Cmartin

[Boss Dog]

I an't the best but you an't either so don't go around everyone clamin to be. Dog you an't really shit.

[Tech Skillz]

i like how you didn't try to be all that...yeah cmartin...stopsaying you spit true rap...

[Boss Dog]

I mean this dude thinks he is the bomb and shit but he is only eleven. I mean when he loses or a ryme he made an't that good he dosn't say well Im trying he sas Im eleven. When I lose a battle I say (it's something for me to work on not Im 14)
Second Dog it's good to win it buids self esteem
But it is also good to lose because it shows that there is a place for improvment and to be honist me and everyone else could use work becuse non of us have a record deal RIGHT. Which means we an't the best.
See thats why me and this CHILD have in difrence i know I can improve he dont think there is any one better than Himself.

Holla Back if you here what Im saying

[child prodigy]

yo boss dog, i have to say that i feeling you/
something i need to revealing too...
cmartin please listen to the information that we're dealing you.
understand this kid is just a kid/
He doesn't know what he did....
hey, you made alot of mistakes and we told you/
tried to save you from more pain so we'd hold you...
but one more mistake cmartin, then we scold you.
we're not bringing you down, just trying to mold you....
don't think you're so great because your rhymes have a hook or two?
please, you're not all that, i can tell when i look at you.
boss dog, Don't criticize what he said cuz he's eleven/
and cmartin (even if you are) don't act like you're seven.
Telling people you're young age isn't an excuse/
despite your age people will still deal you abuse...
you don't have to adhere to the advice that i'm giving/
but understand, i'm being nice to the rap life that you're living.
i just try to speak to comeback with truth.
i just care for the young slack youth.
so don't act as if youre raps are wreckless/
or you'll find your name to be crossed off like a checklist...
you better watch your response or we're sure to leave you neckless
(snatch your necklace)...
so for your own sake, you better peep and check this.
i'm not demanding, strictly our of respect/
realize, "ain't a damn thing changed boy protect ya neck."

[madchild]

^ A good read.

[S.W.A.T]

Hmm u got skillz...

[child prodigy]

it's been a while so my response sounds whack/
after a while off of forums left me with skills that lack/
glad to hear that you've got my back/
rather than on the other end: under attack.
but i don't need to act...i'm one of the only rappers that's real/
not that i'm cocky, it's just the way i feel.
For real though, i feel so, frustrated - I hate it
seeing young rappers thinking they made it...
Seriously, if young emcees think they defeat me? they're so underrated/
Cmartin is an exapmle why to keep your rhymes and age, completely separated.
I apologize for my freestyle, meanwhile i know my words are slipping/
i'm not even fully sure of the facts that i'm gripping.
All i really know is this, young rappers have a chance, they're really is a chosen few/
and don't get so distraught if record deals haven't chosen you...
i'm pretty young myself, with no wealth/
so giving advice may seem so out-of-health...
see i can't think staright my mind gets clustered/
thoughts are flustered of all kinds, turns like mustard.
SO i'm sorry for the wrong context/
i'm really just trying to keep a strong text...


all in all, thanks for the feedback: much appreciated.