Joe M vs SPYDA

[Joe M]

4 bars
First to 3 votes

Deadlines wednesday

I'll drop tomorrow.

[Joe M]

Only way you can win is through disqualification/
only way you could be hot is if my punches gave you inflammation/
here's a tip, before you step to me try and get an education/

cause I can see from the cyphers, and your name, your useless at spelling/
compared to yours my shits compelling/
I know i'm about to beat you, and I don't need a fortune telling/

I can take you on and beat you any day of the week/
hit you so hard you won't be able to speak/
your not a rapper, just an eight legged freak/

like a spider, your about to be crushed under my shoe/
there's nothing you can do, yeah I've got a few losses, but i'll never get one by you/



I completely forgot about this.
just a quick spit.

[SPYDA]

Joey Don't Know Me Yet He Thinks He Can Show Me, The Ways Of A Lyricist When He's No More Than A Phony
I Got The Flow See. The Knowledge I Know G. And The Power I Possess Will Leave Your Soul Lonely

So Hate My Bars Or Not But It Does Not Change The Fact That Their Hot So Spit Your Weak Lyrics They'll Get Burnt On The Spot
Joe Think's He's A Writer But He's Lost The Plot, Your Lost, Looking For Success, Look Up And You'll Find Me At The Top

You Won't Pass The Task, I Will Outclass Your Ass, So Walk On Past Or Get Left In Scars
Seeing Stars As A Result Of Gettin Hit By My Bars, Thinking You'll Beat Me I'll Shatter Your Dreams Like Glass

Your A Waste Of Space And Your Rhymes Stagger Like They've Lost Their Pace,
I Spit With Grace, From The First To The Last One Of My Words Elegantly Fall Into Place


Uppin Votes, Don't Forget To Break Em Down...

[Joe M]

Nice drop,

uppin

[I.R.EMCEE]

Joe M:
Only way you can win is through disqualification/
only way you could be hot is if my punches gave you inflammation/
here's a tip, before you step to me try and get an education/
Hmmm. I don't like your three line bars... its a too awkward number, should've put inner multies in your bars so they wouldn't seem awkward. meh opener.
cause I can see from the cyphers, and your name, your useless at spelling/
compared to yours my shits compelling/
I know i'm about to beat you, and I don't need a fortune telling/
I kinda liked this one, since the second line was short it flowed alot better then the first bar. It wasn't all that great though.
I can take you on and beat you any day of the week/
hit you so hard you won't be able to speak/
your not a rapper, just an eight legged freak/
Not too much flow, yet again because of the whole three lined bars. Best part in this bar, "your not a rapper, just an eight legged freak"[COLOR]
like a spider, your about to be crushed under my shoe/
there's nothing you can do, yeah I've got a few losses, but i'll never get one by you/
[COLOR="red"]eh, an ok ender.

Spyda:
Joey Don't Know Me Yet He Thinks He Can Show Me, The Ways Of A Lyricist When He's No More Than A Phony
I Got The Flow See. The Knowledge I Know G. And The Power I Possess Will Leave Your Soul Lonely
I liked this opener alot, it flowed very nicely with the multies sprinkled through it and shit
So Hate My Bars Or Not But It Does Not Change The Fact That Their Hot So Spit Your Weak Lyrics They'll Get Burnt On The Spot
Joe Think's He's A Writer But He's Lost The Plot, Your Lost, Looking For Success, Look Up And You'll Find Me At The Top
The first line wasn't all that great, the second line was better. An Ok bar
You Won't Pass The Task, I Will Outclass Your Ass, So Walk On Past Or Get Left In Scars
Seeing Stars As A Result Of Gettin Hit By My Bars, Thinking You'll Beat Me I'll Shatter Your Dreams Like Glass
Though the glass part was kinda off, I know it was supposed to rhyme with the inner multies on the first line and as a result of the inner multies again, it flowed nicely.
Your A Waste Of Space And Your Rhymes Stagger Like They've Lost Their Pace,
I Spit With Grace, From The First To The Last One Of My Words Elegantly Fall Into Place
Liked the finisher.

Joe, still getting better but I feel like you were trying to get your own unique style by doing three lined bars. It could've been alot better. Work on multies inside the lines.
Spyda, I liked this drop, but your punches are lacking and you had no personals. You have a nice flow and multies though, if you can mix in some good punches you'll have a nice battle verse.

Vote = Spyda.

[Joe M]

Thanks for the vote I.R
My shit was totally wack, i've this battle lost.

1-0

[CapZ]

SPYDA

Joey Don't Know Me Yet He Thinks He Can Show Me, The Ways Of A Lyricist When He's No More Than A Phony
I Got The Flow See. The Knowledge I Know G. And The Power I Possess Will Leave Your Soul Lonely
..just flow here eh 1.5 opener..

So Hate My Bars Or Not But It Does Not Change The Fact That Their Hot So Spit Your Weak Lyrics They'll Get Burnt On The Spot
Joe Think's He's A Writer But He's Lost The Plot, Your Lost, Looking For Success, Look Up And You'll Find Me At The Top
..no ..

You Won't Pass The Task, I Will Outclass Your Ass, So Walk On Past Or Get Left In Scars
Seeing Stars As A Result Of Gettin Hit By My Bars, Thinking You'll Beat Me I'll Shatter Your Dreams Like Glass
..played ender line..

Your A Waste Of Space And Your Rhymes Stagger Like They've Lost Their Pace,
I Spit With Grace, From The First To The Last One Of My Words Elegantly Fall Into Place
.1.3./5 ehhh nothin ender..


Joe M

Only way you can win is through disqualification/
only way you could be hot is if my punches gave you inflammation/
here's a tip, before you step to me try and get an education/
..wack 1/5 no opener

cause I can see from the cyphers, and your name, your useless at spelling/
compared to yours my shits compelling/
I know i'm about to beat you, and I don't need a fortune telling/
..ehhhh

I can take you on and beat you any day of the week/
hit you so hard you won't be able to speak/
your not a rapper, just an eight legged freak/
..so-so good nameplay

like a spider, your about to be crushed under my shoe/
there's nothing you can do, yeah I've got a few losses, but i'll never get one by you/
..not a good ender 1/5


overall - ehhh i rather call this a tie but ima break it down so ya could know who really won, punches-joe personals-joe flow-spyda multies- spyda

so ima go with joe on this just cuz he actully had one bar that was a personal punch, spyda u gotta stop flowin to much man startin using more harsh punches and methaphors not a good battle from both


Consistency/Structure: spyda
Creativity: joe
Enjoyable: joe
Flow: spyda
Metaphors: tie
Multies: spyda
Personal: joe
Punches: joe
Vocabulary: tie
Wordplay: tie
Overall: joe