Rico vs. ZenLand

[ZenLand]

5 - 8 Bars
Drop By Friday

[ZenLand]

Get Ready For Defeat Once More Because It's About To Be The Fourth
Because All I Gotta Do Is Type In Big Letters Because Capz Beat You Before

Rico Thinks He Can Win Hes Gone Crazy, Been Around For Awhile But He Ain't Dropped A Bomb Lately
He's A Kurupt Mind? Boy Does He Lie/Eli Guess That's Why You Ain't Undefeated No More Like Tom Brady

You About To Get Ripped Tonight, You Should Just Forget This Fight
I Could Bring A Retard To The Queen Because All It Takes To Beat Supaman Is Crip To Knight/Kryptonite

Noone Even Knows Rico Because Theres Noone Here To Remember, In KM? It Don't Seem Like It When We Hear You Deliver
Rico Close To Winning? Well It's Closer Than It Appears Like He's Looking Through A Rear View Mirror

Keep Beatin Rico Forever With Force When I Bring This Beretta To Whores
Three Losses Now, Its Time You Met A Four/Metaphore Like Comparin How My Lines Are Better Than Yours

Expo
2.His yahoo name is supaman_555
rest is self
waitin for your drop

[ZenLand]

Get Ready For Defeat Once More Because It's About To Be The Fourth
Because All I Gotta Do Is Type In Big Letters Because Capz Beat You Before

Rico Thinks He Can Win Hes Gone Crazy, Been Around For Awhile But He Ain't Dropped A Bomb Lately
He's A Kurupt Mind? Boy Does He Lie/Eli Guess That's Why You Ain't Undefeated No More Like Tom Brady

You About To Get Ripped Tonight, You Should Just Forget This Fight
I Could Bring A Retard To The Queen Because All It Takes To Beat Supaman Is Crip To Knight/Kryptonite

Noone Even Knows Rico Because Theres Noone Here To Remember, In KM? It Don't Seem Like It When We Hear You Deliver
Zen Close To Winning? Well It's Closer Than It Appears Like He's Looking Through A Rear View Mirror

Keep Beatin Rico Forever With Force When I Bring This Beretta To Whores
Three Losses Now, Its Time You Met A Four/Metaphore Like Comparin How My Lines Are Better Than Yours

Expo
2.His yahoo name is supaman_555
rest is self
waitin for your drop

I Had A Typo And It Wouldn't Let Me Edit

[Lyricologist_RiCo]

hahahha liked da capz line...lol
n dem right ima metaphore ervyline like a run-on punchline.....


but listen "captain" it's "crunch time", since u couldnt ill jus killed u wit punchlines//(captain crunch cereal)
i am a "kurupt mind" dats y u losin cuz im da one wit "Kurupt(corrupt) lines"//1
"Zen" couldnt "Land" a punch if i stuck my head out da computer monitor//
faggot ass cookie monster, "my flows like water", dats y im dis "pussy's monster"//2(cats r scared of water..duh)
BIG WORDS but da shit u spittin is small...if dis was "tennis" dis bitch only hittin "net balls" // (net ball: a serve that strikes the net before falling into the receiver's court; the ball must be served again;hence a net battle)

lets recall, dis pussy gettin fuck wit dry walls..."ate" dis "pussy" alive..now its time 2 "spit da hair balls"//3
still in da "south" right, cuz da bitch "goin down" like da "superhead", like ya "typo" b4 i dropped dis nigga had a "blooper" head//(superhead-kerrina steffans;4rm texas;blopper:mistake)
dis nigga got me "twisted" so i think dis is a "screw thread",dis nigga slick "bitin off da rest" so "him n falix is twin beds"//4(*)
"Word of mouf" dis nigga "ludacris", if he think i aint "true" 2 dis,i "insist" to "exist",like ima "reminisce"//
on how he spit da Same Shyt Bitch like dat bitch spit but im takin bout falix//5(He battled same shyt bitch;falix use kurupt mind shit against me*)
ima do 6 n ripped dis pussy off my dick, cuz he kno i was n "stills(steals) da shit",ima "toilet"//
my rhymes compared 2 "urs r milk", cuz u "spoil it"..mad cuz im "hotter den ya engine" like "u 4got 2 oil it"//6
blahhhhhhh:eek:
lets get dem votes
gd verse homie:clap:

[Swayyy]

Get Ready For Defeat Once More Because It's About To Be The Fourth
Because All I Gotta Do Is Type In Big Letters Because Capz Beat You Before
Love this bar..nice, love the word play on caps, I would class that as a personal too

Rico Thinks He Can Win Hes Gone Crazy, Been Around For Awhile But He Ain't Dropped A Bomb Lately
He's A Kurupt Mind? Boy Does He Lie/Eli Guess That's Why You Ain't Undefeated No More Like Tom Brady
Flow is slightly off-ish for me here but like the top line

You About To Get Ripped Tonight, You Should Just Forget This Fight
I Could Bring A Retard To The Queen Because All It Takes To Beat Supaman Is Crip To Knight/Kryptonite
Again the flows just abit off because of the bottom line being that much longer and long winded

Noone Even Knows Rico Because Theres Noone Here To Remember, In KM? It Don't Seem Like It When We Hear You Deliver
Zen Close To Winning? Well It's Closer Than It Appears Like He's Looking Through A Rear View Mirror
Not the strongest of your bars tbh...again slightly long winded, nice attempt at a personal about KM and I see a nice multi

Keep Beatin Rico Forever With Force When I Bring This Beretta To Whores
Three Losses Now, Its Time You Met A Four/Metaphore Like Comparin How My Lines Are Better Than Yours
Strong ending, I liked this

but listen "captain" it's "crunch time", since u couldnt ill jus killed u wit punchlines//(captain crunch cereal)
i am a "kurupt mind" dats y u losin cuz im da one wit "Kurupt(corrupt) lines"//1
very strong opening, flow was great..especially liking the bottom line

"Zen" couldnt "Land" a punch if i stuck my head out da computer monitor//
faggot ass cookie monster, "my flows like water", dats y im dis "pussy's monster"//2
Nice play on his name, personally I dont like the repetition of monster though..not sure why exactly it just doesnt sound "right"

BIG WORDS but da shit u spittin is small...if dis was "tennis" dis bitch only hittin "net balls" // (net ball: a serve that strikes the net before falling into the receiver's court; the ball must be served again;hence a net battle)

lets recall, dis pussy gettin fuck wit dry walls..."ate" dis "pussy" alive..now its time 2 "spit da hair balls"//3
wow, I liked this bar, very strong, nice flow rhythem and wordplay...

still in da "south" right, cuz da bitch "goin down" like da "superhead", like ya "typo" b4 i dropped dis nigga had a "blooper" head//(superhead-kerrina steffans;4rm texas;blopper:mistake)
dis nigga got me "twisted" so i think dis is a "screw thread",dis nigga slick "bitin off da rest" so "him n falix is twin beds"//4(*)
for a long bar the flows still real strong, nice personal there about the south too and playing on his mistake

"Word of mouf" dis nigga "ludacris", if he think i aint "true" 2 dis,i "insist" to "exist",like ima "reminisce"//
on how he spit da Same Shyt Bitch like dat bitch spit but im takin bout falix//5(He battled same shyt bitch;falix use kurupt mind shit against me*)
Liking the top line, not to keen on the bottom tbh..

ima do 6 n ripped dis pussy off my dick, cuz he kno i was n "stills(steals) da shit",ima "toilet"//
my rhymes compared 2 "urs r milk", cuz u "spoil it"..mad cuz im "hotter den ya engine" like "u 4got 2 oil it"//6
nice metaphore compaing his rhymes to milk haha...

Categories
Consistency/Structure: Zenland
Creativity: Rico
Enjoyable: Rico
Flow: Rico
Metaphors: Rico
Multies: Zen
Personal: Zen - that caps line got you this categorie, it was class
Punches: Rico
Vocabulary: Rico
Wordplay: Rico
Overall: Rico

Rico...

[Lyricologist_RiCo]

1-0 uppin...come on ppl

[ZenLand]

Dope Battle Rico
1-0 Uppin

[I.R.EMCEE]

Get Ready For Defeat Once More Because It's About To Be The Fourth
Because All I Gotta Do Is Type In Big Letters Because Capz Beat You Before
Nice Personal, good Opener.

Rico Thinks He Can Win Hes Gone Crazy, Been Around For Awhile But He Ain't Dropped A Bomb Lately
He's A Kurupt Mind? Boy Does He Lie/Eli Guess That's Why You Ain't Undefeated No More Like Tom Brady
The first line is nice, second part not so good to me.

You About To Get Ripped Tonight, You Should Just Forget This Fight
I Could Bring A Retard To The Queen Because All It Takes To Beat Supaman Is Crip To Knight/Kryptonite
Hmm not bad but not that good either.

Noone Even Knows Rico Because Theres Noone Here To Remember, In KM? It Don't Seem Like It When We Hear You Deliver
Zen Close To Winning? Well It's Closer Than It Appears Like He's Looking Through A Rear View Mirror
Didn't really feel this one. I think it was just a little too long.

Keep Beatin Rico Forever With Force When I Bring This Beretta To Whores
Three Losses Now, Its Time You Met A Four/Metaphore Like Comparin How My Lines Are Better Than Yours
Good finisher.

but listen "captain" it's "crunch time", since u couldnt ill jus killed u wit punchlines//(captain crunch cereal)
i am a "kurupt mind" dats y u losin cuz im da one wit "Kurupt(corrupt) lines"//1
Lol I liked this opener.

"Zen" couldnt "Land" a punch if i stuck my head out da computer monitor//
faggot ass cookie monster, "my flows like water", dats y im dis "pussy's monster"//2
Play on his name was cool, I agree with Swayy though on the monster thing.

BIG WORDS but da shit u spittin is small...if dis was "tennis" dis bitch only hittin "net balls" // (net ball: a serve that strikes the net before falling into the receiver's court; the ball must be served again;hence a net battle)
lets recall, dis pussy gettin fuck wit dry walls..."ate" dis "pussy" alive..now its time 2 "spit da hair balls"//3
Ha that shit was funny. It was kinda nasty though xD Hairy pussy? Anyway personally I think this is one of your best bars.

still in da "south" right, cuz da bitch "goin down" like da "superhead", like ya "typo" b4 i dropped dis nigga had a "blooper" head//(superhead-kerrina steffans;4rm texas;blopper:mistake)
dis nigga got me "twisted" so i think dis is a "screw thread",dis nigga slick "bitin off da rest" so "him n falix is twin beds"//4(*)
Very long, had flow continuously though. I just didn't like the personal or the punch. It wasn't doin' it.

"Word of mouf" dis nigga "ludacris", if he think i aint "true" 2 dis,i "insist" to "exist",like ima "reminisce"//
on how he spit da Same Shyt Bitch like dat bitch spit but im takin bout falix//5(He battled same shyt bitch;falix use kurupt mind shit against me*)
The second part of this bar was too short. I didn't flow well but it was decent.

ima do 6 n ripped dis pussy off my dick, cuz he kno i was n "stills(steals) da shit",ima "toilet"//
my rhymes compared 2 "urs r milk", cuz u "spoil it"..mad cuz im "hotter den ya engine" like "u 4got 2 oil it"//6
Liked this one alot. Good finish.

Well I'ma go with Rico on this one. I think Zen done better then this before but I liked both of your drops. Vote = Rico.

[Lyricologist_RiCo]

2-0 Uppin 4 K.o. Come On Ppl N N Note My Verse Got A Flo All Through It U Cant Be Stoppin In Shit U Got Read It Str8 Through

[Joe M]

Zen
Get Ready For Defeat Once More Because It's About To Be The Fourth
Because All I Gotta Do Is Type In Big Letters Because Capz Beat You Before
Nice personal and a good opener

Rico Thinks He Can Win Hes Gone Crazy, Been Around For Awhile But He Ain't Dropped A Bomb Lately
He's A Kurupt Mind? Boy Does He Lie/Eli Guess That's Why You Ain't Undefeated No More Like Tom Brady
The first line was good but I didn't like the second

You About To Get Ripped Tonight, You Should Just Forget This Fight
I Could Bring A Retard To The Queen Because All It Takes To Beat Supaman Is Crip To Knight/Kryptonite
I didn't like this bar

Noone Even Knows Rico Because Theres Noone Here To Remember, In KM? It Don't Seem Like It When We Hear You Deliver
Zen Close To Winning? Well It's Closer Than It Appears Like He's Looking Through A Rear View Mirror
This bar was ok, kinda went off a bit

Keep Beatin Rico Forever With Force When I Bring This Beretta To Whores
Three Losses Now, Its Time You Met A Four/Metaphore Like Comparin How My Lines Are Better Than Yours
Good finisher.

Rico
but listen "captain" it's "crunch time", since u couldnt ill jus killed u wit punchlines//(captain crunch cereal)
i am a "kurupt mind" dats y u losin cuz im da one wit "Kurupt(corrupt) lines"//1
Good opener

"Zen" couldnt "Land" a punch if i stuck my head out da computer monitor//
faggot ass cookie monster, "my flows like water", dats y im dis "pussy's monster"//2
I thought this was a very good bar

BIG WORDS but da shit u spittin is small...if dis was "tennis" dis bitch only hittin "net balls" // (net ball: a serve that strikes the net before falling into the receiver's court; the ball must be served again;hence a net battle)
lets recall, dis pussy gettin fuck wit dry walls..."ate" dis "pussy" alive..now its time 2 "spit da hair balls"//3
This was one of your best bars

still in da "south" right, cuz da bitch "goin down" like da "superhead", like ya "typo" b4 i dropped dis nigga had a "blooper" head//(superhead-kerrina steffans;4rm texas;blopper:mistake)
dis nigga got me "twisted" so i think dis is a "screw thread",dis nigga slick "bitin off da rest" so "him n falix is twin beds"//4(*)
I didn't like this bar at all

"Word of mouf" dis nigga "ludacris", if he think i aint "true" 2 dis,i "insist" to "exist",like ima "reminisce"//
on how he spit da Same Shyt Bitch like dat bitch spit but im takin bout falix//5(He battled same shyt bitch;falix use kurupt mind shit against me*)
I liked how it started off but the second line ruined it

ima do 6 n ripped dis pussy off my dick, cuz he kno i was n "stills(steals) da shit",ima "toilet"//
my rhymes compared 2 "urs r milk", cuz u "spoil it"..mad cuz im "hotter den ya engine" like "u 4got 2 oil it"//6
very good finisher

this was a good battle, but imma go with Rico

[Lyricologist_RiCo]

3-0 k.o. gd battle zenland

[ZenLand]

Dope Battle Rico