Shinoda vs. Scarface (3-0) KO

[shinoda]

Rule change to help him cope. Taking out feeding, categories must be used for voting -
flow
multis
content
originality
punches
vocabulary
wordplay
overall
10 bars (20 lines)
Oh, and one verse.

[shinoda]

Deadline - 2moro 9pm, we're in the same timezone, that gives him 21 hours to write.

[Scarface]

19 of them hours ill be sleeping :cool:

ill drop 10 minutes b4 deadline

[shinoda]

Ten minutes taken.
Written
Done

Let me reitterate why I'm irate whilst I designate hate at all these kids who try to irritate
and aggrevate others that they immitate, by emulating which only makes them fake/ 1
You're not in my class or weight, you're like a paper-scrape, couldn't cut it with a rake
Let alone set the pace, if this was a race you'd have no legs to give chase/ 2
Get it straight kid, I own this place, devistate by designating lakes of flow you'll replicate
Punches in effect collect directly disecting verbally, hesitantly/ 3
I integrated more ideas and concepts than are possible contextually
Correct me, if I'm wrong, but there's your multies, wordplay, vocabulary/ 4
(And its' only bar 4 of this battle against me..... let see)
You're illiterate, so ignorant, your arrogance faces my previlance
You're only worthy of decapitated fatalities, defecating on your reality/ 5
I assume you'd want to resign instead of hesitating about posting
Fed up of reading everywhere on this site, your constant boasting/ 6
My estate is my mansion, you blatantly can't take expansion
Or handle what I've compacted into twenty lines of conversation/ 7
This is compensation, I don't conform to your low as floor standings
My intriquate elaboration of exquisite use of execution through computing/ 8
Turns to perseverance, leaves you like Aaliyah, dust yourself off and try again
You're covetous of my flow, fornicating based on how I use the pen/ 9
Final bar, line 20, bar ten, better block this and put up your own defence
I'll have you running more than your mouth, its over from how you offend / 10

Done

[shinoda]

If you want an outline of the 'personals' that it's lacking, I can explain it here.
I aim hate at him as his purpose is to aggrevate me, he knows that. Personal 1
Emulating someone's style makes them fake, same with his punches last round - Punch
Not in my class or weight - punch. Paperscrape - papercut
Anything about arrogance or ignorance desribes him to a T, I use it in conversations with him a lot - punch and personal fuck it, can't be arsed to reread the rest, there's a selection in there.

[Scarface]

lmao iight ima spit now before i got to sleep pelase dont dickryde i want a good battle here we go ill explain all my personals at the end

ill 'SQUEEZE' down this hoes rhyme easier than i could pull a 'TRIGGER'/
hes a 'backstreet boy', i looked at his picture~can anybody say~gay blonde wigger//*
look at dudes HAIR~its obviouse hes an 'EMINEM GROUPIE', son fits the profile of 'STAN'/
but he cant be 'STAN' stan was an eminem fanatic~SHINODA aint even a rap 'fan'//**
u must be as 'DUMB' as a 'RETARD' tryin to PLAY with PISTOLS/
ive been goin round the site fuckin about and in ur verse i dint see any per-sonals//***
me coming to this site and 'EXPOSING' ypu for the wack battler that you are/
was as easy as sending a blind kid ofcourse while hes driving a car//****
see these members look up to you~but would they after i KO'ed your ass on battle ring/
coz my PUNCHES be bouncing off you 'back' and 'forth' like they hittin a SPRING'//*****
im like a 'DICK' and your a 'PRE-TEEN BOY' whenever a girl goes past-im to HARD/
im spittin AFTER you son its like 'CANABIS' battlin a 'RETARD'//******
JELOUSY got ya going i been on this site 5 minutes and im more popular than you/
got ya 'SWEATING' for your spot, like HITLER standing next to a 'JEW'//******
your battles are so wack you stand out like a tranvestite in the crowd/
im like an 'EMPLOYEE' of EM.NET, i hold a sign sayin no HERBS ALOUD//********
you officialy got owned on battle ring, you left with ya head down in shame/
yo left sulking like a bitch, that didnt do nothing but got the blame//*********
ima finish u now, like a fat kid finishes his TEA/
now quick go run and get the admin to ban me//*********

* - u squeeze a trigger......u seen his pictures he duz look gay
** - STAN was eminems song about the fanatic if ya dont know that u got no bisness being here, his favourite music is linkini park and hes on a rap site
*** - he didnt use any personals in his verse quit actin up
**** - he was the best here till i came and proved to everyone how wack he is...blind kid car blah
***** - everybody owned him on BR
****** - dick pre teen hard blah u shud now or ur retarded.... and if u dont know who ccanabis is plz dont vote
******* - i been here a lil while and everybody knows me..... a jew standin by hitler wud be scared
******** - blah self explanitary
********* - he left BR in shame after being bullied
********** - he had the admin ban me as styles

[shinoda]

Upping For Votes

[Kruxx]

flow - Styles
multis - Shin
content - Shin had more punches, Styles was telling stories..
originality - Shin. Styles re-used some of the backstreet boy stuff that he'd said before
punches - Both had good punches.
vocabulary - Shin
wordplay - didnt see much?
overall - Shin


Meh fook off styles if u think im dickriding...

[Scarface]

^^doesnt count...hate vote and i will post links very soon to prove it....

plus how the fuck did he gove u punches its an obviouse gay vote

[Kruxx]

^^^ Knew it...

[Scarface]

cant deny we had beef though can ya.....its true u follow m and shin around threads dickryding

[Kruxx]

Meh, stop freeposting in your own battle, my vote wasnt a hate vote, or dickriding vote. Disallow it if you want, but everytime someone votes against you and you say the same shit and make their vote not count, your making the job harder on yourself. Eventually there wont be voters left...

[shinoda]

Scarface, you're gonna need to learn to SHUT THE FUCK UP if you're gonna call each vote a d/r vote. Accept people's opinions and realise you're own faults.

[Scarface]

no because i owned you.....and wen kruxx is like your best friend....

and dont tell me to shut the fuck up u gay lookin faggot

[Kruxx]

Naw Styles u got it alllllllllll wrong. I couldnt care less if shin was my brother, i vote fairly.

[shinoda]

And he's not my best friend Styles, you are :)

[pimpchimp]

flow: you both had horrible flow, but I'll give it to Face. Shin, you packed way too many syllables in there - you couldn't rap like that unless you were Twista.
multis: obviously Shin. The multiple rhymes in the lines were countless compared to Face whose multis were all but non-existent.
content: Shin. Face tended to repeat himself a lot, going on about BR, being someone 'infamous' on the site, and accusing Shin of being gay
originality: In addition to the horrible spelling, Face had no originality. The punches, although more abundant, were mainly weak. If I see another Hitler reference... *sigh*. Yeah, so this'll go to Shin.
punches: However, as bad as his punches were, Face's punches were more overt. Shin had them, but they were layered beneath so many syllables that they got to the point where they were ineffectual. So Face gets the vote for this category.
vocabulary: Shin. Face got wiped all over the floor with this one.
wordplay: Face used more wordplay in the battle - Shin's vocabulary was great and was integral in getting his point across, but the metaphors and similes were somewhat absent.
overall: So eking over with a 4-3 vote, I'ma give this to Shin. You coulda done MUCH better though, bro. Stop underestimating your opponents.

[HipHopGenius]

flow :styles i agree with what pimpchimp said about the rhymes
content:styles
multis:Shin obviously
originality:shin the things that Styles post u see all the time
punches:Styles his disses hit harder to me
vocab :Shin
wordplay Shin
overall.Shin

good battle from both but shin took this

[madchild]

I'm sorry Shin, but Scarface spit was funny as hell :clap: Vote: Scarface

I could vote on the categories, but like PC said, you went ape shit with syllables and illiterate variations, it got tired quick. You need to get simpler, to gain flow back.

[shinoda]

I'm sorry Shin, but Scarface spit was funny as hell :clap: Vote: Scarface

I could vote on the categories, but like PC said, you went ape shit with syllables and illiterate variations, it got tired quick. You need to get simpler, to gain flow back.
Na tha's cool. I could've broken it down a different way to show flow, but that would've effected the bars structure, thanks for the input.

[shinoda]

3-1
Kruxx, PimpChimp, HiphopGenius - Madchild

[shinoda]

Just want to point out, I had a 3-0 KO before Madchild's vote. But I'm gonna let this go up to 5 anyways.

[madchild]

Nah that's a KO.

[shinoda]

Aight. Closed.

CLOSED Shinoda wins by KO (3-0).