TfLaMeZ vs. Angel_Gurl (3-5)

[TfLaMeZ]

your rules were freestyle..so here goes

i spit these flames, crushing these names/
i'm dragon out his cage, not close ta tame//
unleash fury upon any person in my path/
described so many times, its just my wrath//
they say a guy is born with more muscle/
including our brain, more room for hustle//
you must have cloudy perception/
battling a guy with un used deception//
i was told not to make sexist comments/
it doesn't crush my verse, i woudl just be honest//
i'm not the type of person to hold back/
you should admire that, it deserves a clap//
on this site, i've talked a lot about how my anger breaks/
and by challenging me, you made more then a mistake//
i'm not tryin to be cocky, i'm just stating the facts/
dont say that i'm concieted, what i said is far from that//
so many people ask about my thoughts being so demented/
your complimenting girls..have you heard our 28th amendment?//

(best i can come up with right now.. i got 2 hours of sleep and i'm wired)


EDIT::::
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=48740#post48740

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=49062#post49062

[angel_gurl]

you aint crushing nobody's name
baby boy you dont even know the rap game
your sexist comments dont bother me
cuz either way i'll put you through misery
i never complimented a girl on this
say shit thats true when you try to diss
its ok if you start to cry
i wont tell nobody when your tears start to multiply
see.... the difference between you and me
is when i freestyle i say shit thats reality
i dont care if you dont hold back
it doesnt matter to me cuz you still sound like crap
see me style is kinda lame right now
but my reason is i'ne been gone awhile
now tell me wuts yo reason
u sucked all season

[TfLaMeZ]

alright, looks like its about even, i underestimated u(dont get me wrong, its not cuz your a girl, i'm being honest). Alright, lookin for votes!

[angel_gurl]

u thout i suked?

DON'T FORGET TO DROP YOUR 2 LINKS FOR VOTES Like Tflamez. If you don't understand, READ THE BATTLE RULES.

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=3885

Also, No FREEPOSTING is allowed in the battle zone . Just giving you a heads up and drilling these rules into EVERYONES head.

- Madchild (moderator)

[HipHopGenius]

punches ag
multies: tf
vocab: tf
metaphoars: neither
wordplay:ag
enjoyment:ag

overall:ag close but her dissed hit harder tflames u can do alot betta

[Eluzion]

Punches: Ag
Multies: Tf
Vocab: Tf
Metaphoars: Tf
Wordplay:ag
Enjoyment:ag
Flow-Tf

TFlamez-You had better flow and your freestyle was pretty good, but I didn't see alot of punches coming from you. You were mostly stating the facts but you did have a alright ending.

Angel Gurl-Nice spit, you had alot of good punches but you did really have flow.

Overall-TFlamez

Oh and Angel Gurl, PM me.

[angel_gurl]

vote for me or tflamez

[TfLaMeZ]

1-1, still need lots of votes

[Eluzion]

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Punches: Ag
Multies: Tf
Vocab: Tf
Metaphoars: Tf
Wordplay:ag
Enjoyment:ag
Flow-Tf

TFlamez-You had better flow and your freestyle was pretty good, but I didn't see alot of punches coming from you. You were mostly stating the facts but you did have a alright ending.

Angel Gurl-Nice spit, you had alot of good punches but you did really have flow.

Overall-TFlamez

[TfLaMeZ]

thanx, that made it 1-1, we still need a shit load of votes

[Kruxx]

Why's this here!?!

[TfLaMeZ]

fuck if i know, i just saw it

[2 Good]

comments :

flamez your battle was talking about how good you are and i never saw one ounch, personal, no wordplay at all basically it was a really bad verse.

***

angel at the beggining u were atleast talking about him but then you slipped, your verse werent all that good neither

VOTE - ANGEL (because she dissed him..a little)

[angel_gurl]

2 for me 1 for you

[speedbump]

Flow : Tflamez
Wordplay: Angel gurl
Multis : Tflamez
Rymes: Tflamez
Punches: Angel_gurl
Meta.:Tflamez

Vote = Tflamez.

My opinion:
You should both make you lines all even. The ultimate reason why I voted for Tflamez its because he had better rymes. Angel_gurl you should try to find word that ryme more then just the last letter try being more complicated. You have great ideas you should just work more on them so they become a real hard diss and last thing try using / at the end of a line and // and the end of a bar like Tflamez did.

[MC Neo]

on this battle, i aint gon break up line-by-line, it was very weak but still ima vote...
TfLaMeZ: the verse had some better vocab folllowed by some good meta's an all but no punches, personals, no dissin...no interest...in a battle, punchlines are sacred...

AG: flow was weaker, but still, it had some punches and i enjoyed readin it more...

Vote: AG
Peace

[TfLaMeZ]

3-2, and yes, i had personals, and 1 or 2 punches.

[Killa Jones]

Overall: AngelGurl

Her was better to read, and i was a bit dissapointed by urs flamez coz u bin rippin up da Open Mic

[angel_gurl]

ag-4 tflamez-3

[bad news]

Flow : angel
Wordplay: Angel
Multis : angel
Rymes: Tflamez
Punches: angel
Meta.:Tflamez

Vote = angel

[TfLaMeZ]

5-3, nice battle, you got some skills

[shinoda]

5-3, Angel takes this battle. Madchild, before I send this, I want you to state whether the votes of Killa and MC Neo are allowed (the voting categories weren't used)

[madchild]

Like I said many time, votes must be on categories or bar-by-bar breakdown of the verses, so read the Battle Zone and Callout Rules. If you don't want to do either, simply don't vote. The main reasons I'm enforcing this is because it helps the battler improve tremendously, prevents accusations of D/R in most cases, makes it a fair voting system, and I want to drill this into everyones head so it becomes like second nature (ie. breathing). I strongly recommend voting on categories, since it's the simplest method and is less time consuming (if time contraint is a problem).

Both ways, that MC Neo and Killa Jones broke down the vote is NOT allowed. Basically, the way MC Neo broke down his vote was by categories, all the had to do was delegate each category to a battler. If no one took the category like he states, simply put something like N/A.

The way Killa Jones broke it down is not accepted due to the reasons stated above. In most cases and I have done it alot, I simply delete these votes and Warn the user with a PM.

I have no doubt that the votes were genuinely sincere and honest, and I believe both battlers accept them.

This battle is closed, but for future reference, these kinds of votes are not allowed!

Angel_Gurl, I'm giving you 5 more hours to PM me your 2 Links, else DQ'ed ... I've asked 3 times nicely, and given you like 2 days to get them up.

[MC Neo]

sry i didint knew this type of voting system was required...ill break down or vote by categories from now on...

peace

[madchild]

Thanks All.

Angel Gurls' Links:
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread....84&page=2&pp=10
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread....ghlight=bigmann

CLOSED Angel Gurl wins 5-3.