View Full Version : relentlez vs. free92
relentlez
07-02-2008, 04:05 PM
4 Bars
Normal rules
Could vote in cats as I for one need the feedback lol,
Drop within 72 hours
Will try drop tonight anyway.
Nice one fam.
free92
07-02-2008, 04:56 PM
ur really goin with this i seriously suck
relentlez
07-02-2008, 04:57 PM
Ha so do I, it will be a battle for the title of Em.net's 2nd from worst battler ;) Na seriously it only way anyone can improve
free92
07-02-2008, 05:01 PM
*takes a deap breth*
lets do it lets drop now
free92
07-02-2008, 05:19 PM
never lookin to be merciful merkin you is the only time imma even lookin
never been cuffed but a thousand Judge Judy's votin and they gon throw the book at you
went to court saw the Judge for the first time told her this is wack relentlez this is my first drop
to bad nobody knows ya son matter fact lookin back your past free is da only one that owes-ya-one thats
why ya bitch ass gettin mercy on dis rhyme yea u aint relentlez this time
relentlez
07-02-2008, 06:05 PM
I have to be relentlez, how else can i cope with leaving free sensless/
assembling these words into weapons, dropping you with a single sentence//
You nothing compared to me, I stay connected like BT/
Seen your latest photos man, you resembling ET?
Free is no longer an option, I'm spitting alcatraz bars against you/
Strong enough to cage your ego too, Who am I even spitting defence too?//
I guess you already know the outcome, may aswell get out son/
But don't worry, just like your sister i'll remember my first one//
Explanations:
Bar One: In response to his reasons for my name, from there on self exp
Bar Two: Just look at his latest photos lol
Bar Three: A bit of attack against his name, questioning who he think he is kin d of thing.
Bar Four: He thought he sucked in call out and doubted himself, and "first one" line as in first shag compared to my first battle.
Nice drop anyway man. No beef intended.
Uppin' Votes Now:D
free92
07-02-2008, 06:12 PM
:eek: im fucked
slimshadyLP
07-02-2008, 07:30 PM
Consistency/Structure: R
Creativity: /
Enjoyable: tie
Flow: tie
Metaphors: R
Multies: /
Personal: R
Punches: R
Vocabulary: /
Wordplay: tie
Overall: Relentles wins. pretty weak battle tho
relentlez
07-02-2008, 07:46 PM
Neither of us really battle ha, appreciate the vote though
Joe M
07-03-2008, 03:41 PM
Consistency/Structure: R
Creativity: R
Enjoyable: R
Flow: R
Metaphors: R
Multies: R
Personal: R
Punches: R
Vocabulary: tie
Wordplay: none
Overall: relentlez
ZenLand
07-03-2008, 08:20 PM
Relentlez definetly took this.
Relentlez has a good flow. I like it. Free your verse didn't even rhyme. So what are you doing? lol
Relentlez took every cat in this battle.
Vote: Relentlez
I.R.EMCEE
07-03-2008, 08:35 PM
Relentlez KOd Free. Battle over ><
relentlez
07-04-2008, 05:29 AM
Lmao thanks guy, was a pretty whack verse from both of us though lol
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