Killa Jones vs. tr3nt (5-3)

[tr3nt]

Don't make it too long/short
3-0 Ko otherwise best to 5
two spits each.
First - Killa Jones
Sec. - tr3nt
Third - Killa Jones
fth. - tr3nt

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[Killa Jones]

Im'a rip you up like paper in a "shredder"
Ill kick your ass "Turtles" style with knunchucks forever/1

Leave you speechless with bullet holes marking your outline
Closed coffin at the funeral, im laughing, drinking God's wine/2

You aint a competitor, how the fuck can you even match me
You just a 'C' student, While ive ahchieved a lyrical degree/3

Ill leave you malfunctioning, your hard-drive is frazzled
You riding packard bell, im riding my own to dazzle/4

Killing you off with only five bars
you better get use to seeing bars N men's scars/5

Your a failure just like apollo thirteen
Pressures to high, leaving you with a failing eruptured spleen/6

my lyrics are too hot for you, just like a blow torch
100 degree's temperature, To your skin there gonna scorch/7

Im ready to flip you the mic, to see what you babble out
Watch what your saying coz im back second round of this bout/8

[tr3nt]

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=48499#post48499
thats the only link I can provide...

Must admit, you got some nice rhymes, but im still laughin//
you're rhymes remind me of a li'l child still draftin//
My hard drive's frazzled? nice, well.. for a metaphor//
maybe I should overclock this rap and make motherfuckers scream for more//

bitch, you need a new path to follow, rap's not your destiny//
this proven once, twice and now i've come to join the rest-you-see//
gonna show you just what Im capable of, medals and awards aren't my scene//
I come to this battle without much knowledge of you, but you'll come out with knowledge of how this' been//

Only a small battle for round 1 cause I can't be fucked..

Definitions:
overclock -- term PC enthusiasts use when they move thier CPU clock speed above "capabilities"

[Killa Jones]

You shook up like onyx in 8 mile, aint my fault im better, and u suicidal.
Killa's tr3nt's idol, But he about to be washed up coaz here comes the tidal/1

You like spiderman in his first movie, edgy and uncut
Call me Romeo coz im groovy, A loss for you is so unfortunate/2

Medals and awards aint your scene because you've never won one.
Running or rapping and all that is seems, You just cant win son./3

Im like denzel washington in training day, King Kong Aint got shit on me
You like michael jackson at neverland lettin kids in for free/4

Im demolishing you, now im'a take your self respect
Its like we playing checkers and you've just been checked/5

Bumming on your PC, you know it inside out
Instead of bumming ladies, you going to get your printout/6

Pathetic,weak and an excuse of a human being
Your left well behind while im accelerating/7

Leaving you for dust, and with gravel in your face
While i was accelerating, i left you in second place/8

[tr3nt]

Nice, nice, im not gon' reply for a little bit, cause my body is fucked up and worn out.. if I don't battle by tomorrow night (tis 8:44pm now) then I'll sort something out.. but I should be done by then.. sorry guys.

[Killa Jones]

no probs dawg!

[tr3nt]

dude, I'm going out later, I was just bout to open my verses, but I gotta go out for a bit. I'll verse it up in about 4-5 hours, but I'll battle my verse tonight.

[tr3nt]

thanks, and sorry bout the delay.. I'm commin down with some sort of bullshit flu..

whats ur deal with playin' games, hiphop is reality//
im drag racing your ass doing a million miles 'n hour//
Assuming positions? I'm paul walker, you ja rule you sissy//
car with nos and extractors pullin tread over ur go-cart made to look sour//
hittin' top speed then making you look a fool, me im bein quick shifty//

King Kong ain't got shit on you cause he's like you fake and talent-dead//
whereas myself.. I've got the skill, im becoming awake and talented//
pathetic? weak? excuse? got anything else, heard 'em before, boring//
I must admit, your talent for repeating disses is nothing but soaring//
but jus' watch me, I'll rush you like playing counter-strike, plant the bomb and fuckin BANG//

bitch, you ain't got nothin over me, you may win,

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thats all i had before i hadda go out, I saved to notepad, but I can't do shit all now, I have to get a couple of assignments finished and im stuffed already - killa u got this.

[MC Neo]

just knew about the voting system that needs to be followed on this forum...new vote:

Flow: Killa Jones
Wordplay: Killa Jones
Multis : Tre3nt
Rhymes: Tre3nt
Punches: Tre3nt
Meta4's:Tre3nt

Vote = Tr3nt

Quantity doesnt equals quality KJ, remember that..
peace

[Killa Jones]

1-0 Uppin 4 More Votes

[BigMann313]

Consistency/Structure: killa jones
Creativity: trent
Enjoyable: killa jones
Flow: killa jones
Metaphors: trent
Multies: killa jones
Personal: killa jones
Punches: both
Vocabulary: killa jones
Wordplay: killa jones
Overall: killa jones

both were awesome spits, but was feeling killa jones spit here more

[Killa Jones]

1-1 uppin
thanks for voting bigmann

[TfLaMeZ]

Consistency/Structure: trent
Creativity: trent
Enjoyable: killa jones
Flow: killa jones
Metaphors: trent
Multies: killa jones
Personal: both
Punches: both
Vocabulary: killa jones
Wordplay: killa jones
Overall: killa jones

Both had some really really good verses, but i realy really really liked killa's verses, awesome battle though, this was a really good match up

[madchild]

Killa Jone 2nd Verse: Nothing really stood out as a hard punch or overly creative.

Trents' 1st Verse: Haha, a 4 bar verse should be illegal. You should at least give effort for your opponents sake. You had some alright feeding comebacks and some alright multies.

Killa Jones' 2nd Verse:

"Im like denzel washington in training day, King Kong Aint got shit on me
You like michael jackson at neverland lettin kids in for free/4"

I don't like the first line, you totally changed thoughts like you were suffering from tourettes. However, the second line was good. You lacked personals in both your verses, as you seemed to be going for strictly punches.

Trents' 2nd Verse:

"King Kong ain't got shit on you cause he's like you fake and talent-dead//
whereas myself.. I've got the skill, im becoming awake and talented//"

Good bar and multie.

"but jus' watch me, I'll rush you like playing counter-strike, plant the bomb and fuckin BANG//"

That closer was shit and unnessary, especially since it wasn't even a complete bar.

Consistency/Structure: Tr3nt
Creativity: Tr3nt
Enjoyable: Killa Jones
Flow: Killa Jones
Metaphors: Tr3nt
Multies: Tr3nt
Personal: Tr3nt
Punches: Killa Jones
Vocabulary: -
Wordplay: Tr3nt

Overall: Tr3nt

[Killa Jones]

2-2 thanks for the comments and votes guys
uppin

[Kruxx]

Consistency/Structure: trent
Creativity: trent
Enjoyable: both
Flow: KJ
Metaphors: blah
Multies: didnt see much, KJ i guess
Personal: bleh
Punches: both
Vocabulary: tr3nt? had simplistic yet effective
Wordplay: urm..KJ
Overall: killa jones


*Edit* before ppl go on about they drew in the catogories, i just made my own mind up on whos spits i liked better, so shush

[Killa Jones]

3-2 uppin

[Eluzion]

Consistency/Structure: tr3nt
Creativity: tr3nt
Enjoyable: both
Flow: KJ
Metaphors: KJ
Multies: KJ
Personal: -
Punches: both
Vocabulary: tr3nt
Wordplay: KJ

Overall: Killa Jones

Nice spit guys.

[tr3nt]

"but jus' watch me, I'll rush you like playing counter-strike, plant the bomb and fuckin BANG//"

That closer was shit and unnessary, especially since it wasn't even a complete bar.


-- just to explain myself:
I had to go out just as I was typing out my verses.. I had planned a bit of a bigger battle but couldn't - when I got home I had to finish off some study and when I remembered to finish off the battle it was too late to concentrate so I just copy/paste the battle that I saved.. but your vote is your opinion, and im cool with that

[Killa Jones]

ok?
4-2 uppin

[bad news]

Consistency/Structure: tr3nt
Creativity: tr3nt
Enjoyable: tr3nt
Flow: killa
Metaphors: killa
Multies: tr3nt
Personal: tr3nt
Punches: both
Vocabulary: tr3nt
Wordplay: tr3nt
Overall: tr3nt

[c martin]

Consistency/Structure: tr3nt
Creativity: tr3nt
Enjoyable: tr3nt
Flow: killa
Metaphors: killa
Multies: tr3nt
Personal: killa
Punches: killa
Vocabulary: killa
Wordplay: killa
Overall: killa

[madchild]

CLOSED Killa Jones wins 5-3.