Ilahi vs. ZenLand

[ZenLand]

4 Bars
Drop By Sunday. I'll Drop Later Today Faggot

[Ilahi]

o shit...i forgot you were a veteran
i shouldnt have disrespected the tough guy

[ZenLand]

Lol

I Couldn't Get On Yesterday But I'm Gonna Drop Soon

[ZenLand]

Quick Punch...
The Punches I Send And Deliver Will Leave Zen The Winner
Because It's Time For Ice To Fall Like The End Of December

Now Let's Get Serious..
Zen's On Fire, You Couldn't Strike A Match Thats Hotter, I'm Gonna Bash This Toddler
Because The Scorsese/Score Says He Will Lose Just Like At The Oscars

I'll Level Your Verse Because Compare To You I'm Still Better With My Worse
Who Are You? Noone Would Even Know Da Iceman If We Made The Letters Reverse

The Finisher
Ice Seems To Bore So It's Time For Time For Me To Bring The Force
Your Name Says You Need To Give Ill-A-Hi Because You Never Seen It Before
:worship: :worship: :worship:

Expo
Bar 3: If You Change D I To ID That Means His Identification

[Ilahi]

Hey guys let me introduce you to ZenLand...aka Mr. I-got-an-ego-because-90%-of-the-people-who-remember-me-as-the-faggot-I-really-am-left-the-site…

lol at this drop, i got writer's block so yea it's wack :(

I Don't Know If I'll Be Able To Get On Anymore This Week So I'm Droppin Somethin Quick


Quick Six. I Got Serious Writer's Block:mad:

zenland8393 (6:56:13:PM): im a vet now :)!

Stop with the apologies bitch it doesn’t earn you respect...you leave a "sorry for my wackness" every fucking time that you text...so when I "Put This Bitch Down To Sleep" he'll probly complain "BUT ICE I THOUGHT I WAS THE VET?"!!
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=19423

Go Vote In Mine And I.R.'s Battle Now

Vote In My Battle Too

I’m bringing back the past snitch!! You fell to me then and your death is approaching fast kid!!! And you want some fucking votes? Go ahead and ASK Prick!! Cuz Damn! 3-0 since you returned? LOL just remember what happened Last BITCH (http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=30557)!!!!

It pains me to see this kid respected and hyped, Remember guys? This is ZenLand the faggot NOBODY liked…Because to me he’s still that same ‘12 year old who rode my dick untill I left the site‘!! And coming from me he’ll probably take it as “ Yea I Guess That’s Alright”…I know it stings
Zen don’t make me get personal now…

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=28365&highlight=ZenLand

Thought you were smart right?
WRONG!
Overated
Zenland



So Throw Your Thoughts Of Me Duckin' In The Garbage Cuz I've Trashed Your Hopes,
Thinkin' Ya Funny?
I'll 'Break' Your Spine,It'll Be The First Time I've "Cracked A Joke"!...[/CENTER]

http://forum.eminem.net/attachment.php?attachmentid=2777&d=1141849649

sound familiar?

http://www.hollafront.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1652593&postcount=12
and ANOTHER?

Biting is an understatement, this motherfucker chews, cleans, and swallows, then regurgitates in the next battle claiming “I swear I didn’t have time to borrow”…and I know he lost and all, but I think I just might follow, and stick around long enough to see which bar of MINE he uses tomorrow!!!!…fucking faggot

sorry if the bars seem long the structure is just different
if theres any parts voters dont understand feel free to ask
but yea vote up

[TzVe Em]

zenland was wack

i vote ice alll the way no need to explain

[ZenLand]

I Was Wack? Fuck Off Bitch. I Could Kill You With One Bar Faggot

[Ilahi]

tzve break it down

[I.R.EMCEE]

Zen:
The Punches I Send And Deliver Will Leave Zen The Winner
Because It's Time For Ice To Fall Like The End Of December
eh, Kinda weak. Zen the Winner/End of December supposed to be a multi? Didn't really match up.

Zen's On Fire, You Couldn't Strike A Match Thats Hotter, I'm Gonna Bash This Toddler
Because The Scorsese/Score Says He Will Lose Just Like At The Oscars
Ok bar.

I'll Level Your Verse Because Compare To You I'm Still Better With My Worse
Who Are You? Noone Would Even Know Da Iceman If We Made The Letters Reverse
Ok bar again. Wasn't feelin' it.

Ice Seems To Bore So It's Time For Time For Me To Bring The Force
Your Name Says You Need To Give Ill-A-Hi Because You Never Seen It Before
Kinda fucked up on the first part but who cares. Anyway it was alright. I liked the other stuff you were comin up with on other battles alot better then this drop Zen.

Ilahi (Iceman):
Stop with the apologies bitch it doesn’t earn you respect...you leave a "sorry for my wackness" every fucking time that you text...so when I "Put This Bitch Down To Sleep" he'll probly complain "BUT ICE I THOUGHT I WAS THE VET?"!!
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=19423
Good personal here. The whole vet thing was good.

I’m bringing back the past snitch!! You fell to me then and your death is approaching fast kid!!! And you want some fucking votes? Go ahead and ASK Prick!! Cuz Damn! 3-0 since you returned? LOL just remember what happened Last BITCH!!!!
Good bar. Another personal in here. He's diggin' up stuff lol.
It pains me to see this kid respected and hyped, Remember guys? This is ZenLand the faggot NOBODY liked…Because to me he’s still that same ‘12 year old who rode my dick untill I left the site‘!! And coming from me he’ll probably take it as “ Yea I Guess That’s Alright”…I know it stings
Damn man. I liked this one.

Biting is an understatement, this motherfucker chews, cleans, and swallows, then regurgitates in the next battle claiming “I swear I didn’t have time to borrow”…and I know he lost and all, but I think I just might follow, and stick around long enough to see which bar of MINE he uses tomorrow!!!!…fucking faggot
Oh shit dude. Loved this personal and it was a good finisher. I think this was the best of your bars.

Aight then, I wasn't feelin' Zen's shit. Personally, you did better in other battles but people bringing up that bitin' shit and it's makin' for good personals. Ilahi, I was feelin' yours.

Vote = Ilahi.

[ZenLand]

0-1 uppin

[TzVe Em]

I Was Wack? Fuck Off Bitch. I Could Kill You With One Bar Faggot

man you were wack , you were tryna be to clever .. . your no iron solomon


ice . . . vatoooo i dont have the time to write , and you should know by now that i not a idiot at voting i know what im talkin / votin about . . so take the vote or leave it but dont have time

peace

[Ilahi]

call it zen

i dgaf

[:$am3*$hyT*B!tCh:]

The Punches I Send And Deliver Will Leave Zen The Winner
Because It's Time For Ice To Fall Like The End Of December
Pretty good, maybe a little soft tho

Now Let's Get Serious..
Zen's On Fire, You Couldn't Strike A Match Thats Hotter, I'm Gonna Bash This Toddler
Because The Scorsese/Score Says He Will Lose Just Like At The Oscars
Liked this one too, it was ok

I'll Level Your Verse Because Compare To You I'm Still Better With My Worse
Who Are You? Noone Would Even Know Da Iceman If We Made The Letters Reverse
This was sick, I liked this one alot

The Finisher
Ice Seems To Bore So It's Time For Time For Me To Bring The Force
Your Name Says You Need To Give Ill-A-Hi Because You Never Seen It Before
I honestly didn't get it, maybe I just missed it :confused:


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Hey guys let me introduce you to ZenLand...aka Mr. I-got-an-ego-because-90%-of-the-people-who-remember-me-as-the-faggot-I-really-am-left-the-site…
No flow, nice diss but no flow what so ever

Stop with the apologies bitch it doesn’t earn you respect...you leave a "sorry for my wackness" every fucking time that you text...so when I "Put This Bitch Down To Sleep" he'll probly complain "BUT ICE I THOUGHT I WAS THE VET?"!!
Really choppy, and I didn't even GET the diss in this, wtf?

I’m bringing back the past snitch!! You fell to me then and your death is approaching fast kid!!! And you want some fucking votes? Go ahead and ASK Prick!! Cuz Damn! 3-0 since you returned? LOL just remember what happened Last BITCH (http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=30557)!!!!
I loved this one

It pains me to see this kid respected and hyped, Remember guys? This is ZenLand the faggot NOBODY liked…Because to me he’s still that same ‘12 year old who rode my dick untill I left the site‘!! And coming from me he’ll probably take it as “ Yea I Guess That’s Alright”…I know it stings
Zen don’t make me get personal now…
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=28365&highlight=ZenLand
Probably your best bar

Thought you were smart right?
WRONG!
Was this needed? Seriously?

http://forum.eminem.net/attachment.php?attachmentid=2777&d=1141849649

sound familiar?

http://www.hollafront.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1652593&postcount=12
and ANOTHER?
Ok I really hated how you set this up. There was way to much shit all cluttered. I didn't like this part at all.

Biting is an understatement, this motherfucker chews, cleans, and swallows, then regurgitates in the next battle claiming “I swear I didn’t have time to borrow”…and I know he lost and all, but I think I just might follow, and stick around long enough to see which bar of MINE he uses tomorrow!!!!…fucking faggot
Good Finisher

Overall: Ilahi
BUUUUT!!!! Ilahi I want to include that the way you set up your stuff I honestly didn't even want to read it. Why did you need so much shit?
Isn't a 4 bar diss enough? Did you really need to research so much to diss this kid?
Kinda stupid if you ask me, but my vote is for you anyways

[Ilahi]

thanks for the vote...but your lack of intellect is appalling...

i understand the fact that you didnt like the structure of the verse its called showing the personals...and that bar you didnt get vets (or animal doctors) "put down" or kill sick animals...he says hes happy because hes a vet
me and zen go way back i wanted to get personal

horrible

[:$am3*$hyT*B!tCh:]

thanks for the vote...but your lack of intellect is appalling...

i understand the fact that you didnt like the structure of the verse its called showing the personals...and that bar you didnt get vets (or animal doctors) "put down" or kill sick animals...he says hes happy because hes a vet
me and zen go way back i wanted to get personal

horrible

Lol okkkk???? Annnnndddd?
I didn't like your shit, so what?
Get over it.

I honestly think "personals" are great and everything but when you over do it I find it annoying.
You may not think the same so calling my "lack of intellect" appalling is a little stupid.
I'm just some chick on a forum. Do you honestly care what I say?

[Ilahi]

no you liked my shit you said it yourself

thanks for the vote goodbye

[TzVe Em]

ice i swear you were latino

[Ilahi]

half and half
can we get some votes please?

[:$am3*$hyT*B!tCh:]

no you liked my shit you said it yourself

thanks for the vote goodbye

Hah your a prick dude.
And yeah I liked your rhymes, not they way you set up or attacked this kid with everything you could and it seemed like that was your main thing, not making sure your rhymes were really slick.

Didn't mean to offend your ass by speakin my opinion, shit. I let everyone put me down in my battles, I only ever got one vote in all my battles and I aint cocky like you when people don't like my shit.

[Ilahi]

woww
shut the fuck up im not getting cocky im not hating on you...its a TEXT BATTLE its meant to ATTACK the other opponent
i wrote that verse in 10-15 fucking minutes
do you understand how easy it is to find personals?
i feel sorry for your parents...

[:$am3*$hyT*B!tCh:]

woww
shut the fuck up im not getting cocky im not hating on you...its a TEXT BATTLE its meant to ATTACK the other opponent
i wrote that verse in 10-15 fucking minutes
do you understand how easy it is to find personals?
i feel sorry for your parents...


Yes sir, I know that battles are about DISSING the other person. :rolleyes:
And I think everyone has written their shit in 10-15 mins or they are pre-writing which should be cheatin.
And yes I can see that, you used like 300 of them. Hah.

And thank you for caring so much as to feel sympathy for my parents.
How sweet are you?

*end sarcasm*

[Ilahi]

thank you
can we get some votes?

[Lyricologist_RiCo]

Zen:
The Punches I Send And Deliver Will Leave Zen The Winner
Because It's Time For Ice To Fall Like The End Of December
TO ME I LOVE DA LAST LINE, SHIT WAS ORIGINAL..LOL
Zen's On Fire, You Couldn't Strike A Match Thats Hotter, I'm Gonna Bash This Toddler
Because The Scorsese/Score Says He Will Lose Just Like At The Oscars
HMMM......DIDNT LIKE DIS BAR MUCH

I'll Level Your Verse Because Compare To You I'm Still Better With My Worse
Who Are You? Noone Would Even Know Da Iceman If We Made The Letters Reverse
DIDNT UNDERSTAND IT UNTIL I READ DA EXPLAININ....HMM OK BAR

Ice Seems To Bore So It's Time For Time For Me To Bring The Force
Your Name Says You Need To Give Ill-A-Hi Because You Never Seen It Before
HAHAHAHAHA....DAMN ZEN DA LAST LINE WAS HARD HOMIE REAL TALK GIVE ILL A HI...LOL DA BEST LINE YET

Ilahi (Iceman):
Stop with the apologies bitch it doesn’t earn you respect...you leave a "sorry for my wackness" every fucking time that you text...so when I "Put This Bitch Down To Sleep" he'll probly complain "BUT ICE I THOUGHT I WAS THE VET?"!!
HMMM WIT DA LINKS N SHIT WAS A STR8 OPENER BUT U COULD HAVE PUNCHED HARDER

I’m bringing back the past snitch!! You fell to me then and your death is approaching fast kid!!! And you want some fucking votes? Go ahead and ASK Prick!! Cuz Damn! 3-0 since you returned? LOL just remember what happened Last BITCH!!!!
LMFAO...HEYYYY...GOOD ONE...MADE ME LAUGH HAHAHA

It pains me to see this kid respected and hyped, Remember guys? This is ZenLand the faggot NOBODY liked…Because to me he’s still that same ‘12 year old who rode my dick untill I left the site‘!! And coming from me he’ll probably take it as “ Yea I Guess That’s Alright”…I know it stings
HAHA....HMM OK BAR

Biting is an understatement, this motherfucker chews, cleans, and swallows, then regurgitates in the next battle claiming “I swear I didn’t have time to borrow”…and I know he lost and all, but I think I just might follow, and stick around long enough to see which bar of MINE he uses tomorrow!!!!…fucking faggot
DAMNNNNNN HOMIE.....LOL KILL'D IT

ZEN: ZEN U COULD'VE CAME HARDER WIT YO PUNCHES...I THINK YOU SHOULD JUS COME WIT SIMPLE HARD PUNCHES..ERVYBODY CAN UNDERSTAND....BUT DA GIVE ILL-A-HI LINE WAS DOPE IF ERVYLINE HAD A HARD PUNCH LIKE DAT U WOULD'VE WON DA BATTLE HOMIE...I FEEL YOU SHOULD WORK ON YO PUNCHES N CROWD PLEASERS....5/10

ILAHI: LOL HOMIE YO WHOLE VERSE WAS A PERSONAL WHICH KILL IT OFF TOP...SHID ION KNO BOUT NOBODY ELSE I LIKED HOW U SETTED DA SHIT UP...WIT DA LINKS N SHIT....JUS PROOF LINKS....GOOD VERSE...U WON DA BATTLE I FEEL BECUZ OF UR GOOD PERSONALS U HAD ON EMM...N WEN U BROUGHT UP DA BITIN SHIT N U HAD PROOF..NOBODY LIKES A BITER..SO U KILL'D IT OFF TOP...BUT I WOULD HAVE LOVE'D TO SEE U WORDPLAY N METAPHORE N SHIT...2 SHOW HOW VERSITALE U R....GOOD VERSE 7/10

I GUESS HE GAVE ILL-A-HI CUZ HE TOOK DIS ONE...HAAAAAA

[Ilahi]

appreciate it 2-0

[:$am3*$hyT*B!tCh:]

actually. I see 3 votes for you.
So i think you KO'd

[Ilahi]

tzve didnt break it down so its still 2-0 can you please not freepost?

[:$am3*$hyT*B!tCh:]

tzve didnt break it down so its still 2-0 can you please not freepost?
I wasnt talking about Tzve
I was talking about I.R.EMCEE

And its not freeposting cuz I'm tellin you something, count the votes.

[Ilahi]

i thought zen told me not to count your vote my appologies

3-0 good battle zen

[TzVe Em]

who gives a fuck about free posting what difference to your life is going to do

[Ilahi]

i hope you weren't talking to me cuz if you were i swear ill kill you over the interet cuz i will kill you over the internet

LOL but seriously i dont like battle threads being flooded

[TzVe Em]

LOLLL HAHAHHA iceman i lyk ur humourr

this ma last post in this subject for u vato

u got this win easy

1

[ZenLand]

TzVe you don't know what you're talking about faggot. How do you know how to vote good? Lmao

At Ice, That was straight dope cuz.... Even though it seemed like 40 bars instead of 4 lol. But you definetly took this one. Dope verse

[Ilahi]

no it was 4

subliminal shots ftl

good battle

[slimshadyLP]

lmao at all this^