BigMann313 vs. Killa Jones (1-5)

[BigMann313]

RULES

10-20 lines
1 round
no hate votes
no crew votes
no dr votes


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or
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ill spit later im busy right now

[BigMann313]

here we go again another battle against rusty jones
you ain got no crew, thats why u always busting alone
smiles on ur face look like mildew ill wipe that off with 409
hitting you directly with a bat demolishing your spine
im lyrically attacking you like a kamikaze ready to crash
im sorta like the rock ill be kicking your candy ass
im not a judge but ill still increase your sentence
putting you away behind bars, cuz i ain got no repentance*
i have a quickness that leaves u wit a death killing sickness
think i such huh? if thats the case, here u go, lick this**
ill slice your head like an apple being sliced just to get it clear
cuz wut i am saying will leave you condition severe
this school, hope you are learning your lesson about the bigmann
u listening? or have my lyrics already deffected ur attention span

*repentance means remorse for your past conduct
** as in my balls

LINKS:
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=3880
(no other battles to vote on right now) post it later

[Killa Jones]

Killa steppin up on the one's and the two's, after you here this shit im afraid your threw, Kill you of lyrically, then tear into you, you didnt throw one hit at me, u just a punk like in malibu*.
Malibu's Most Wanted. i.e Lame Rapper

Yeah i might be rusty, but there's no way im'a lose to you
And Yeah im not fussy, Ill demolise you before i persue
You think we in school then you just a little bitch
Im the play ground bully, kicking your ass, adding you to my hitch
SO i dont have a crew, do you really feel wanted?
"Look at me im lyrical thugs, i can boost and go and taunt it!"
Man you pathetic, i suggest you get a life
You called me a loner, when you need the crew, man you beggin for the knife
Talking bout the rock, is he your fuckin idol
Mine's Notorious B.I.G, Not BigMann, He's a fuckin sucidal

Your rhymes are beyond you, you dont know what your saying
you aint no gangsta so stop talking bout spraying
You need a book to help you rhyme, thats why you talk so much shit
Bottom of the class dont even know the alpha-bet
Go back to nursery and wait til you graduate
Or if you a gansta and aint fake, maybe you'll get shot and wont wake.

[BigMann313]

nice verse man, just thought u used fed a little but it aight i ain care, UPPIN FO VOTES

[bad news]

Categories
Consistency/Structure:bigmann
Creativity:bigmann
Enjoyable: Killa
Flow:Killa
Metaphors:Killa
Multies:bigmann
Personal:killa
Punches: bigmann
Structure:killa
Vocabulary: killa
Wordplay: killa
Overall:Killa Jones

[Killa Jones]

1-0 uppin

[$tingeR]

overall, a VERY weak verse by your standards bigman. like 2 punches, no wordplay, dissed yourself subliminally and mostly a verse of filler. sorry. here we go again another battle against rusty jones
you ain got no crew, thats why u always busting alone
not bad as an opener, a punch, but doesnt hit hard
smiles on ur face look like mildew ill wipe that off with 409
hitting you directly with a bat demolishing your spine
i really dont like this bar, the bat line is like, not needed and wont get you anywhere in a battle.
im lyrically attacking you like a kamikaze ready to crash
im sorta like the rock ill be kicking your candy ass
not too bad, bit of a punch still doesnt hit hard though
im not a judge but ill still increase your sentence
putting you away behind bars, cuz i ain got no repentance*
filler, doesnt hit hard and is not needed in my opinion
i have a quickness that leaves u wit a death killing sickness
think i such huh? if thats the case, here u go, lick this**
too simple, and again not a punch
ill slice your head like an apple being sliced just to get it clear
cuz wut i am saying will leave you condition severe
again not really a punch at all. just saying what you are gonna do etc.
this school, hope you are learning your lesson about the bigmann
u listening? or have my lyrics already deffected ur attention span
horrible closer. why? i think the second line disses yourself- think about it you said your lyrics were boring as they dont hold peoples attention span!
overall, a VERY weak verse by your standards bigman. like 2 punches, no wordplay, dissed yourself subliminally and mostly a verse of filler. sorry.

Killa steppin up on the one's and the two's, after you here this shit im afraid your threw, Kill you of lyrically, then tear into you, you didnt throw one hit at me, u just a punk like in malibu*.
didnt thow one hit: a diss based on fact! not bad intro
Malibu's Most Wanted. i.e Lame Rapper

Yeah i might be rusty, but there's no way im'a lose to you
And Yeah im not fussy, Ill demolise you before i persue
didnt like it, to simple didnt hit hard
You think we in school then you just a little bitch
Im the play ground bully, kicking your ass, adding you to my hitch
the bully bits kinda funny, but this bar again was weak and didnt hit hard
SO i dont have a crew, do you really feel wanted?
"Look at me im lyrical thugs, i can boost and go and taunt it!"
didnt quite get the meaning of the second line... a personal, but weak
Man you pathetic, i suggest you get a life
You called me a loner, when you need the crew, man you beggin for the knife
filler
Talking bout the rock, is he your fuckin idol
Mine's Notorious B.I.G, Not BigMann, He's a fuckin sucidal
nor sure about this bar either...doesnt hit hard...and if there was another round (which there isnt but still) then the BIG idol bit would probably give a lot of ammunition.

Your rhymes are beyond you, you dont know what your saying
you aint no gangsta so stop talking bout spraying
i kinda liked the 1st line, second line is generic
You need a book to help you rhyme, thats why you talk so much shit
Bottom of the class dont even know the alpha-bet
second line was kinda funny, not bad
Go back to nursery and wait til you graduate
Or if you a gansta and aint fake, maybe you'll get shot and wont wake.
weak diss...poor last line

Also a very weak verse by you killa. neither of you focused on punches or personals and there was nothing creative to speak of.
Consistency/Structure:bigman
Creativity:bigman
Enjoyable: bigman
Flow: bigman
Metaphors: bigman
Multies: bigman
Personal: killa
Punches: killa
Structure:bigman
Vocabulary: bigman (just a question...r u using rhymezone i never seen any long words in your stuff before)
Wordplay: none whatsoever
Overall: has to go to bigman i guess. VERY weak battle, you can both do so much better.

[BigMann313]

thanx stinger, this really helps me more, and no im not using rhymezone, im reading dictionary lol,

1-1

[hawkeye]

Consistency/Structure:bm
Creativity:kill
Enjoyable:kill
Flow:bm
Metaphors:n
Multies:n
Personal:kill
Punches: kill
Vocabulary:bm
Wordplay: n
Overall Killa jones

this was weak for btoh of you but killa had a few more interesting ideas

[Killa Jones]

2-1 uppin. thankx for voting guys. More votes.

[BigMann313]

heres my other link
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=46893#post46893

[-MaKaVeLi-]

Consistency/Structure:killa
Creativity:big
Enjoyable:killa
Flow:killa
Metaphors:n
Multies:n
Personal:big
Punches: big
Vocabulary: killa
Wordplay: killa
Overall Killa jones

[AlMitE]

Consistency/Structure:killa
Creativity:killa
Enjoyable:killa
Flow:killa
Metaphors:bigmann
Multies:killa
Personal:killa
Punches:killa
Vocabulary: killa
Wordplay: bigmann
Overall Killa jones

vote-Killa Jones

[Killa Jones]

4-1
more votes

[LSD RaBBiT]

Categories
Consistency/Structure:big
Creativity:killa
Enjoyable: Killa
Flow:big
Metaphors:Killa
Multies:big
Personals:killa
Punches: bigmann
Structure:killa
Vocabulary: big
Wordplay: killa
Overall:Killa Jones

[madchild]

CLOSED Killa Jones wins 5-1.