TflaMeZ vs. mako (0-3) KO

[mako]

15-20 lines
/= end of line
first to 5 wins, 3-0 is a k.o.

somebody flip a coin to see who goes first I have tails, if I lose the coin toss I go first :cool:

mako

[TfLaMeZ]

why dont you save us the effort and go first

[mako]

TflaMeZ its the "takeover", like "jay hova", its "game over"/
cause ill take you off road like a "range rover"//
i'm underhand when situation "demand"/
i make it hot like the desert leave you "undersand" like "quicksand"//
you digging you own grave, with you "weak speech"/
i spit with a k.o., with nuff "techiques"//
till your "obselete", and truth is "evident"/
TflaMeZ delusional, words have no "relevance"//
but my style shine like the text "polished"/
your style corrupt like the federal-is, best "abolish"//
in your dreams and thoughts of being "victorious"/
cause i'll twist you up till you look like a "contortionist"//
shame your mother wasn't pro-"abortionist"/
i get vader with the sabre show you the dark side of the force "with this"//
i fire like a glock and with no "hesitation"/
i put it to your temple empty your ideas like "meditation"//
you trying to buy yourself time, preparing your "rhyme"/
this is not pre written, spittin straight from my "mind"//
dont waste your time trying to come up with witty "punchlines"/
cause there's a warrant for my arrest, your murder was the "crime"// :cool:

mako

[TfLaMeZ]

one verse spit in 5 minutes, is more then enough for me to take this and win it//
your mindset is of course, and you have no determination/
while you drive me oppoiste of crazy, your like my motivation/
as i sit here patiently waitin' to attack faster then "jason"//
slice your head of with my finger, post the pictures on this site, where my presense lingers//
with the way you think you have thought-out-rhymes/
we should give you the name, "TRYIN TO BUSTARHYME"//
i see no challenge i thought you did, shit, and all the people were callin me kid/
but see, i got your life laid out, down to a tee, exact as a grid//
i thought sharks were fierce, with teeth sharp enough to peirce//
you're the complete opposite, and like i said, this tooke me 5 minutes/
i already got you on your toes, with the comment,"i'm gonna win it"//
soon i'll follow your every move and make your life a living hell/
i'll re-arrange your gene structure, and every nerve cell/
have you praisin me, like i'm the devil straight from hell//
so in lame terms, watch the fuck out, i knocked you down with words, no need to shout//

[TfLaMeZ]

we need some votes please

[xBullyx]

I'd say mako, cuz his had a much better flow i think

[TfLaMeZ]

ok 0-1, no worries, i'm still confident i can take this, just to be honest i think i had better flow, not because i'm battling him and want to win(which i do) but i've never been one to ever lack on flow.

[shinoda]

Ain't seen Mako in a while. See he's flipped up his style a bit, he had amazing flow on there, some nice punches in there too... could hear it to a good beat and it'd sound good I think.
Flamez bro, your flow was all over the shop. You went from doing flow on a line with multis to two line rhyme and back and forth. You also lacked punches and had a lot of filler "this only took me 5 minutes" doesn't really cut it in a battle... it just keeps the flow going...

Mako

[TfLaMeZ]

thanx for the feed back, i just realized how sloppy my flow was, and mako, i give you props on your verse, i just re read it, and it is truly good, i underestimated you. but lets keep the votes coming

[speedbump]

Tflamez verse were good but i must agree with the other two..... mako was better here.....

Vote - mako

[TfLaMeZ]

thanx for all the votes and feed back, good battle mako, we'll half to have a rematch sometime

[hawkeye]

mako battling again? :eek: :clap: :worship: :D

right on good battle

[d12chick18london]

Vote Tflamez

[Scarface]

oh snap yall votesare gay i aint battlin here ... u dont even break them down

[TfLaMeZ]

man, seriously, i didn't mean to start beef with you, but stop trashin people on the site, and stop trashin it in general, my god, what does it take.

[Scarface]

i aint trashin i just htink that when somebody votes it shud be a fair explained vote

[madchild]

CLOSED Mako wins by KO (3-0).