Rappone vs. Junior (6-0) KO

[Tech Skillz]

ok here's my verse dawg


like a suicide bomber and like the devil here to call your number, i'm ready to dicard souls/
droppin' shit hotter than the texas summers, so my barz makin' you turn darker than charcoal/
killed rotten and forgotten, softer than cotton, makin' you drop faster than the bubonic plague/*
rhymes with no meanin', simple and vague, clensin' away the amatuers, while only the demonic stay/*
kill you with a mic, such an ironic way,just like his mom he falls through his broken curve/*
makin' even his ancestors brake a tear with spoken words, to much for them to hear these chosen verbs/
while he in his room masterbatin' to "men for men" with vasoline beatin' with his hand his horny limb/
his man eat out his pussy, but complained about the hairs so decided to give it a little trim... :clap:

explenations
*for those who don't know the bubonic plague is diseaswe that killed millions in europe
*demonic means truly evil
*broken curve means like how hoes have a corner adn just like his mom he got kicked out his corner...broken like wasn't able to hold his corner


your turn, don't make that shit huge...

[Tech Skillz]

it's been a 5 days maybe he's busy...i'll wait...

[Tech Skillz]

fuck this, he dq'd he wasted a whole week and 3 days of my time...

[Rappone]

Talk About Amateurs and Gays, Childish,
Ain't got the Mildest Trace of Skill Behind it,
It's Crystal Clear Who's The Wildest, Rewind this,
Then Replay, Youd find that you should Instantly call me 'Highness',
Like I'm an Emperor, We Both Acquire Glory,
But with me it's Verbal, These Empires Bore Me,
Yeah You Got Power... For Hypnotizing, Your shits like a Bedtime Story,
Disqualified? Naw, I Forgot I Made a Challenge,
Your Known To Be a whack gun, I Only Play with Cannons****[gun meta],
I'm Sharp, You Can't Touch Me, I'm A Blade of Talents****[Sharp&talnted],
And I'm a Cutter Both Sides, Dont Attempt to Approach,
It's Finesse, What I Quote, I Perfect what I wrote,
And Inject it, Into the blood of these Goats,
087 is yo Number? Well its Also Your Ranking in Rapping,
On this site, Keep in Mind that its filled with self-spankin and clappin****,[whackness metfor]
A Junior is A Perfect Description of your Position,
And remember, Rap Ain't as easy as fishin'**** [junior play], WHAT?!

[Tech Skillz]

OMG! finally...well this verse was like about 8 months old now, so can we get votes here?

[DominaterNamedJames]

Categories
Consistency/Structure:Junior
Creativity:Rappone, lot of ryhming in the bars as well
Enjoyable:Junior, cuz the flow was better
Flow:Junior, by far
Metaphors:Rappone, but Junior still had alot, i just like rappones more
Multies:Don't know what this is, someone plz tell me
Personal:Both
Punches:Junior, with all the talks of killing him...
Vocabulary:Rappone, kinda messed up ur flow personaly
Wordplay:Rappone, maybe a lil overboard
Overall:Junior, had more... flow, and you could just understand it better

[Tech Skillz]

Junior-1 Rappone-0

Uppin' on votes...

[Rappone]

Multies is definitely mine. dont mean to sound cocky, but I take multies and the major votes. I'd clear up some very intresting personals from my side against him, where he has a little.

the 087* in his name, his ranking on this site, keepin in mind it has loadsa whack kats, so hes veryyyy whack

junior is what we call fishermen... hence the last sentence.

Talks of killing are not PUNCHES. Punches are things that hit hard against the opponent.. dont matter.

Multies are like
do the math, flew the path, blew your ass... things that dou8ble rhyme, I definitely had that. Please consider revoting with my clarifications and your understanding of what MULTIES are. Goddamn it.

:D Oh, Im not a sore loser, just get mad at bad voting.

[MC_Stan]

like a suicide bomber and like the devil here to call your number, i'm ready to dicard souls/
droppin' shit hotter than the texas summers, so my barz makin' you turn darker than charcoal/

a lil' boasting, which can't be bad, fancy flow and rhyme. nice

killed rotten and forgotten, softer than cotton, makin' you drop faster than the bubonic plague/
rhymes with no meanin', simple and vague, clensin' away the amatuers, while only the demonic stay/

multiez.... tho if ya ask me plague/stay rhyme is whack. but still, ya can't say it aint rhyme at all. And I guess we can call shit "rhymes without meaning" a punch, if ya're talkin about Rappones shit, that would be close to truth.

kill you with a mic, such an ironic way,just like his mom he falls through his broken curve/*
makin' even his ancestors brake a tear with spoken words, to much for them to hear these chosen verbs/

nice. rhyme and multie (I guess), but whacky flow

while he in his room masterbatin' to "men for men" with vasoline beatin' with his hand his horny limb/
his man eat out his pussy, but complained about the hairs so decided to give it a little trim...

yea !first line - a high class disss. like with metaphore and shit... cool. can't feel the flow tho.

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Talk About Amateurs and Gays, Childish,
Ain't got the Mildest Trace of Skill Behind it,

tight, with a punch, rhyme, flow.

It's Crystal Clear Who's The Wildest, Rewind this,
Then Replay, Youd find that you should Instantly call me 'Highness',

still tight, boastin yo' ass, but that ain't bad I guess

Like I'm an Emperor, We Both Acquire Glory,
But with me it's Verbal, These Empires Bore Me,
Yeah You Got Power... For Hypnotizing, Your shits like a Bedtime Story

good, interesting rhyme, but I bet if I rapped "glory/bore me" them experts would say I ain't got no rhyme. Tho fo me these 3 lines seems quite related, so I say it rhymes. don't feel the flow.

Disqualified? Naw, I Forgot I Made a Challenge,
Your Known To Be a whack gun, I Only Play with Cannons
I'm Sharp, You Can't Touch Me, I'm A Blade of Talents

yo rhymes and wordplay and all otha shit, but end seems quite unfinished to me and the next bar doesnt rhymes with this one, so it's pretty shitty but still aint shitty enough to fuck the whole image up

And I'm a Cutter Both Sides, Dont Attempt to Approach,
It's Finesse, What I Quote, I Perfect what I wrote,
And Inject it, Into the blood of these Goats,

tight, with them multies, well at least one.

087 is yo Number? Well its Also Your Ranking in Rapping,
On this site, Keep in Mind that its filled with self-spankin and clappin

yo that's some real shit man. liked this diss best.

A Junior is A Perfect Description of your Position,
And remember, Rap Ain't as easy as fishin'

fishin aint easy. I tried once and ended up throwin dynamite to the lake, shit fucked me outta the patience. anyway, nice rhyme and shit

__________________________________________________ _______

CONCLUSIONZ : both were good blah blah blah....
liked Rappone's shit more, so vote goes to Rappone

[$tingeR]

like a suicide bomber and like the devil here to call your number, i'm ready to dicard souls/
droppin' shit hotter than the texas summers, so my barz makin' you turn darker than charcoal/
ok opener, if cant make it flow if i try to rap it though, needed more rhyming words in lines that long. doesnt hit hard, not punches
killed rotten and forgotten, softer than cotton, makin' you drop faster than the bubonic plague/*
rhymes with no meanin', simple and vague, clensin' away the amatuers, while only the demonic stay/*
i like the rhyming words demonic stay and bubonic plague. nice. pretty much a very weak punch though
kill you with a mic, such an ironic way,just like his mom he falls through his broken curve/*
makin' even his ancestors brake a tear with spoken words, to much for them to hear these chosen verbs/
kinda fillerish, sayin how u can kill him, s`ok but doesnt hit him.
while he in his room masterbatin' to "men for men" with vasoline beatin' with his hand his horny limb/
his man eat out his pussy, but complained about the hairs so decided to give it a little trim...
lol erm weird closer its ok i suppose, but isnt a strong punch

its not bad, quite a nice structured verse but it just fails to hit him with the punches, and no personals.

Talk About Amateurs and Gays, Childish,
Ain't got the Mildest Trace of Skill Behind it,
not bad for an opener, feeds and hits, not that strongly, but enough for a start.
It's Crystal Clear Who's The Wildest, Rewind this,
Then Replay, Youd find that you should Instantly call me 'Highness',
its aight, very nice rhyming, doesnt hit much though
Like I'm an Emperor, We Both Acquire Glory,
But with me it's Verbal, These Empires Bore Me,
dont like it really
Yeah You Got Power... For Hypnotizing, Your shits like a Bedtime Story,
ok punch
Disqualified? Naw, I Forgot I Made a Challenge,
Your Known To Be a whack gun, I Only Play with Cannons****[gun meta],
ok i guess. not really liking the meta that much but w/e its not a bad punch
I'm Sharp, You Can't Touch Me, I'm A Blade of Talents****[Sharp&talnted],
And I'm a Cutter Both Sides, Dont Attempt to Approach,
nice wordplay, but doesnt hit
It's Finesse, What I Quote, I Perfect what I wrote,
And Inject it, Into the blood of these Goats,
goats? nice flow anyway
087 is yo Number? Well its Also Your Ranking in Rapping,
On this site, Keep in Mind that its filled with self-spankin and clappin****,[whackness metfor]
i like the first line, not so sure about the self spankng and clappin but its a good personal anyway
A Junior is A Perfect Description of your Position,
And remember, Rap Ain't as easy as fishin'**** [junior play], WHAT?!
lol nice closer! personal again

Consistency/Structure:junior
Creativity:Rappone
Enjoyable: Rappone
Flow: Rappone
Metaphors:Rappone
Multies: (how can the other guy vote on battles if he doesnt know what they are!!!) Rappone
Personal: Rappone
Punches: Rappone
Vocabulary:Rappone
Wordplay:Rappone
Overall: Rappone kills it on categories. both had good verses, but tally up the categories and Rappone had everything in there. decent battle, worth reading.

[Tech Skillz]

j-1 r-2

uppin'

[Bigg-G]

consistencey/structure:rappone
personals:rappone
multies:junior
flow:rappone
punchlines:both
vocab:rappone
metas: rappone
enjoyability:both
on the overall rappone was better i enjoyed juniors but rappone ripped it wit word play and personals i liked junior's multies but my vote goes to rappone
peace out

[Rappone]

R 3 J ??


Man listen, if u wanna play fair Ima tell u this, do u realllly wanna count dominters vote, when he dont know what multies are? You choose. :)

UPPIN

[sammy37]

Categories
Consistency/Structure:junior
Creativity:Rappone
Enjoyable:Junior
Flow:Rappone
Metaphors:Rappone
Multies:Rappone
Personal:Both
Punches:Junior
Vocabulary:Rappone
Wordplay:Rappone
Overall:Rappone

[madchild]

4-1 for Rappone. More votes needed.

[Tech Skillz]

ok ...i'll give this one oo rappone

[CookiezNCream20]

Consistency/Structure: junior
Creativity: rappone
Enjoyable: junior
Flow: junior (rappone ur vocab seemed to throw it off)
Metaphors: both
Multies: Rappone
Personal: Rappone
Punches: junior( talking bout killin)
Vocabulary: rappone (overkill tho)
Wordplay: rappone
Overall: Rappone….we may have beefs but I don’t let that get in the way of voting

[M'99]

Categories;

opener: jun
flow:rap
structure: jun
punches: rap
meta: rap
multie:rap
personal: rap
creativity: both
enjoyment: rap
closer: rap

overal>>rap.

nice battle you guys,very creative

[madchild]

CLOSED Rappone wins by Slaughter (6-0) KO.