Killa Jones vs. -BAD NEWS- (5-1)

[bad news]

explained votes
no votes from LT/Legendary chaos, stinger or hawkeye
20 bars min.
/=end of line


ripshit u spit first. u have untill sunday, june 13th to post your spit if your dont then CHOOOKE JUST LIKE SPARK.

[RipShit]

20 bars minimum? what the fuck, i aint gonna spend a night typin out a fuckin battle, and i told you, i got shit to do so i aint gonna be spittin till later on in the week.

[Killa Jones]

Ill take the offer instead if you dont mind?


Bad News the only news you seem to take
Front page on the paper, "Killa Beats Bad News" thats even more heartache/1

I'll leave you lying breathless like a sudden heart attack
If the paramedics do revive you, i dare you to holla back/2

Another guy whos full of shit and talk's the talk
Now's ill beat him, so he cant blame even the hawk{eye}/3

20 bars and im doing mine double lined
Are you hating on lyrical thugs coz your rhymes and they turned blind{blind eye}/4

Your pathetic not even a real Mc
You just jealous of people who are better than you,umm...Envy/5

One win, no loses i bet you feel so proud
boasting bout his rap record coz he aint really endowed/6

Im killing you off after just a couple of barz
You so hypnotize its like Killa's a mirage/7

Ripshit pussied out, so i thought i'd take his place
I Ripped Shit up now its your turn for disgrace/8

Another victim on killa's list, ive stop playing these stupid games
Just dusting them off, already forgotten names/9

Tenth bar, how'd you like it so far?
Just playing the game you went and asked for!/10

Im like a smart guy when i put together these rhymes
Brain fluids pumping words, catalyst's creating enzymes/11

Im like Jay-Z im just gonna brush my shoulder off
Your bad news like russians with smirnoff/12

Getting in the ring with me, is like a date with tyson
First of goes your ear, then its abduction/13
Straight to the car,clutch,gear,accelaration
Now to god your showing all types of Adoration/14
Now im you fear you just have to face um
Like a nightmare when u snap out and awaken/15
Im freddy krugar bitch, you life has been taken
Lyrically not physically i bet you were all mistaken/16

Punk, pussy, bitch, Im delevering you this bad news
Like a paper boy on his route, screaming Fuck you like jason mewes/17

Im almost over, and could diss you all night
But unlucky for you, but the time has come for me to turn out the light/18

Ill be waiting for you spit to see what your made of
Will you come weak or hard, remember its just a game dawg/19

Newsreport over, Killa jones signing out
See you next time folks, im back without a doubt/20

[Tech Skillz]

so i can't vote here?

[AlMitE]

-BAD NEWS-
alright ripshit time to split your lip/
and flows so hard it'll hit you in the nuts so u can have kids/1
they hit so hard theyll give you a STD infection/
thats what u get for comin in this battle with no protection/2
i'll take a section, out of your spits/
and put ripshit out of commission for a lil bit/3
or maybe forever/
dont pull the lever if you dont want your head severed/4
yeah step up to the 20 bars/
i'll make u a star just by rippin off your arm wit this lyrical claw, ill take all your flaws/5
put them in a blender/
mix em up, and out will come stinger/6
yeah bitch your pretty bad your pretty sad/
but im glad/7
that i am battlin some scantly clad transvestite/
this dike cant even mothafucking type, im right/8
when i say rip-shit cant spit-shit/
even if a god helped him with his pen-min-ship/9
just-admit, that you are a lil bitch ass hoe/
and your flows are gonna go nowhere holmes/10
10 more bars to go/
the flows penetratin with ever keystroke/11
i'll smoke your flows for woke and toke/
then wen night comes time i'll snort you for coke/12
i'll soak the blood off may hands/
so theres no evidence that i brought ripshit to the promised land/13
i cuss more than anyone on the site/
but this is what you get for comin in this lyrical fight/14
its outta sight how get all my might throw you around like a redheaded dike/
its tight when i fly u like a kite/
and drop kick your flows and then come around like mike tyson when i bite/15
your ear off then clean the blood off the floor with a cream colored mop/
your a discrace to the race of hiphop your more like a rent a cop/16
so just back up rent-a-cop and give me my space/
i got a semi-loaded glock while you got a can of mace/17
who do u thinks gonna win this one/
i shot, missed, his face was stunned/18
but i didnt give him time to run/
he was fat, so i could reload my gun and wouldnt miss next time cuz he weight a ton/19
ok ripshit im done/
but remember ripshit u know its all in fun/20

[Killa Jones]

PREWRITTEN^^^
I took over there u shud b dissing me not rip shit
PATHETIC!!

[madchild]

CLOSED Killa Jones wins unless I get a new 20 bar verse written towards him in 12 hours by either Almite or Bad News. Ripshit clearly did not take this battle and that verse was obviously prewritten for Ripshit.

[madchild]

BAD NEWS's VERSE:

ok killa jay ready to pay/
u rap pretty good but its time for u to move away/1
ok kid u wanna go 20 bars/
ill send u to venus and a 1 way trip back to mars/2
you must be from mars cuz ur rappin against me/
boy i'll keep my pants saggin as im taggin my name on u for everyone to see/3
i hittin this flow up in 10 straight minutes/
because i made a mistake by rippin ripshit by spinin it/4
cuz i spin my flows 50 ways or none/
and make your flows do a 360 just for fun/5
bitch ass wanna test me/
ill stress this test, so i can win this battle and go on to the next worthy mc/6
you feel me g, ya re-re/
you see-see how ima make this coward mc bleed/7
u must got tit-tees/
cuz u gotta be shittin me/8
killa j must got emotional problems/
but ima a solve em', by kickin your ass in this battle column/9
rawg dawg u in your face then toss u/
i'll brush, rinse, then floss you/10
you know who your goin up against killa/
someone who wont die like micheal jackson in thriller/11
only 9 bars more to go/
make sure i didnt give you sars by this random flow/12
killa must be jonesin for a lose/
cuz im the type thatyll get u stoned then make u leave witha bruise/
youll face will look like tom cruise/13
in vanilla sky/
cuz you wont get by without lookin like i shoved a matchbox car in your eye/14
you aint fly, just ask any other cat on the eminem.net forum/
theyll tell you your flows are a step below boring/15
i'll piledrive u and make u go through the flooring/
while my man bad news is up keepin scorin/16
of how many times i can beat you/
eat you, and feed you to my pittbull, and that goes for anyone else in your crew/17
o wait you dont even have a crew but dont get blue/
you didnt have a clue that u bit off more than u can chew/18
dont come up to me with this cool bullshit/
cuz i'll slit your wrist and give you a mafia death kiss/19
im assuring that u might want a rematch/
so come see me again when u want you throat slashed/20

[HipHopGenius]

punches:killa
personals:killa
flow:killa
multies:neither
overall killa

bad news u cant say stuff like "u rap pretty good but " that just proved he won

[AlMitE]

punches:killa
personals:news
flow:news
multies:news
overall killa


ooo that was close killa but my vote is for bad news.

[-MaKaVeLi-]

punches:killa
personals:bad
flow:killa
multies:n
overall killa


and ya cant say "you feel me G"
...ur battlin him, u cant call hima G...

bad newz..dirt off ya shoulder?? YOU ARE WHITE...period.. :rolleyes:

[AlMitE]

no votes from LT/Legendary chaos, read tha rules.


dont count still 1-1, doesnt it suck to be a member of LT?

[Rappone]

Punches: Killa
Personals: Killa
Creativity: None
Multies: None
Enjoyment: Killa


Overall: Killa Jones.

[bad news]

ok...... 2-1

[TfLaMeZ]

killa-your verse was alright. It just seemed kinda boring, like you used a lot of filler or somethin(Im almost over, and could diss you all night)<--you seemed to say a lot lines like that(10th bar, how do you like it so far) those lines brought your quality down. Otherwise it came across pretty strong, your flow was a bit off, and you added some un necessary words in, but otherwise, like i said, It was pretty good.

Bad News- Your verse was suprisingly good. You had some okay disses, punches, and i didn't really see many personals. You started doing the same thing that killa did by using a lot of filler, to make us understand you are almost done with your verse. IT MAKES IT BORING! you need to make sure that in a 20 line verse you make every single line hard hitting. Your flow was definately okay. But you kept giving killa compliments, and dissing yourself..which i didn't understand.

ALL IN ALL:::::::: KILLA

[Killa Jones]

3-1 ...

[Eluzion]

punches:Killa
personals:Killa
flow:Killa
multies:none
overall:Killa

Killa-Your flow was pretty good, almost everyline was hard hitting, some words weren't needed but overall a really good spit.

Bad News-Suprisingly, it was pretty good. You had good flow, but some words weren't needed at all like the ones dissing yourself. You need to work on your punches and you'll start winning some battles.

Nice freestyles in both posts.

[Killa Jones]

4-1...uppin for more votes

[CookiezNCream20]

Creativity: Killa
Enjoyable: Killa
Flow: Killa
Metaphors: Killa
Multies: neither
Personal: neither
Punches: Killa
Structure: killa
Vocabulary: Killa
Wordplay: Killa
Overall: Killa

[Killa Jones]

5-1
good battle bad news

[madchild]

CLOSED Killa Jones wins 5-1.