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HipHopGenius
06-04-2004, 12:16 AM
ok we had a little battle on the lt site so here it goes tell us who won

Lyrical Thugs

deagle50 verse

after i get through with ya'll and tylenol
ill leave him awed and unable to smile at all
i seen ya mother with half of her scrotum sac saggin
through her shorts till it sparks the ground whilst its saggin
call on me to elimnate the hiphop smart pest
then conquer the remaining when i part the rest
i charred ya vest and rhymes penetrated ya chest
slap the shit out yo bitch renovated ya nest
my progressiveness steps is never lesser than the best
not affected by this depressive stess or my excessive arrests


sparks verse

my spits is makin yall bitches fall faster den the berlin wall
kickin yall bitches ass like dis turned out to be a urban brawl
ill rip out yo voice box out like im steven sugale
watch out befo yall chumps become good friends with a musket ball
rabit you are a little cartoon bitch ass punk
im exposin you for da little spotted skunk
you are,watch out rabbit, ill let LT loose out on ya and tell dem to stab it
rezz dont get me started on yo untalented self,spittin till ya go insane and end up to kill yo self
knockin ya over like im a batterin ram, hittin ya till you cant stand
on your 2 feet, watch out befo LT leaves yall bitches in a deep sleep

juniors verse

your flows looked over like they was literaly commercials
handing out free tickets to hell its politicaly contraversial
mike tyson combos so im rippin your brains through your ear
causing seisures with the way i express pain through your fears
giving you such a headache the tylenol wont help the sting
im droppin so many meteorites that i'll make sprint feel the ring
so can you hear me now cause im screaming inside your dreams
step down and advocate the throne and handle it to the supreme
verbally abusing and amusing, while using vers to beat you down
rip your ears and place them in front of my face so they hear my sound

HHG CREW


My verse
just stop spittin this garbage please read ya flows then think
this group doesnt have the mantality to battle nsynce
im sick of this LT someone help me ya are nuttin but industry
so please dont go dissin me or else ya will be history
your like a tape in a vcr your bout to get ejected
you guys are fake thugs in the streets hopin not to get detected
and even if you had doe by women you would still get rejected
plus no woman wants a dick that looks dyslexic
you guys are new kids on the block just freshmen im a senior
i get wrapped around women ya dicks get wrapped around ya fingers

Tylenol Rabbits verse

your styles all in error; the newspaper'll take care of it/,but i dont know what theyll do to you cuz your rhymes sound desperate/1
and if thats true my punches'll manually strangle you like a manakin and force you to use a respirator/
cuz Im half drunk and i dont mean to hate, but i can still see that your rhymes are ugly, even if i cant tell right from straight/
and only youve been played,tatters and rated in the bottom eight of a site that has only six different places/
you think your so atrocious' that you smoke shit and say its coke laced, when its only peanut butter,toast,and fruit paste/
I spit with quick haste, burn your lyrics,and then leave an after taste/
Im ill enough to rip your eyes out and puff some mace on em/then ush them back in the other way around so you see your brain with a sign that says mental case on it/
and if you want suspense heres somethin to look foward for/
if your lookin for my two cents your gonna have to wait for my next post/


rezz verse
killin,stabbin,fuckin wit niggas throats
no joke, leave anti-dote for the dead niggas dat choke
my rhymes twist and spin ya mind in slow motion
leave poisonous potion, got these niggas worn into erosion
u da next one chosen, im dozen reading ur postin
lryical thugs implosion,while they feel the raft of my raps explsoion
these niggas dead before dis battled even started
r u retarted, fuckin wit us, make lryical thugs departed
these mutha fuckers makin me lose my temper
we betta ,bash all ya heads,crush em up in a blender
these niggas tender,cant tell wat is their gender
actin like bitches,the next post these niggas will surrender

Stinger and bigman were suspose to be in this but since Stinger neva posted we took bigman out of it and made it a 3 on 3 match all votes must be expalined in either categories or qoutes from the verse.....you must vote on what crew had the best of all three verses
First to 7 votes wins 5 ko

bad news
06-04-2004, 12:35 AM
i vote for lyrical thugz because juniors verse just carryed deagles and sparks verse throught he whole battle. hhgs verse was good but hard to read at times. tlenol rabbits verse was good. rez ur verse was tight but it needs work on the vocab.

vote: LT

HipHopGenius
06-04-2004, 05:33 PM
that vote dont count cause everyone knows your almite and you want to in LT so bad that you will do anything to get in

$tingeR
06-04-2004, 05:44 PM
oh shit, sorry completley forgot about this :( i got your email the other day HHg but i just completley forgot! i will vote anyway...

well as there are so many verses im just gonna explain my vote. basically LT team had like about 3 punches in all their rhymes....! whats going on...junior where were your punches? i think you concentrated too much on elaborate multies and forgot the punches and content. i give it to HHg`s team as they had generally better vocab, flow and HHG had more punches than the rest of you put together by the look of things.

vote: HHG and co.

madchild
06-04-2004, 06:02 PM
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madchild
06-04-2004, 08:31 PM
Lyrical Thugs

deagle50 verse

"after i get through with ya'll and tylenol
ill leave him awed and unable to smile at all"

Alright intro. I think the first line needs to be re-phrased a bit to get the point across that they will be in pain and need tylenol. Good choice of rhyming words. ie. tylenol and smile~at~all.

"i seen ya mother with half of her scrotum sac saggin
through her shorts till it sparks the ground whilst its saggin"

Bad bar. Never rhyme with the exact same word. ie. saggin

"call on me to elimnate the hiphop smart pest
then conquer the remaining when i part the rest"

Bad bar. Just didn't have any punch nor creativity.

"i charred ya vest and rhymes penetrated ya chest
slap the shit out yo bitch renovated ya nest"

Not bad. Should make this more like a metaphor.

"my progressiveness steps is never lesser than the best
not affected by this depressive stess or my excessive arrests"

Bad closer. You need to diss your opponent more, especially with personals.

sparks verse

"my spits is makin yall bitches fall faster den the berlin wall
kickin yall bitches ass like dis turned out to be a urban brawl"

Pretty good intro. Good use of metaphors.

"ill rip out yo voice box out like im steven sugale
watch out befo yall chumps become good friends with a musket ball"

Didn't really like this bar. Need to match up syllables on lines better.

rabit you are a little cartoon bitch ass punk
im exposin you for da little spotted skunk

Childish bar. Boring rhyming words. ie. punk and skunk are blah and newbish.

"you are,watch out rabbit, ill let LT loose out on ya and tell dem to stab it
rezz dont get me started on yo untalented self,spittin till ya go insane and end up to kill yo self"

Worst bar yet. Bd structure, sloppy, and you're rhyminh self with self like Ol'Dirty Bastard.

"knockin ya over like im a batterin ram, hittin ya till you cant stand
on your 2 feet, watch out befo LT leaves yall bitches in a deep sleep"

Doesn't rhyme. Could of made the battering ram idea in a metaphor. I haven't seen too many personals yet.

juniors verse

"your flows looked over like they was literaly commercials
handing out free tickets to hell its politicaly contraversial"

I can see you've worked on your technique, but this intro didn't really come as a punch too hard. And the rhyming words weren't great. ie. Literally(4 syll.)~commercials(3 syll.) and politically(5 syllables)~contraversial(4 syll.)

"mike tyson combos so im rippin your brains through your ear
causing seisures with the way i express pain through your fears"

Not bad idea and creativity but should of used multies on the end somehow.

"giving you such a headache the tylenol wont help the sting
im droppin so many meteorites that i'll make sprint feel the ring"

Last line was dope as fuck. Pretty good bar.

"so can you hear me now cause im screaming inside your dreams
step down and advocate the throne and handle it to the supreme"

Awesome first line, made me laugh. Not bad bar all around.

"verbally abusing and amusing, while using vers to beat you down
rip your ears and place them in front of my face so they hear my sound"

First line didn't really make much sense to me in the wording. Average closer. You're really improving on your structure and consistency though.

HHG CREW

My verse

"just stop spittin this garbage please read ya flows then think
this group doesnt have the mantality to battle nsynce"

Not bad intro. Rhyming words were good. ie. then~think and n-sync.

im sick of this LT someone help me ya are nuttin but industry
so please dont go dissin me or else ya will be history

Not a great bar by any means. You didn't make the industry point come across all that well. It didn't really punch as hard as you could of made this. Use metaphors.

"your like a tape in a vcr your bout to get ejected
you guys are fake thugs in the streets hopin not to get detected"

Decent.

"and even if you had doe by women you would still get rejected
plus no woman wants a dick that looks dyslexic"

First line was horrible, making the rest of the bar kind of horrible.

"you guys are new kids on the block just freshmen im a senior
i get wrapped around women ya dicks get wrapped around ya fingers"

Bad closer.

Tylenol Rabbits verse

your styles all in error; the newspaper'll take care of it/,but i dont know what theyll do to you cuz your rhymes sound desperate/1

Bad intro. Could of made a multie on the rhyming words.

and if thats true my punches'll manually strangle you like a manakin and force you to use a respirator/
cuz Im half drunk and i dont mean to hate, but i can still see that your rhymes are ugly, even if i cant tell right from straight/
and only youve been played,tatters and rated in the bottom eight of a site that has only six different places/
you think your so atrocious' that you smoke shit and say its coke laced, when its only peanut butter,toast,and fruit paste/
I spit with quick haste, burn your lyrics,and then leave an after taste/
Im ill enough to rip your eyes out and puff some mace on em/then ush them back in the other way around so you see your brain with a sign that says mental case on it/
and if you want suspense heres somethin to look foward for/
if your lookin for my two cents your gonna have to wait for my next post/

You need to work on your structures. I don't know where half the bars are lol and they don't even rhyme sometimes. I wasn't into what you were saying either for the part.

rezz verse

"killin,stabbin,fuckin wit niggas throats
no joke, leave anti-dote for the dead niggas dat choke"

The intro was pretty bad to start off. Work on your structure too. Could make some metaphors out of things that you said very easily.

"my rhymes twist and spin ya mind in slow motion
leave poisonous potion, got these niggas worn into erosion"

I can you see you were trying to be creative with your idea and wordplays. I didn't really feel it though. motion and erosion have a different syllable count, which is really good.

"u da next one chosen, im dozen reading ur postin
lryical thugs implosion,while they feel the raft of my raps explsoion"

First line was horrible english and doesn't make sense with the slang dozen that I think you're trying to pull off.

"these niggas dead before dis battled even started
r u retarted, fuckin wit us, make lryical thugs departed"

Blah

"these mutha fuckers makin me lose my temper
we betta ,bash all ya heads,crush em up in a blender"

Doesn't rhyme and doesn't punch. A bad bar in general.

"these niggas tender,cant tell wat is their gender
actin like bitches,the next post these niggas will surrender"

Not bad closer.

LT Crew Scores:
Deagle - 5.5/10
Sparks - 6/10
Junior - 8/10
Total - 19.5/30

HHG Crew Scores:
HHG - 6/10
T-R(ex) - 5/10
rezz - 5.5/10
Total - 16.5/30

Vote - LT
(I don't know how your voting system is working, but you can match up the scores if you want to get each vote for a match.

Get your links up. You have 24 hours or I close this thread.

HipHopGenius
06-04-2004, 11:52 PM
EDIT> No Freeposting. Don't forget to drop your links.

HipHopGenius
06-05-2004, 12:38 PM
LINKS:

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=3813&page=2
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=3795

Killa Jones
06-07-2004, 03:27 PM
Vote:- Lyrical Thugs

Juniors verse was hot.
Fav Line:- mike tyson combos so im rippin your brains through your ear
causing seisures with the way i express pain through your fears.
Deagle N Sparkx verse were ok, but overall i think lyrical thugs had the win.

Tech Skillz
06-13-2004, 12:55 AM
links

link (http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=47928#post47928)

can't cote on another one cause they need a verse or are blocked....

so it's

LT-3
H.T.S.-1

thanks mad and killa...

tr3nt
06-14-2004, 06:10 AM
Ok, there's far too many to go into some extreme depth.. so I'll give it a go:

Deagle50:
"i seen ya mother with half of her scrotum sac saggin
through her shorts till it sparks the ground whilst its saggin" Although it might've fit in perfectly, the "ya mum" disses are old now, and im kinda over it, with the rest of your verse, I felt you were using "cheap rhymes" my definition of "cheap" basically means easy, off top of your head, in this case "pest, rest, chest, nest..." - just speaking my mind dude

Sparks:
I like the way you kinda had a diss for everyone, but I wasn't feeling it, to me felt like a bunch of words thrown around, had no real "story" or structure, was mainly "ima fuck you up, yea, and my mates will fuck you up, yea dont mess with us"

Junior:
There's not much I can say about your verse, don't get me wrong, I liked it, so far out of the three, I liked yours the best.. My favorite bar was:
"your flows looked over like they was literaly commercials
handing out free tickets to hell its politicaly contraversial"
Sorry I couldn't be much deeper.

hiphopgenius:
Again, not much I can say here, was a good verse... but dude.. what was the obsession with "dicks" ?? jk.

Tylenol Rabbit:
You're verse was kinda good - I only read half way through it and got kinda lost and confused.. Personally (I say that cause this is my opinion) I think your lines were too long, although you had nice rhymes. -- I just had another look, and I suggest when you finish a bar/line that you drop to a new line.. for example:
your styles all in error; the newspaper'll take care of it/,but i dont know what theyll do to you cuz your rhymes sound desperate/1

^^ would be better/easier to read if typed like so:
your styles all in error; the newspaper'll take care of it/
but I don't know what theyll do to you cuz your rhymes sound desperate/1

rezz:
Dude, unless you've changed your name for a diff forum, I don't know you - but I LIKE your style - packed with multies and a structured flow.

my vote goes to the HHG Crew because I felt they had better rhymed verses and had more impact.

No beef.

HipHopGenius
06-14-2004, 09:39 PM
2-2 more votes

Eluzion
06-15-2004, 12:56 PM
Consistency/Structure:LT
Creativity:HHG and crew
Enjoyable:LT
Flow:LT
Metaphors:HHG and crew
Multies:LT
Personal:HHG and crew
Punches:LT
Vocabulary:HHG and crew
Wordplay:HHG and crew

Final Vote - HHG and crew

LT-You guys did have some good verses but Juniors was the only verse that was really hot. You did have good flow, and alot of punches.

HHG and crew-You guys had more personal stuff and your creativity was alot better.

But nice spit to both teams.

TfLaMeZ
06-15-2004, 01:56 PM
the only verse i really saw, that was halfway decent was juniors, for LT. As for HHG and co. i saw many strong verses. Besides that, many of the lines, disses, punches, rhymes, flows, and other things were completely off, and i know i can see thousand times better from most of you.

VOTE: HHG and co.

HipHopGenius
06-15-2004, 04:22 PM
thank u thats 4-2 more votes

angel_gurl
06-16-2004, 03:46 PM
Consistency/Structure:LT
creativity:HHG and crew
enjoyable:HHG and crew
Multies: HHG and crew
Flow:LT
PunchesLT
vacabulary:HHG and crew
word play:HHG and crew



final vote:HHG and crew


Ya'll both did real good but HHG was more enjoyable and he had more creativity.LT had a good flow and real good word play.

HipHopGenius
06-16-2004, 04:00 PM
thats 5-2 HHG and co win this battle

madchild
06-19-2004, 11:54 AM
CLOSED HHG and Co. win 5-2.