Killa Jones vs. Mc Neo (1-5)

[Killa Jones]

Mc neo, the next program to be deleted,
Just like in the movie, super hero defeated.

How can you even compair yourself to such a fictional fantasy
Even so there's no way you can compete with me theoretically.

Ill rip of your arms, beat you to death with them, then get the right one, roll over to your house and slap your mum.

You non exisitng bitch, you more fugasei than the blair witch, while im lazy like im rich, and you try and play me like a snitch.
I dont usually 'cock guns' but if i do i wont miss
Im 'blowing you away' like a simple kiss
If your neo im morpheous acting up like i really exsist
I tought you mutha fucker, ill kick you ass i insist
Please you streak of piss, im fed up your dissmissed.

I rip your fucking eyes out and play 'Ping Pong' with them
In the next tournement, hes got Killa, not 'King Kong' again.

While you lying sightless and fightless, like prey to a beast
Im callin my boys to come feast on the deceased.

Dont fuck with me boy, this is just a rough spit
gone to watch BB5, victor gonna rip shit

Killa

[MC Neo]

aite checkin in...ill drop ma verse in a few...

[MC Neo]

I’ll reduce you to a wheel-chair if you wanna step to this
If those illegible lines are your spirit, then ima be your exorcist
It’s in times like this, that I flow and diss, dangerously, without regret
Wit this battle, u’ll only get famous, as “the wackest emcee that neo met”
Now, this battle is small-time, I don’t wanna make too much fuzz
You keep sayin u don’t know me, well guess what, your bitch does…
So, why tha fuck u wanna battle, when there r some things I can mention
But it seems this guy is so poor that can’t even ~pay~ attention
Even if the price of your lines was “zero”, they would not sell
This guy’s talking about theories? This bitch can’t even spell! (exsist lol)
First about tha matrix, then whats next? Diss me cause I’m whiter?
At least I don’t put ma shit on bold just to make it sound tighter…
Your username is Killa Jones, ur a murderer or somethin? Not quite…
See, cause im tha one that’s teachin him how to hold his glock right
And as we all know, the though u serving anybody is purely absurd
Im about to lyrically execute you right now, any last word?

MC Neo
Reppin Portugal
Peace Out

[MC Neo]

vote ppl..

[Eluzion]

Consistency/Structure: Killa J
Creativity: Killa J
Enjoyable: Neo
Flow: Neo
Metaphors: Killa J
Multies: Killa J
Personal: Neo
Punches: Neo
Vocabulary: Killa J
Wordplay: Killa J

Overall: Killa

Killa-Your punches were pretty good, but your word play and how you came up with the Matrix thing was good. You had good vocab too and alot of creativity.

Neo-Your punches were more personal and had slightly better flow, but you did not have the best vocab, it was just put together using simple words, but it was still a good spit.

Good Keystyles both.

[Overload]

My votes For Neo

This vote does not count without voting on categories or bar-by-bar breakdown.

[MC Neo]

aite, thx fo ya votes eyedea and overload
great ma fav rapper voting against me :D nah im jk 1-0 for Killa uppin...

[Killa Jones]

Overload state why!

[madchild]

Consistency/Structure: Mc Neo
Creativity: Mc Neo
Enjoyable: Mc Neo
Flow: Mc Neo
Metaphors: Mc Neo
Multies: Mc Neo
Personal: Mc Neo
Punches: Mc Neo
Vocabulary: -
Wordplay: Mc Neo
Overall: Mc Neo

Final Vote - Mc Neo

Mc Neo - I really liked your style. Pretty well written all the way through. Bars I liked in particular were:

"So, why tha fuck u wanna battle, when there r so many things I can mention
But it seems this guy is so poor that he can’t even ~pay~ attention"

"First about tha matrix, then whats next? Diss me cause I’m whiter?
At least I don’t put ma shit on bold just to make it sound tighter…"

You 2nd last bar played off his name good and you had a good closer bar as well.

Killa Jones - Sorry Killa, but I didn't feel one bar. Since you've came back, you seem to have improved alot, but this verse look like it took no effort (in a bad way) and had not much creativity.

[MC Neo]

ohh i see overload's vote didint count...explained votes was not a part of my requirements but it seems the forum demands it...its all good...

1-1 uppin...

and also thx fo da vote madchild...

[tr3nt]

Consistency/Structure: MC Neo
Creativity: MC Neo
Enjoyable: MC Neo
Flow: both u guys had flow, can't decide
Metaphors: Mc Neo
Multies: Killa had a few
Personal: Neo for sure
Punches: Neo
Vocabulary: Neo
Wordplay: Neo

Sorry Killa, as mc said, your spit wasn't really much of an impact compared to neo's.. also, personally, im not digging the whole "ima fuck you up, slice your throat and then wear your face as a mask" diss.. it seems too much like your trying to be hardcore.

Mc Neo - I loved your spit - I expected the usual rebuttle diss, but you changed it around and didn't really state the obvious, whereas I think Killa did, I must admit, if I was to battle you, I'd rip out the matrix disses.

Vote: Mc Neo

[LockDown]

Killa Jones

Mc neo, the next program to be deleted,
Just like in the movie, super hero defeated.
iigth opener
How can you even compair yourself to such a fictional fantasy
Even so there's no way you can compete with me theoretically.
koo vocab...punch was koo....
Ill rip of your arms, beat you to death with them, then get the right one, roll over to your house and slap your mum.
umm....gay...
You non exisitng bitch, you more fugasei than the blair witch,
while im lazy like im rich, and you try and play me like a snitch.
I dont usually 'cock guns' but if i do i wont miss
Dunno how to bar that shit ...but just bragigng in that bar...
Im 'blowing you away' like a simple kiss
If your neo im morpheous acting up like i really exsist
koo punch...
I tought you mutha fucker, ill kick you ass i insist
Please you streak of piss, im fed up your dissmissed.
....no comment on that....
I rip your fucking eyes out and play 'Ping Pong' with them
In the next tournement, hes got Killa, not 'King Kong' again.
blah..personal....
While you lying sightless and fightless, like prey to a beast
Im callin my boys to come feast on the deceased.
ok bar.....
Dont fuck with me boy, this is just a rough spit
gone to watch BB5, victor gonna rip shit
ok closer....


MC Neo

I’ll reduce you to a wheel-chair if you wanna step to this
If those illegible lines are your spirit, then ima be your exorcist
iigth opener...
It’s in times like this, that I flow and diss, dangerously, without regret
Wit this battle, u’ll only get famous, as “the wackest emcee that neo met”
iigth bar....
Now, this battle is small-time, I don’t wanna make too much fuzz
You keep sayin u don’t know me, well guess what, your bitch does…
blah...gay bar....
So, why tha fuck u wanna battle, when there r some things I can mention
But it seems this guy is so poor that can’t even ~pay~ attention
blah..played as fuck....
Even if the price of your lines was “zero”, they would not sell
This guy’s talking about theories? This bitch can’t even spell! (exsist lol)
personal....punch was iight
First about tha matrix, then whats next? Diss me cause I’m whiter?
At least I don’t put ma shit on bold just to make it sound tighter…
LMAO....2nd line was kinda funny...
Your username is Killa Jones, ur a murderer or somethin? Not quite…
See, cause im tha one that’s teachin him how to hold his glock right
blah.....
And as we all know, the though u serving anybody is purely absurd
Im about to lyrically execute you right now, any last word?
blah...iight closer...


iigth the breakdown
Punches- Neo
Wordplay- Killa Jones
Multies- Killa Jones
Structure- Neo
Personals- Neo
Vocabulary- Neither (not wat i would call effecient use of vocab)
Opener- Neither (both had iight openers)
Closer- Neither (simple closers)
Creativity- Neo
Enjoyment- Neo

Wack battle...Neo came better...blah

Overall Vote- Neo

[Killa Jones]

1-3 uppin

[MC Neo]

thx fo da votes guyz...
yea uppin..

[Kruxx]

Consistency/Structure: Mc Neo
Creativity: Mc Neo
Enjoyable: Mc Neo
Flow: Mc Neo
Metaphors: Blah
Multies: Mc Neo
Personal: Mc Neo
Punches: Mc Neo
Vocab: both?
Wordplay: Mc Neo
Overall: Mc Neo

wtf, KJ got nothin on Neo....

:worship:Neo:worship:

[$tingeR]

Mc neo, the next program to be deleted,
Just like in the movie, super hero defeated.
not bad play off name etc...not too bad doesnt hit very hard though

How can you even compair yourself to such a fictional fantasy
Even so there's no way you can compete with me theoretically.
i cant make the last words rhyme no matter how i say them...weak bar, fillerish

Ill rip of your arms, beat you to death with them, then get the right one, roll over to your house and slap your mum.
just says what he will do, something i am not a fan of...filler...

You non exisitng bitch, you more fugasei than the blair witch, while im lazy like im rich, and you try and play me like a snitch.
I dont usually 'cock guns' but if i do i wont miss
i think it sucks up to this point
Im 'blowing you away' like a simple kiss
similie...not too bad
If your neo im morpheous acting up like i really exsist
I tought you mutha fucker, ill kick you ass i insist
Please you streak of piss, im fed up your dissmissed.
filler again really

I rip your fucking eyes out and play 'Ping Pong' with them
In the next tournement, hes got Killa, not 'King Kong' again.
am i missing something here.... i dont get what king kong is tryin to say...anyway filller again really

While you lying sightless and fightless, like prey to a beast
Im callin my boys to come feast on the deceased.
again filler

Dont fuck with me boy, this is just a rough spit
gone to watch BB5, victor gonna rip shit
WEIRD closer!!! dont get the point of it...

overall this was weak and mostly filler. work on more punches vocab and wordplay.

I’ll reduce you to a wheel-chair if you wanna step to this
If those illegible lines are your spirit, then ima be your exorcist
kinda like the second line here hate the first one
It’s in times like this, that I flow and diss, dangerously, without regret
Wit this battle, u’ll only get famous, as “the wackest emcee that neo met”
bit fillerish really...not too bad though
Now, this battle is small-time, I don’t wanna make too much fuzz
You keep sayin u don’t know me, well guess what, your bitch does…
NO NO NO! please no bitch/mum jokes type thing...lame
So, why tha fuck u wanna battle, when there r some things I can mention
But it seems this guy is so poor that can’t even ~pay~ attention
pfft very weak and filler
Even if the price of your lines was “zero”, they would not sell
This guy’s talking about theories? This bitch can’t even spell! (exsist lol)
"zero" is that supposed to be a wordplay??? very weak
First about tha matrix, then whats next? Diss me cause I’m whiter?
At least I don’t put ma shit on bold just to make it sound tighter…
kind of ok, but i made a better personal out of this with wordplay...could arouse suspicions of biting...not saying u did but meh...try not to use original disses/concepts
Your username is Killa Jones, ur a murderer or somethin? Not quite…
See, cause im tha one that’s teachin him how to hold his glock right
meh, arent you gangsta - I hate this fake stuff
And as we all know, the though u serving anybody is purely absurd
Im about to lyrically execute you right now, any last word?
pfft weak, generic, played out...u gotta look for some creativity in your work. and vocab, personals, wordplay etc.

overall NEO still wins this though, just overall better and not QUITE as much filler

[MC Neo]

ok i won 5-1...thx fo da votes yall....
nice battle KJ...keep it up
put this bitch up in tha vault :D
peace

[S.W.A.T]

gd battle.......

[madchild]

CLOSED MC Neo wins 5-1.