Pimpchimp vs. Tr3nt (3-0) KO

[tr3nt]

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=47411#post47411 #1st link
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=47416#post47416 #2nd link

Two Spits each, I first, you, me you. in that order.
normal voting 3-0 knock out, else first to 5.
Don't make the battle too short nor too long
good luck.
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Pimpchimp, avatar like a dumbshit.. fuckit i'll call him bitch-tits//
acts like he's a chimp that'd rather be pimped by fags without bits//
equivilent to Eminem without the backwards E, a fake and a fullashit//
prove yourself to me and I'll change my outlook towards your image - bitch//

I only battle for fun, no reputation, but Pimpchimp makes me think twice//
I'd rather go into a casino, stake my reputation on this battle and throw dice//
You're a lyracist without a decent beat, bout to get swept of your fuckin feet//
im unkown, though I have talent, I give rap the meaning of god-damn-elite//

my first spit.. if I don't reply soon email me at: hsv_guy01@hotmail.com to tell me to reply.

tr3nt.

[pimpchimp]

You gotta be kiddin. That's not hittin - it's a quadraplegic flailin'. Come on:

Talking about backwards letters - got a number in his name
Don't know the difference between counting and spelling - they ain't the same
They're as different as spits from you and someone talented
I got confused - I thought it was a mime I'm battling
Your spits are - just as effective, maybe even worse
Can't even spell "lyricist" - seems idiocy is your curse
I'll make you remember this battle, and yo bitch, I'll tell you how
When you look in the mirror, you'll see the sweat on your brow
I'ma make you prespire when you respire, check the lesson
Seems this dude tr3nt is in dire need of a blessing
Because only a miracle will get you a win over me
Until then, I'll keep shittin' on the T-R-3.

[tr3nt]

hha fuck, I didn't know I mistyped that and stuffed up.. I'll spit later, can't be stuffed right now.

[tr3nt]

Alright, you got me, I spell with a numerical order//
but hey, at least my name don't sound like a medical disorder//
a pimped chimp? sounds more like an outta tune recorder//
you saying I can't spell? it's not flailing its failing, or falling whichever//
I couldn't tell, like a blind ass man telling how many fingers to sever//
he'd prolly do the thinkable and sever your inexpressed talent to rap//
yeah bitch, the name's t-r-3 come to make your talent come-to-life//
and show the world that you-can-rap.. but your no match-to-survive//

a badass LYRICIST/ showing you, you'll just have to insist//
or beg to have votes your way to win this and improve your bliss//
im a naturalist/ to the game, you try to be a perfectionist//
you got crap raps so you have to be a correction-ist*//
to cover your ass to make yourself look good against a creationist//

I'll leave you to scratch ur head about that one and ponder over what neads to be corrected//
like the man himself, Pac, my talent has fucking ressurected//
but you? your raps turned from trash and just depleted//

tr3nt
* = wasnt in the dictionary but you can tell what it means

[pimpchimp]

Now listen.

My spit wasn't weak, it was an exercise in education
Schoolin' any of these miniscule rapping abberations
You came back the secod time, tried to emulate my flow
But I adapt quickly to situations, call me H20
While you're hydrogen peroxide, aka H-O
And aiyyo, you don't know how to show talent though
I can use single syllables and still make it sound complicated
You need to INVENT words just to be appreciated
The name is Doomz, hell-sent, tr3nt just needs to get bent
Ain't you even figured out that I ain't TRYING yet?

**switch flows**

I switch my shit so...
Little bitches twitch and I leave 'em in stitches
Because they can't even match the RBI that I'm hittin
I ain't bullshittin, nah, I'm MVP
You already signed off on your grave when you RSVP'ed
Ooh. Dude thinks his pitiful flow is original
But approaching a keyboard to tr3nt is simply criminal
Jacking people's flows to show he's just incompetent
Shittin' all over the mic like he's incontinent
Just can't hold it - dude should just fold it
I've got the royal flush to his pair of two tens
So, yo, what happens next?
I'll show you what occurs when a dude is gettin' scurred
Simply from all the words that come outta my mouth
I'll show tr3nt exactly what battlerap is about
I stretched a bit on the length just to drive the point home
Tr3nt dude, you need to leave this rap shit alone.

[child prodigy]

before you guys go any faster, let people place some votes.
I'll do the second round of this.


tr3nt

Alright, you got me, I spell with a numerical order//
but hey, at least my name don't sound like a medical disorder//
a pimped chimp? sounds more like an outta tune recorder//
not bad. but i thought you said his name sounded like a medical disorder? why switch?
you saying I can't spell? it's not flailing its failing, or falling whichever//
I couldn't tell, like a blind ass man telling how many fingers to sever//
you kind of lost me there. not too strong of a punch.
he'd prolly do the thinkable and sever your inexpressed talent to rap//
yeah bitch, the name's t-r-3 come to make your talent come-to-life//
and show the world that you-can-rap.. but your no match-to-survive//
i see what you're doing here, not bad. but it seems like the same old response usually used in a battle.
a badass LYRICIST/ showing you, you'll just have to insist//
or beg to have votes your way to win this and improve your bliss//
im a naturalist/ to the game, you try to be a perfectionist//
you got crap raps so you have to be a correction-ist*//
to cover your ass to make yourself look good against a creationist//
trying to play for the multies but it didn'ty work out too well. not very hard hitting.
I'll leave you to scratch ur head about that one and ponder over what neads to be corrected//
like the man himself, Pac, my talent has fucking ressurected//
but you? your raps turned from trash and just depleted//
it was an okay closer. "interesting: pac- ressurected.

- Not your best verse. i get the impression you just wrote this just for the sake of a comeback.

Don't take me as being a dick. i just felt you could've done A LOT better. i expected much more from you.

pimpchimp

Now listen.

My spit wasn't weak, it was an exercise in education
Schoolin' any of these miniscule rapping abberations
strong vocab. implying he needing schooling. funny.
You came back the secod time, tried to emulate my flow
But I adapt quickly to situations, call me H20
While you're hydrogen peroxide, aka H-O
And aiyyo, you don't know how to show talent though
the first two lines were hard hitting but the last two? it seemed like a filler. for the sake of trying to be consistent.
I can use single syllables and still make it sound complicated
You need to INVENT words just to be appreciated
HARD hitting. that was an excellent punch.
The name is Doomz, hell-sent, tr3nt just needs to get bent
Ain't you even figured out that I ain't TRYING yet?
not bad. the last line seemed a little off-saying you're not trying.

**switch flows**

I switch my shit so...
Little bitches twitch and I leave 'em in stitches
Because they can't even match the RBI that I'm hittin
I ain't bullshittin, nah, I'm MVP
trying to be consistent. not bad on the multies.
You already signed off on your grave when you RSVP'ed
Ooh. Dude thinks his pitiful flow is original
But approaching a keyboard to tr3nt is simply criminal
okay line. didn't hit very hard. trying to keep with the abbrev.
Jacking people's flows to show he's just incompetent
Shittin' all over the mic like he's incontinent
Just can't hold it - dude should just fold it
I've got the royal flush to his pair of two tens
good stuff. it seems like you're just "playing" with him. first line of this packed a punch, the rest seemed basic
So, yo, what happens next?
I'll show you what occurs when a dude is gettin' scurred
Simply from all the words that come outta my mouth
I'll show tr3nt exactly what battlerap is about
not very effective but it was okay.
I stretched a bit on the length just to drive the point home
Tr3nt dude, you need to leave this rap shit alone.
that was a nice closer. explaning why you made your rap long and still dissing the opponent nicely.

- pretty good rap. i like the allusions toward games. it shows your jut playing with him. it fits in nicely.
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Consistency/Structure: pimpchimp
Creativity: pimpchimp
Enjoyable: pimpchimp
Flow: pimpchimp
Metaphors: tr3nt
Multies: tr3nt
Personal: pimpchimp
Punches: pimpchimp
Vocabulary: pimpchimp
Wordplay: pimpchimp
Overall:pimpchimp

[Killa Jones]

Consistency/Structure: pimpchimp
Creativity: pimpchimp
Enjoyable: pimpchimp
Flow: pimpchimp
Metaphors: tr3nt
Multies: pimpchimp
Personal: pimpchimp
Punches: pimpchimp
Vocabulary: pimpchimp
Wordplay: pimpchimp
Overall Pimpchimp

[tr3nt]

good shit pimp.. must admit, was a good win.. have to do that again sometime :P

[pimpchimp]

I ain't even won yet. It's only two votes.

[tr3nt]

close enough - thats enough of my freeposting.

[Rappone]

Yo, Ima break it down...

Tr3nt:
Pimpchimp, avatar like a dumbshit.. fuckit i'll call him bitch-tits//
acts like he's a chimp that'd rather be pimped by fags without bits//
equivilent to Eminem without the backwards E, a fake and a fullashit//
prove yourself to me and I'll change my outlook towards your image - bitch//

Second Line lost me... Third line was kinda weak punching... Pimpchimp is black, so he cant be <=> to Em. Last line was kinda good coulda had more support from above ^^

I only battle for fun, no reputation, but Pimpchimp makes me think twice//
I'd rather go into a casino, stake my reputation on this battle and throw dice//
You're a lyracist without a decent beat, bout to get swept of your fuckin feet//
im unkown, though I have talent, I give rap the meaning of god-damn-elite//

Hmmm... All sound like fillers... No decent punches in any of those really. Might aswell make 'em less babyish, :D .


Pimp:
Talking about backwards letters - got a number in his name
Don't know the difference between counting and spelling - they ain't the same
They're as different as spits from you and someone talented
I got confused - I thought it was a mime I'm battling

The opener was okay. Third line lacked a metaphor and you coulda turned the whole second bar into a multi.

Your spits are - just as effective, maybe even worse
Can't even spell "lyricist" - seems idiocy is your curse
I'll make you remember this battle, and yo bitch, I'll tell you how
When you look in the mirror, you'll see the sweat on your brow

First two lines here are, errm, boring. The next 2 are okay. Lackin creativity there. Needed alot of wordplay n metaphors there.

I'ma make you prespire when you respire, check the lesson
Seems this dude tr3nt is in dire need of a blessing
Because only a miracle will get you a win over me
Until then, I'll keep shittin' on the T-R-3.

This spit was whack. I dpnt think you waz givin it your best Pimp. The closer line was bad. The first three were okay though, Lackin alot of rhyme-decoration.


Tr3nt 2:
Alright, you got me, I spell with a numerical order//
but hey, at least my name don't sound like a medical disorder//
a pimped chimp? sounds more like an outta tune recorder//
you saying I can't spell? it's not flailing its failing, or falling whichever//

Yo you mixed us all up when you said shit about medical disorder and recorder. Make your rhymes follow. Third line doesnt flow.

I couldn't tell, like a blind ass man telling how many fingers to sever//
he'd prolly do the thinkable and sever your inexpressed talent to rap//
yeah bitch, the name's t-r-3 come to make your talent come-to-life//
and show the world that you-can-rap.. but your no match-to-survive//

First line was good, finishin off the fourth line of above. The next line there lacked rhyming, and skill. I dont see why put dashes there when there are no multies. ^^Hardly any punches too

a badass LYRICIST/ showing you, you'll just have to insist//
or beg to have votes your way to win this and improve your bliss//
im a naturalist/ to the game, you try to be a perfectionist//
you got crap raps so you have to be a correction-ist*//
to cover your ass to make yourself look good against a creationist//

....Hmmm, The first two here are kinda toungue tying, and arent all that tight. The second bar is childish. Inventing words isnt an impressive way to keystyle, else I'd have a whole verse with the same rhyme.

I'll leave you to scratch ur head about that one and ponder over what neads to be corrected//
like the man himself, Pac, my talent has fucking ressurected//
but you? your raps turned from trash and just depleted//

No real punches here. a good closer, best line in the verse there. Lacking wordplay and phores a bit confusing.


Pimp 2:
My spit wasn't weak, it was an exercise in education
Schoolin' any of these miniscule rapping abberations
You came back the secod time, tried to emulate my flow
But I adapt quickly to situations, call me H20

Good opener. Lacks a multi. The second bar was dope, But try improving flow there.

While you're hydrogen peroxide, aka H-O
And aiyyo, you don't know how to show talent though
I can use single syllables and still make it sound complicated
You need to INVENT words just to be appreciated

Hydrogen Peroxide is H2O2, so your point stands useless. The second line was whack. Second bar was tight though, could have been supported but oh well.

The name is Doomz, hell-sent, tr3nt just needs to get bent
Ain't you even figured out that I ain't TRYING yet?

Well, Im the one that kinda figured that out... l0l.
**switch flows**

I switch my shit so...
Little bitches twitch and I leave 'em in stitches
Because they can't even match the RBI that I'm hittin
I ain't bullshittin, nah, I'm MVP
You already signed off on your grave when you RSVP'ed

An Ok opener. Played out rhyming though.... MVP? Lol. 4th line was okay too.

Ooh. Dude thinks his pitiful flow is original
But approaching a keyboard to tr3nt is simply criminal
Jacking people's flows to show he's just incompetent
Shittin' all over the mic like he's incontinent

First bar there lacks flow and multi, could have turned off the hook with wordplay, but blah. Bar 2 made me laugh. Thats all.

Just can't hold it - dude should just fold it
I've got the royal flush to his pair of two tens
So, yo, what happens next?
I'll show you what occurs when a dude is gettin' scurred

Dude? Fuck. Second line is okay from up. Lacks sufficient rhyming ==>>>

Simply from all the words that come outta my mouth
I'll show tr3nt exactly what battlerap is about
I stretched a bit on the length just to drive the point home
Tr3nt dude, you need to leave this rap shit alone.

Blah again. Okay first bar. The closer was okay too... You lacked wordplay and multies pimp.

Categories!
Consistency/Structure: pimp
Creativity: Blah... Pimp made his go away.
Enjoyable: Errrrm, Pimp's second one. lol
Flow: Pimp
Multies: tr3nt
Personal: Lacked strong ones....
Punches: Pimp had abit more
Vocabulary: Pimp... Made up words arent in dictionaries :D
Overall: Pimp

[pimpchimp]

Wow, Rapp. You were quite efficient in tearing apart an effortless rhyme. Good stuff! You observant soul, you.

[tr3nt]

I'd say thats really fair..wd pimp, now I know what I gotta work on to improve.. thks

[madchild]

CLOSED Pimpchimp wins by KO (3-0).