Child Prodigy vs. TfLaMeZ (3-0) KO

[TfLaMeZ]

1 verse each, no line limit, just not too long, same voting rules as always, and you can pick who goes first.

[child prodigy]

fine by me....

you go first.

round 1....fight!

[TfLaMeZ]

give up: an act of losing by quitting/
a word not in my mind when it comes to spitting/
i inflict pain, and proceed to winning/
i hope you're afraid, this is only my beginning//
so i'm askin you to try and 'survive this'/
george bush of violence, you have 'deprived fists'/
i pass punches and send these 'flying hits'/
you're equal to the use of a 'dying diss'//
i could defeat the weakest person, you'd still be worse/
no purpose, your and undetermined battle, a terrible verse/
a cure with no curse, a car stuck in neutral and goin in reverse/
your meaning has no worth, not even need to converse//
this pain i feel is just weakness leaving my body/
i'm so strong mentally i'm compared to ghandi//
these proposistions crossing my mind defeat your existence/
you battled me what seems twice, and i won, why the persistence?/
you mean little to me, and half the people here, why stick with this/
you're the last thing that i need compared to my giant hit list//


http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=46078#post46078

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=46082#post46082

[child prodigy]

First off you never won, i'm greater, just check the votes kid/
Don't believe me? Then ask the moderators that posted. (BigMann, Junior, etc.)
Way to hyperbolize your punches with quotes/
What? You think when you verbalize you get votes?
You highlight your lines, so who are you to boast?
The reason you're feeling weakness in your body is me
Your hits are weak, like Ja Rule in an Irv Gotti free.
This is a battle, did you just mention the president?
Just like him you must have a speech impediment.
Describing me as weak just means you're not understanding me/
You can't accept that i bust any mic that you demand of me.
To wish for anything less would be a TFlamez fantasy/
Judged by your rap, this is the third win that you hand to me!
Your analogy of the car is like your rhyme, it's fake/
Here's mine, i put you to a stop like an anti-lock brake.
I feel the same about you, an opinion that's endearing/
Let me lead you to the right direction with my rack-and-pinion steering.
When you said hits? i think you meant wishes/
After i extinguish TFlamez, comes you other bitches..
See you've been mislead don't get ahead of what you felt/
When you spoke of weakness why did you mention yourself?
How can you make fun of my rhymes when you haven't heard it?
How can you say you'll win the battle when you don't deserve it?
I smell a pre-written rap, wait, I can't let blame go onto haste/
I think you copy and paste. TFlamez: a rapper that's gone to waste.
I don't feel like using good rhymes on this sap/
So i'll put this freestyle and its lines to a wrap.

[TfLaMeZ]

alright, we need votes.

just for the record: i did not prewrite that. And the votes on the other site were not finished, it was left a tie as far as i know.

[Killa Jones]

Creativity:Flamez
Enjoyable: child prodigy
Flow:CP
Metaphors:CP
Multies:F
Personal:CP
Punches: CP
Structure:F
Vocabulary: F
Wordplay: CP
Overall:cHILD pRODIGY

[TfLaMeZ]

0-1, still uppin for votes

[$tingeR]

First off you never won, i'm greater, just check the votes kid/
Don't believe me? Then ask the moderators that posted. (BigMann, Junior, etc.)i like the flow here, not a bad diss
Way to hyperbolize your punches with quotes/
What? You think when you verbalize you get votes?
again i like this. not the hardest of punches but nice vocab and flow
You highlight your lines, so who are you to boast?
this line isnt needed...
The reason you're feeling weakness in your body is me
Your hits are weak, like Ja Rule in an Irv Gotti free.
kinda played out now... but still nice diss and flow
This is a battle, did you just mention the president?
Just like him you must have a speech impediment.
not feeling this diss really but good vocab and flow
Describing me as weak just means you're not understanding me/
You can't accept that i bust any mic that you demand of me.
again real nice flow but not hitting hard
To wish for anything less would be a TFlamez fantasy/
Judged by your rap, this is the third win that you hand to me!
nice rhyming words and pretty good punch
Your analogy of the car is like your rhyme, it's fake/
Here's mine, i put you to a stop like an anti-lock brake.
not bad, but still doesnt hit hard
I feel the same about you, an opinion that's endearing/
Let me lead you to the right direction with my rack-and-pinion steering.
nice similie but... again doesnt hit hard
When you said hits? i think you meant wishes/
After i extinguish TFlamez, comes you other bitches..
played out extinguished line, bar of filler really
See you've been mislead don't get ahead of what you felt/
When you spoke of weakness why did you mention yourself?
simple, but i like it
How can you make fun of my rhymes when you haven't heard it?
How can you say you'll win the battle when you don't deserve it?
again simple but nice
I smell a pre-written rap, wait, I can't let blame go onto haste/
I think you copy and paste. TFlamez: a rapper that's gone to waste.
one of the best bars- pesonal and hits quite hard
I don't feel like using good rhymes on this sap/
So i'll put this freestyle and its lines to a wrap.
weak closer
ok i liked the flow and vocab of this, but the punches just didnt hit hard enough, and there werent enough metas/similies. 7/10

give up: an act of losing by quitting/
a word not in my mind when it comes to spitting/
i inflict pain, and proceed to winning/
i hope you're afraid, this is only my beginning//
so i'm askin you to try and 'survive this'/
doesnt hit, mostly filler in my opinion
george bush of violence, you have 'deprived fists'/
i pass punches and send these 'flying hits'/
you're equal to the use of a 'dying diss'//
i could defeat the weakest person, you'd still be worse/
no purpose, your and undetermined battle, a terrible verse/weak doesnt hit hard,not really punches....
a cure with no curse, a car stuck in neutral and goin in reverse/
your meaning has no worth, not even need to converse//
i liked the first line, this bar was better i think
this pain i feel is just weakness leaving my body/
i'm so strong mentally i'm compared to ghandi//
nice bar...but not much of a purpose in the battle
these proposistions crossing my mind defeat your existence/
you battled me what seems twice, and i won, why the persistence?/
better. a much needed personal
you mean little to me, and half the people here, why stick with this/
you're the last thing that i need compared to my giant hit list//
weak diss. this was very weak by your standards Tflamez... 5/10

vote: child prodigy

[BigMann313]

Creativity: Flamez
Enjoyable: Prodigy
Flow: Prodigy
Metaphors: Prodigy
Multies: Flamex
Personal:Prodigy
Punches: Prodigy
Structure: Flamez
Vocabulary: Flamez
Wordplay: Prodigy
Overall: Child Prodigy

[TfLaMeZ]

0-3, looks like you won, nice battle. Guess i needed to step it up more. There's always nextime...lol

[madchild]

CLOSED Child Prodigy won by KO (3-0).

*Child Prodigy, please PM me your two links of where you have voted. If I don't get a PM, expect to have all your future callouts and battles deleted. If you don't understand what I'm talking about, read the Battle Rule Sticky.

Child Prodigy's Links:


http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=3984

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=4008