/**
wait a second..styles actually thinking...but HOW?//
didnt like the closer. overall some decent lines in there some weaker lines in there. 5/10

i dont talk about owning you i actually do own you/
yeah ya might be 14 now, but you been gettin molested since u were 2//
incredibly poor from u styles... flow and rhyming were poor...
i dont see why you had to bring up hip-hop genius/
fuck man now u got me wondering how you know hes got a penis//
weak diss, used the same rhyme words as flamez... genius and penis...not feeling it (the RHYME or HHGS DICK! lol)
talk about K-MART, ill SERVE YOU up like they SERVE soda/
shit you wudnt even be able to rhyme if it wasnt for shinoda//
personal...doesnt hit that hard but i kinda liked the 2nd line serve u wordplay was ok...
paranoid about your age KID, ill make you a deal/
if you stop talkin shit about me ill buy you a happy meal//
ROFLMAO!!! love this bar! really like it...
prepare to be raped, when ya dad gets home, get on ALL-FOURS/
dam fuck it, i keystyled this shit and its still better than yours//
hmm a bit weak again. last line seems to be true about kestyled... u shoulda tried a bit harder overall i give this a 6/10 for a bar which would really have a crowd laughing, and a couple of other decent bits.

c'mon check your sig man, it should be 0 and 2/
i'm just stating the facts of when i beat you//
not bad opener... if these are keystyles then its ok, but would be poor for proper written verses.
in this game, you move slower then a turtle/
your place is at the old folk home, wearin a gurdle//
lol not bad doesnt hit hard but quite funny
i'm super glued to this escalator, i keep goin up/
i kicked you off the bottom, and you still gettin fucked//
quite nice 1st line, didnt like the second
and dont be dissin madchild with the way he votes/
you couldn't even pick out punches, LEARN THE ROPES!//
i like this...simple but i like it fits in and works well
if anyone needs a beating, its the one claimin his "style"/
your sayin i suck when you've gotten beat all the while//
didnt like this closer. the "style" wordplay is over used now and im a bit bored of seeing it in every verse against him. 7/10 made me laugh at times and wasnt bad for a keystyle

you beat me son please your wack, you get votes out of pity/
just a young ass boy listenin to, to much fiddy// (50 cent)
simple but nice... second line is nice also, just kinda funny
for the record tehse are freestyles, say what, maybe mine/
but your aint keystyles, i can see on ya posts the difference in time//
personal, and maybe true, i dont know, but if it is then good punch
took a whole 45 minutes to spit just to spit that wack verse/
i reply back in 10 minutes dawg and your verse is still worse//
if its true its good if not its a bit weak
first HHG now you bringin up maddchild, son hop off dick/
im just thinkin about you son, to much dick will make you sick//
hmm...ok i guess... weak punch
its cool when i beat ya kid, keep ya hea up and smile/
but yo, why did u set this battle up as 2 good when ya keep refferin to styles//
WTF the second line was weird...didnt like this bar at all 5.5/10

score tflamez 12 styles 11.5 :eek: close but styles... man u can do a fuck lot better...this is an honest vote or w/e i have nothing against either of you. styles...TRY!

[TfLaMeZ]

thanx for the vote, its 1-0

[TfLaMeZ]

give that shit up, my verses clearly beat you. I explained why you THINK my verses took 45 minutes to write, except it or not, its the truth. congratulations on your loss :clap:

[madchild]

CLOSED Tflamez wins by DQ and 1-0. Styles had ample opportunity to get his 2 voting links up (must be within 24 hours of dropping your verse) and he did not. Please read the battle rules if you have a problem.