View Full Version : my 1st freestyle,against whoever
InfiniteE
08-30-2003, 01:01 PM
Now listen/im sittin at home reading what u all r dishin/n from the looks of things in here/2 find a good emcee’s/like tryin 2 catch the biggest fish in the sea/using the ming from ur shoe string/n tying it onto ur dingaling/it wont work/im like a cook/bout to cook you/stick u wit a toothpick/see if ur done/nope/u still simmering/getting pissed/cuz u got dissed/n don’t have any comebacks 2 reply to this/u gonna try/but ull just swing/miss/n get dismissed/u getting the jist?/ this is no jest/im at the top of the my game/like a water apex/or crest/n from this zenith/I thank God for my gift/the boost he gave me/my lift/now im a cynical/clinical/one man army/you can shoot me with anything/n still not harm me/Im the equivalent to Slim Shady/when he said that any emcee that chooses to go against me/is getting takin advantage of/like Monica Lewinski/my axioms are so strong/that they can make a mute start singing a song/im King Kong in this subject/you’re just a pesky insect/trying to object/a little germ that im gonna disinfect/getting heated/because against me you have no effect/ my intellect/is in well respect/and can’t be touched/so don’t attempt it/because you’ll get crushed/chewed up/swallowed/and become a piece of shit in the toilet that gets flushed
Rappone
08-30-2003, 01:18 PM
:) man that was great dawg keep it up, but ure flow needs abit of improvement thas all, the rest iz good. lyrics good evrythin else good dawg. ;) keep it up.
Oh yah and it waz good sport dawg u dint vote dope fa' urself dawg :) most ppl would do it neway, u wan me to battle/cypher wit u?
InfiniteE
08-30-2003, 01:50 PM
i dont care man,thx for the support,its good 2 see my white ass is decent at my favorite thing to do[rap]...lol...i think my shits been gettin better every since me n Slitt did "Permanent Scars"...that was my way to get my foot in the door....yea,we could cypher or whatever...its up 2 you...but if i dont reply 4 a couple days its cuz the 4um wont let me post,it fucks up all the time when i try to post.i have to put up new subjects 2 get my stuff posted,n even that only works half the time...if u got msn messenger or aol or the aol messenger u can talk 2 me when im online if i cant post...
my aol screen name's RicHKid33
n the email addy's RicHKid33@aol.com
or on the msn messenger the screen name and addy's InfiniteE_1@hotmail.com
Slitt Ristz
08-30-2003, 06:57 PM
what is an axiom?
InfiniteE
08-30-2003, 07:42 PM
an axiom is a saying or kinda like a proverb
InfiniteE
08-30-2003, 10:12 PM
I’m strong willed and skilled/come after me and you’ll get killed/blood n guts spilled/bodies milled/sent 6 feet under/sealed/in a field so no one’ll find you/im a genius at my work/and won’t leave them any clue/my anger keeps me fueled/maintains my mind on the things I have to do/InfiniteE/the man u don’t wanna see/the invisible/invincible/impenetrable/paralyzed white emcee/im undeniably/to this society/just a beginner/but still I make fake emcees skitter/scatter/by tossing them off a banister/watchin their bones splitter/splatter/shatter/into little pieces of matter/I improve/with every move/that I make/my rhymes are as strong as a highly guarded barrack/and immune to any attack/i won't step down/from an assault/ill take care of it then and there/until its finished/then i take the win/and file it in my vault
jersey#12
08-31-2003, 01:22 AM
yo that wuz tight bro keep yo shit up
InfiniteE
08-31-2003, 01:10 PM
thx
Gh0$T
08-31-2003, 03:46 PM
well dne dats tight, keep it up bro!
peace
Element
08-31-2003, 04:18 PM
My vote: its dope,keep it up
InfiniteE
08-31-2003, 11:42 PM
thx to the ppl dat voted n posted...ull be seein me
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