Hawkeye vs. $tingeR (0-3) KO

[$tingeR]

2 verses
8-12 lines each verse
explained votes and constructive criticism would be nice
NO vote from ALMITE
lets go!

remember when you choked live with me and shinoda listening?*
fuck IL, only crew your worthy of is on my wins listing
like diego maridonna you cant help but "handle balls"**
your no "protojeh" yet your still only "handing tools"***
like D12 i inspire you, so ive got you "under the influence"****
forget me, your rhymes arent clever enough for school truents.
the way me and this win fit together is like a perfect con-gruence
your being confined worse than prisoners in guantanamo bay*****
even if you spoke and mimed it, i wouldnt get out~of~yo~way.
keeping up with me is your "survival horror" like "resident evil"
Stingers strong rhymes against the mic-choking hesitant eagle!

*me and shin were on Yahoo and hawk was chokin on the mic ;)
**maridonna cheated in the world cup (football/soccer whatever you call it) by handballing the ball into the net.
***shinodas rap name= protojay, im saying hes no "shinoda" (skills wise) but hes still handing tools e.g hes still an apprentice
****he likes D12, under the influence is a song by them
*****the place where they keep the terrorist suspects etc.
(resident evil is the computer game u should all know, hesistant eagle means as in the way he`s afraid to spit.)

go hawk.

[hawkeye]

I choked on the mic quicker then you run away
rhymes like your girl can't kick her you done today
your lryics drag-on but your still not spitting fire
u need to stay gone from rap can't be biting desire
call me dr. kevorkian cause I'm an evil resident*
last meal is pork-an-beans don't get messy tent**
I know your turned on but I won't be stung prick
you'll get burned or worse your neck wrung quick
only list I'm joining is everyone's christmas wish
phrase your coining is "come all and fist ma's fish"


* resident is also a doctor's postion in hospital
** messy tent = don't cum in pants

[hawkeye]

only way you can expose a pussy is to lift your own skirt
not a weakling to dispose of your feelings will get hurt
I can tell you just acting tough like you holdin power
by the smell it's obvious you wash off in golden shower
faking like you can be playing god but your not duchuvny *
every night I bet you play with rod like your on one knee
your carreer is over like a bee you sting once then it's flatline**
is it bitten if it's not free? you bought all of those fat rhymes***
this is like boxing a t-rex punches won't get you the biting will****
when you spit it's full of deffects why the fuck you writing still?
even if you get the door open it up and your greeted by a gun
U still never met-a-four i bet you could be defeated by a nun*****

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* playing god is a movie staring david duchuvny
** some bees die after stinging
*** I'm saying he paid for all his good rhymes
**** t-rexs have short arms therefore not good at boxing
***** nuns don't insult people but I say he'd lose to one in a battle :p

anytime stinger

[$tingeR]

wow, hawk did improve, lets call this "evolution" *
your disses were weak, but there will be "retribution" **
you admit your astounded at my skill but your accusations are unfounded
talk about boxing, fuck it im strong enough to beat you one~handed!
shit im no god, but i walk~this~win and i can still send you to hell though
call me "the scorpion~king" as i cause more pain than "the peoples elbow"***
im a "star in your eyes" but you fiddle kids like matthew kelly****
you needed so long to prewrite that- did you start in jan-u-ary?
you suck to much- be like michael jordan, consider a career swap
thank god your rhymes arent audio- you`d leave us needing ear drops!

*plays on hawks mention of duchovony- this was another of his films
**plays on the "playing god" thing in hawks- god is associated with punishing people in afterlife or something like that for things they did in the 1st life.... u get my drift!
***scorpion king- as my name is stinger, and im saying im the best, it was also a film with the rock in- which of course links to "peoples elbow"
****stars in their eyes is a UK tv show (like a talent show) presented by this matthew kelly guy who was accused of kiddy fiddling.

Good battle hawk. VOTES PLEASE.

[speedbump]

If it woulda end in first round it would be hard to choose but i say stigner really got it in the second round..... i like both but i thought stigner verse were more complex...

whatever other people said i liked hack first one ..... but imma go with stigner for the overall....

vote : stigner

[BigMann313]

Consistency/Structure: hawkeye
Creativity: stinger
Enjoyable: stinger
Flow: hawkeye
Multies: hawkeye
Personal: stinger
Punches: stinger
Vocabulary: stinger
Wordplay: hawkeye
Overall: stinger

to tell you the truth i think both verse were sick, they both stuck out to me more, but i was really feeling stingers more

sorry hawk

[madchild]

Alright, I already broke down the first round bar-by-bar but I accidently deleted it. Both Hawkeye and $tinger saw it anyways.

So here is my review for the second round ($tinger took the first):

HAWKEYE:

"only way you can expose a pussy is to lift your own skirt
not a weakling to dispose of your feelings will get hurt"

Not bad, but not a great intro.

"I can tell you just acting tough like you holdin power
by the smell it's obvious you wash off in golden shower"

Pretty funny but not overly great.

"faking like you can be playing god but your not duchuvny *
every night I bet you play with rod like your on one knee"

Should of made a multie out of the rhyming word.

"your carreer is over like a bee you sting once then it's flatline**
is it bitten if it's not free? you bought all of those fat rhymes***"

Nice bar. Good play off his name and rhyming flatline with fat rhymes.

"this is like boxing a t-rex punches won't get you the biting will****
when you spit it's full of deffects why the fuck you writing still?"

Pretty good bar.

"even if you get the door open it up and your greeted by a gun
U still never met-a-four i bet you could be defeated by a nun*****"

Bad closer. The met-a-four punch is overplayed and you should of tied it into that line instead of the one above IMO. Greeted~by~a~gun and defeated~by~a~nun was rather boring choices of words.

Score: 6.5/10

$tinger:

wow, hawk did improve, lets call this "evolution" *
your disses were weak, but there will be "retribution" **

Pretty good intro and diss setting up for the battle.

you admit your astounded at my skill but your accusations are unfounded
talk about boxing, fuck it im strong enough to beat you one~handed!

Not great. I dont even thing the multie rhymes well or at all.

shit im no god, but i walk~this~win and i can still send you to hell though
call me "the scorpion~king" as i cause more pain than "the peoples elbow"***

Hmm, I don't find this bar overly great or hard-hitting, but you explained it and it sort of makes sense.

im a "star in your eyes" but you fiddle kids like matthew kelly****
you needed so long to prewrite that- did you start in jan-u-ary?

Best bar yet, pretty good bar.

you suck to much- be like michael jordan, consider a career swap
thank god your rhymes arent audio- you`d leave us needing ear drops!

Haha, good closer and humorous.

I don't think this was you best spit $tinger, although I think you took this round and definitely the last.


Score: 7/10

Vote - $tinger

[madchild]

CLOSED $tinger wins by KO (3-0).