Junior vs. TfLaMeZ (5-0) KO

[TfLaMeZ]

1 verse each, take as much time as you need to write your verse, minimum 15 lines, maximum 45. 3 votes TKO otherwise first to 5.
Alright lets see your verse

[Tech Skillz]

here's mine dawg

armed with a knife, hackin' his vocal chords and takin' them out through his chin/
this flamez awakened my internal, but eternal infernal, so let the beatin' begin/
one bar and you already droppin' the mic, have you shakin' and unable to write/
i see fear in your sight, all i gotta do is get my hose out to put out this light/
i'm swinngin' puches more powerful than bombs on hiroshima, so this nigga flees me/
i ain't even gotta throw a punchline to put out this fire, i'll just pull out my wee-wee/
blowing nuclear shit makin' your eyes pop out, so i'm makin' even the biggest nigga surender/
number one contender, blowin' off your dick with nuclear force so i'll have you wonderin' your gender/
leave not fully burnt, but tender, spittin shit outta my mouth hotter than haile's comet/
my finger in ya' throat so you can vomit, then rip you instestines while it's still in your stomach/
there's a lot of fags in this world and you get close to know 'em, shit you lick under there scrotum/
you can't beat shit if you had a pile of shit on your fist, so you might as well leave this forum/

flamez i know it's only 12 lines dawg, but i really didn't have time so can you excuse it...

[TfLaMeZ]

so what was this in the beef room sayin that i smell bad/
that was ur first mistake cuz in this one i got the upper hand/
understand you're just a boy waitin to become a man//
i already surpassed you at age two, runnin right by you/
had your mind lost in baby thoughts, screamin,"GA GA GOO!"/
thats all i see when you write your rhymes dude/
you're life's gonna end soon, thats what i conclude/
cuz you got severe learnin to do, you can't think thoughts through/
cuz i'm bout to shred you up, boil and melt you like fondue/
you really dont understand the ethics of violence do you//
i'm hazardous wiht every punch, kick, slap or touch/
i just get tired of the disses layed so much/
people say i have a lota shit to see, but i already seen a bunch/
i live life on the edge, just living a hunch/
if rippin you was my breakfest, just think whats for lunch//
i can already feel the veins in your body shivering/
i live 900 miles away, and i hear your lips quivering/
every line you wrote had chopped up delivery/
before you judge my skills reconsider me//
i ripped into faster then twista/
leavin imprinted scars from what just hit ya/
sorry, but, battlin me didn't benefit ya////

[eMCee Risky]

don't ya'll do explained votes?

well if ya'll don't i will

multies: neitha
punches: tie
personals: tie
opener: junior
finiisher: junior
vocab: junior
overall vote JUNIOR :clap:

props to both :)

[angel_gurl]

Consistency/Structure:neither
Creativity:junior
Enjoyable: junior
Flow:junior
Metaphors:tflamez
Multies:junior
Personal:junior
Punches:junior
Vocabulary:junior
Wordplay:tflamez
Overall:junior sorry tflamez i think u can do way better than you did.junior had a better flow and he was more enjoyable

[bad news]

multies: junior
punches: junior
personals: t
opener: t
finiisher: t
vocab: t
comedy: junior
overall vote junior

[Killa Jones]

Consistency/Structure:Junior
Creativity:junior
Enjoyable: junior
Flow:junior
Metaphors:tflamez
Multies:junior
Personal:junior
Punches:junior
Vocabulary:junior
Wordplay:tflamez
Overall: Junior

Junior Killed this one

Fav Line (By Junior):- leave not fully burnt, but tender, spittin shit outta my mouth hotter than haile's comet/
my finger in ya' throat so you can vomit, then rip you instestines while it's still in your stomach/

[BigMann313]

if ur allowing crew votes then

Consistency/Structure:neither
Creativity:junior
Enjoyable: junior
Flow:junior
Metaphors:tflamez
Multies:junior
Personal:junior
Punches:junior
Vocabulary:junior
Wordplay:tflamez
Overall:junior

both were good and could have done better, just was feeling juniors more

[TfLaMeZ]

didn't we do this battle a long ass time ago??!?! :confused:

[madchild]

CLOSED Junior wins by KO (5-0).

Tflamez, eMCee Risky for some odd reason brought this battle back up. The voting was never finished on it.