SlimshadyLP vs. ZenLand

[ZenLand]

3 Bars
Deadline is by Friday. I'll Drop Tonight.

[ZenLand]

SSLP Steps Out, Everyone Seems To Boo, Get The Win? You Can't See It Through Because I'll Leave You Bruised
If Anyone's Endangered It's Gotta Be You Since Your Crew Has Fuckin Beat (http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=11008&highlight=slimshadyLP) You Too (http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=21965&highlight=slimshadyLP)

You're Just Another Bum To Level, I'm Just Too Tough To Handle
How Can You Lose To Syn (http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=15568&highlight=slimshadyLP Syn) When Two Wins Have Came From (http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=15030&highlight=slimshadyLP) The Devyl (http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=14371&highlight=slimshadyLP)?

I Gotta Go Be In Depth For The People To See Who's Left Because Z's The Best
So Why Should I Even Try To Win When You've Already Beaten Yourself (http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=7898&highlight=slimshadyLP)?

[slimshadyLP]

shit this slipped my mind! im droping inna few

[slimshadyLP]

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=30645
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=30613&page=2


This battlers not “keystone”...’take notes from my massive pressure’ this hoe is a fag whos tender,
“rockin piano car-tunes(cartoons)”..ill show you hes as a jester!, Cuz “zen land musical punches?” not even when his “locations a battle record!”//

He’s ‘active on elevation’…but ‘slides downhill’..dont aid-this-bastard ill “slay(sleigh)-you-faster” than factories on a dayshift!,
Im smashing with stronger paces! None “behind your bars” ur not “a warden rapping”(award in rapping)..tho his sig got an ‘academy nomination!!’//

Think your flows jam? “Face it when you meet your own match”..theres more than “a-hole” to piece in those raps!
So Zen “looks to get lighter”....cuz “hes the whole ass!”//

explanations
1.keystone-key is a note, stone gives pressure/rockin piano, piano has keys, rockin=stone/cartoons=jester/ locations a battle record, location=land battle=punches record=music, his profile location has his battle record

2.sleigh/slay u faster=slides down hill and factories on a dayshift/ behind ur bars=a warden, warden is prison administration leader/ his sig has "there will be blood" which is movie that got academy nomination award

3. face it...match=fire kind of 'match'/ a-hole=asshole/ looks to get lighter connects to face it and match! lighter as fire lighter


dusnt any1 put up there vote links in battles anymore lol?

[Joe M]

Zen
SSLP Steps Out, Everyone Seems To Boo, Get The Win? You Can't See It Through Because I'll Leave You Bruised
If Anyone's Endangered It's Gotta Be You Since Your Crew Has Fuckin Beat You Too
This was a good opener and a good personal.
You're Just Another Bum To Level, I'm Just Too Tough To Handle
How Can You Lose To Syn When Two Wins Have Came From The Devyl?
another good personal, good bar
I Gotta Go Be In Depth For The People To See Who's Left Because Z's The Best
So Why Should I Even Try To Win When You've Already Beaten Yourself?
very good finisher


SSLP
This battlers not “keystone”...’take notes from my massive pressure’ this hoe is a fag whos tender,
“rockin piano car-tunes(cartoons)”..ill show you hes as a jester!, Cuz “zen land musical punches?” not even when his “locations a battle record!”//
This was an ok opener
He’s ‘active on elevation’…but ‘slides downhill’..dont aid-this-bastard ill “slay(sleigh)-you-faster” than factories on a dayshift!,
Im smashing with stronger paces! None “behind your bars” ur not “a warden rapping”(award in rapping)..tho his sig got an ‘academy nomination!!’//
I didn't like the start of this bar. I kinda lost track as I read it though the last line was good.
Think your flows jam? “Face it when you meet your own match”..theres more than “a-hole” to piece in those raps!
So Zen “looks to get lighter”....cuz “hes the whole ass!”//
First line was ok but I didn't get the second line at all. bad finisher.

my votes for Zenland. his had better flow and consistency and had alot more personals. SSLP's was kinda all over the place.

[slimshadyLP]

lol u obvioulsy didnt get it.

1-0 uppin

[ZenLand]

Dope verse SSLP

1-0

[raider]

no no one does vote links

Zenland
SSLP Steps Out, Everyone Seems To Boo, Get The Win? You Can't See It Through Because I'll Leave You Bruised
If Anyone's Endangered It's Gotta Be You Since Your Crew Has Fuckin Beat You Too
nice personal but besides that it was meh as an opener.
You're Just Another Bum To Level, I'm Just Too Tough To Handle
How Can You Lose To Syn When Two Wins Have Came From The Devyl?
iuno but i just wasnt sure wat you were getting at
I Gotta Go Be In Depth For The People To See Who's Left Because Z's The Best
So Why Should I Even Try To Win When You've Already Beaten Yourself?
not feeling this either

SSLP
This battlers not “keystone”...’take notes from my massive pressure’ this hoe is a fag whos tender,
“rockin piano car-tunes(cartoons)”..ill show you hes as a jester!, Cuz “zen land musical punches?” not even when his “locations a battle record!”//
pretty good
He’s ‘active on elevation’…but ‘slides downhill’..dont aid-this-bastard ill “slay(sleigh)-you-faster” than factories on a dayshift!,
Im smashing with stronger paces! None “behind your bars” ur not “a warden rapping”(award in rapping)..tho his sig got an ‘academy nomination!!’//
best line
Think your flows jam? “Face it when you meet your own match”..theres more than “a-hole” to piece in those raps!
So Zen “looks to get lighter”....cuz “hes the whole ass!”//
didnt flow at all to me but its a decent ender better than zens

zen wit his research technique and sslp's IHH type punch style
i gotta give it to slim. zen you didnt seem up on your game at all. sslp the punches were there but they werent put togethor so cleanly to me except for the second bar. but you def came harrder than zen

1-1

[ZenLand]

How Did You Not Get It?
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[threeonethree]

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I Gotta Go Be In Depth For The People To See Who's Left Because Z's The Best
So Why Should I Even Try To Win When You've Already [URL="http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=7898&highlight=slimshadyLP"]Beaten Yourself (http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=21965&highlight=slimshadyLP)?




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last line bitten from dash ... ( dash vs slimshadylp battle)

[Ilahi]

LOL

whats good with you 313
havent seen you around here in a while mothafucka

[slimshadyLP]

sup iceman lol didnt kno u changed ur name

[ZenLand]

I Fuckin Wrote That The Other Day So There Ain't No Fuckin Way I Could Have Done It. Fuck Off 313 You Faggot

[Ilahi]

Your Wack-Its-A-Fact so bring Heat-And-Yal-Melt
Cuz ya defeat list proves that youve Beaten-Yaself!

thats the line that dash wrote

its not biting but zen could have gotten the concept from dash and just reworded it

[slimshadyLP]

just vote plz ppl

Consistency/Structure:
Creativity:
Enjoyable:
Flow:
Metaphors:
Multies:
Personal:
Punches:
Vocabulary:
Wordplay:
Overall:

[slimshadyLP]

vote ples

[:$am3*$hyT*B!tCh:]

Consistency/Structure: Zenland
Creativity: Zenland
Enjoyable: Zenland
Flow: Zenland
Metaphors: Hmmmmm........SSLP
Multies: neither really
Personal: Zenland
Punches: SSLP
Vocabulary: SSLP
Wordplay: SSLP

Overall: Zenland

[ZenLand]

2-1 uppin

[I.R.EMCEE]

Consistency/Structure: Zenland
Creativity: SSLP
Enjoyable: Zenland
Flow: Zenland
Metaphors: SSLP
Multies: Both of you were kinda equal but I'm gonna go with Zen on this one because his was easier to follow.
Personal: Zenland
Punches:SSLP
Vocabulary: SSLP
Wordplay: SSLP
Overall: Hmm tied on these but I enjoyed Zen's more, it was easier to read and had more flow.

Edit: Someone go to my battle against spyda and vote please? Thanks.

[ZenLand]

3-1 uppin for TKO

[toxic-flow]

Battle was Decent.

Vote-Undisclosed.

[raider]

wat are you an idiot

[toxic-flow]

your the one who cant spell "what" so whats your point that your a clown and retarded?

[I.R.EMCEE]

Lol, can I get a voter at my battle with spyda? Bout to claim KO.

[slimshadyLP]

wow fuckin noob ass voters on em.net now lmao fuckin samshitbitch said this: Multies: neither really

LMAO theres no way neither had muties and that he had more than me. nob voters im too lazy to paste and show all there mistakes in the cats.

[threeonethree]

I Fuckin Wrote That The Other Day So There Ain't No Fuckin Way I Could Have Done It. Fuck Off 313 You Faggot

Shut the fuck up . No matter when you wrote it ,you aint gettin an oscar for writing it. Its just a net battle.

chill... Faggot.

[CJL_here]

Zen
SSLP Steps Out, Everyone Seems To Boo, Get The Win? You Can't See It Through Because I'll Leave You Bruised
If Anyone's Endangered It's Gotta Be You Since Your Crew Has Fuckin Beat You Too
Nice one

You're Just Another Bum To Level, I'm Just Too Tough To Handle
How Can You Lose To Syn When Two Wins Have Came From The Devyl?
Good word play mate

I Gotta Go Be In Depth For The People To See Who's Left Because Z's The Best
So Why Should I Even Try To Win When You've Already Beaten Yourself?
Good finisher, strong all the way through


SSLP
This battlers not “keystone”...’take notes from my massive pressure’ this hoe is a fag whos tender,
“rockin piano car-tunes(cartoons)”..ill show you hes as a jester!, Cuz “zen land musical punches?” not even when his “locations a battle record!”//
Alrite i guess

He’s ‘active on elevation’…but ‘slides downhill’..dont aid-this-bastard ill “slay(sleigh)-you-faster” than factories on a dayshift!,
Im smashing with stronger paces! None “behind your bars” ur not “a warden rapping”(award in rapping)..tho his sig got an ‘academy nomination!!’//
Not clear enough, but decent

Think your flows jam? “Face it when you meet your own match”..theres more than “a-hole” to piece in those raps!
So Zen “looks to get lighter”....cuz “hes the whole ass!”//
First lines sweet, second a bit confusing :confused:

For me, its Zen all the way, consistent throughout, helped along by a few confusing bars from his opponent

[MystaMic]

Consistency/Structure: Zenland
Creativity: SSLP
Enjoyable: SSLP
Flow: Zenland
Metaphors:SSLP
Multies: ZENLAND
Personal: Zenland
Punches: SSLP
Vocabulary: SSLP
Wordplay: SSLP

Overall: SSLP

[Zac the Ripper]

Wow... I haven't been here in a while...

THE BREAKDOWN:

Zenland

SSLP Steps Out, Everyone Seems To Boo, Get The Win? You Can't See It Through Because I'll Leave You Bruised
If Anyone's Endangered It's Gotta Be You Since Your Crew Has Fuckin Beat You Too

Nice opener, even though the multies here were a little simplistic (Not enough for it to count against you, or anything...)

You're Just Another Bum To Level, I'm Just Too Tough To Handle
How Can You Lose To Syn When Two Wins Have Came From The Devyl?

Not bad, first bar was nice, second bar was okay...

I Gotta Go Be In Depth For The People To See Who's Left Because Z's The Best
So Why Should I Even Try To Win When You've Already Beaten Yourself?

Yeah, the idea of the verse is similar to Dash's, but not so much that I'd call it a bite. A bit of a weak closer to go with the rest of the verse, however. Your second bar was much better.

SSLP:

This battlers not “keystone”...’take notes from my massive pressure’ this hoe is a fag whos tender,
“rockin piano car-tunes(cartoons)”..ill show you hes as a jester!, Cuz “zen land musical punches?” not even when his “locations a battle record!”//

Not bad... a little off, though...

He’s ‘active on elevation’…but ‘slides downhill’..dont aid-this-bastard ill “slay(sleigh)-you-faster” than factories on a dayshift!,
Im smashing with stronger paces! None “behind your bars” ur not “a warden rapping”(award in rapping)..tho his sig got an ‘academy nomination!!’//

The rhyme here was a little forced...

Think your flows jam? “Face it when you meet your own match”..theres more than “a-hole” to piece in those raps!
So Zen “looks to get lighter”....cuz “hes the whole ass!”//

This was the best bar in the verse, good closer.

THE CATEGORIES:

Consistency/Structure: Zen
Creativity: SSLP
Enjoyable: Zen
Flow: Zen
Metaphors: SSLP
Multies: Zen, because he was a little bit more clear in the pacing of his verse.
Personal: Zen
Punches:SSLP
Vocabulary: SSLP
Wordplay: SSLP
Overall: This wasn't your best, SSLP...

THE VOTE:

ZENLAND