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SPYDA
07-16-2008, 03:16 PM
4 Barz, Don't Matter Who Drops First.

Deadline Friday

toxic-flow
07-17-2008, 02:27 AM
Aight 4barz only..lol..aight..

sick like the fluids in yo stomach' raped around your liver the Daemon about to plummet’the evil Einstein and “Nostradamus” so you cant‘dumb-it”

im “frantic” from pacific to “Atlantic”I’m “syco-frenic” the toxic Angel with the power of a black-hole in my “finger-tips”

im a “syco-dammit” im lipstick to yo girls lips’ or gravity to a “planet”
Im stepping emcees like brooms squash "SPIDERS"how the fuck you gon

battle me you half twit "WRITER" or should i say half bit "BITTER"
Your thee “Inquisitor” im thee sickest “emcee” im the rapper you’re the “listener”

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4barz..spit..

SPYDA
07-18-2008, 06:36 PM
aint got much free time so its gonna be a quick drop.


In My Time I've Seen Some Poor Rhymes, But Never Have I Seen Em As Bad As Your Lines
This Battle Will Be As Savage As Those In The War Times, The Way Ima Slay You I Could Get Done For War Crimes

Toxic Your Not Sick, You've Been Left Behind, Too Late To Rewind Cos Your Flow Has Lost It
Your Clearly Slow, Your Definatly Not Quick, I'll Leave You Blind Like You Got Stabbed In The Optic

Talking Like You've Got Something To Teach, Im Telling Just By Your Spelling That You Struggle With Speach,
Your A Blood Sucking Lyric Ducking Little Leach,Wishing You Could Go To The Lengths That I Go But Im Out Of Your Reach

Your Representing Cuba Ima Leave You Smoking Just Like Your Cigars, Im Big In This Game, Your Shorter Than These 4 Bars
My Rhyme Are Out Of This World, Just Call Me A Star, If I Was Anymore Sick This Forum Would Break Out In Sars

SPYDA
07-18-2008, 07:03 PM
sorry bout the edit. made alot of typo's, was in a rush..............

Anyway Uppin Votes.

toxic-flow
07-19-2008, 08:20 AM
Uppin 4 votes.

CapZ
12-18-2008, 05:22 PM
not a good battle:(


SPYDA


In My Time I've Seen Some Poor Rhymes, But Never Have I Seen Em As Bad As Your Lines
This Battle Will Be As Savage As Those In The War Times, The Way Ima Slay You I Could Get Done For War Crimes
...1,6/5 NOTHIN HARD FORCED MULTIES EH OPENER..

Toxic Your Not Sick, You've Been Left Behind, Too Late To Rewind Cos Your Flow Has Lost It
Your Clearly Slow, Your Definatly Not Quick, I'll Leave You Blind Like You Got Stabbed In The Optic
..2.3/5 LIL PUNCH..

Talking Like You've Got Something To Teach, Im Telling Just By Your Spelling That You Struggle With Speach,
Your A Blood Sucking Lyric Ducking Little Leach,Wishing You Could Go To The Lengths That I Go But Im Out Of Your Reach
..1.5 :( TO LONG NO HARSH DISSIN..

Your Representing Cuba Ima Leave You Smoking Just Like Your Cigars, Im Big In This Game, Your Shorter Than These 4 Bars
My Rhyme Are Out Of This World, Just Call Me A Star, If I Was Anymore Sick This Forum Would Break Out In Sars
..2.6/5 EHHH OK ENDER BEST OVERALL BAR IN YOUR VERSE..




toxic-flow

sick like the fluids in yo stomach' raped around your liver the Daemon about to plummet’the evil Einstein and “Nostradamus” so you cant‘dumb-it”
..OK OPENER NICE VOCAB 3/5..

im “frantic” from pacific to “Atlantic”I’m “syco-frenic” the toxic Angel with the power of a black-hole in my “finger-tips”
..0.5?/5 UHHH NO PUNCH OR PERSONAL NOTHIN IN THIS BAR ..:confused:

im a “syco-dammit” im lipstick to yo girls lips’ or gravity to a “planet”
Im stepping emcees like brooms squash "SPIDERS"how the fuck you gon
battle me you half twit "WRITER" or should i say half bit "BITTER"
Your thee “Inquisitor” im thee sickest “emcee” im the rapper you’re the “listener”
..2.5 THA SPIDER ONLY PERSONAL EH BAR THO..:(




OVERALL= SPYDA WON JUST CUZ HE WAS MORE IN DISSIN EVEN THO NOTHIN HARSH AND TOXIC U HAD ONE FILLER BAR AND FELL OFF ALOT OF TIMES, PERSONALS TIE, PUNCHES- SPYDA

Consistency/Structure: spyda
Creativity: toxic
Enjoyable: spyda
Flow: spyda
Metaphors: toxic
Multies: toxic
Personal: tie
Punches: spyda
Vocabulary: toxic
Wordplay: spyda
Overall: spyda