Lil' freestyle, nuthin much..

[$pade]

Get it thru yo head,
I'm not the one fuckin yo wife in the bed,
Itsa mystery...
Such mysery
Brought apon u, your son and your daughter!
Fuck yo daughta? I oughta!
Justa get back atcha.
And Yes I'm mad atcha you scum!
I should slice off your thumb!
With an axe for making me look bad!
I thought revenge was all I had!

And wow this freestyle sucks, it's one of those freestyles that just pops in yo head and stuff and u dunno what you're talkin about. :lol:

[$pade]

:shock: Whoa....looking back at that freestyle, I know I have more potential than that. :?

[S.W.A.T]

yea dawg that was awfull

[Fourfeit cha Title]

i welcome the criticism so ill post a freestyle also but that was a was of yo life to tell u the truth. just being honest if you feel offend the battle me.

I was born in the hood, raised in the hood-
im a real nigga make sure thats understood-
i hate fake niggas cuz i break fake niggas-
look up to beinie siegel cuz he duct tape niggas-
see i do these playa mafia style, i break bones-
put cheese and peperoni on top of they tombstone-
i got a full blown mental sickness i get up yo face w/ quickness-
i'm high of that purple shit, so fxck that 40 liquid-
okay the fact that u strapped does not make u a thug-
but if u are a thug, thugs still catch slugs-
and get drug in ditches, that thug shit is rediculous-
i kill so many thugs that there ran out of death certificates-

gotta go out of town just wanted some one with skillz to know why they should

Fourfeit cha Title

[Rook]

garbage

[LADEN]

OOH,WEEE.get some lyrical help-