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ZenLand
06-03-2008, 05:02 PM
3 - 6 Bars

I'll Try And Post Later

ZenLand
06-03-2008, 05:27 PM
In Case You Ain't On Soon I'll Put The Deadline As Friday


G/L

ZenLand
06-03-2008, 05:50 PM
If We Listen To Joe's Flow We'll Snooze, I'll Throw Some Blows To This Noob Because The Blood From His Nose Will Ooze
I Don't Understand Why He Comes In This Battle When He Knows He'll Lose
yea, I knew i'd lose, just wanted to see if i'm gettin any better or not

Sorry Son But You Can't Take My Votes In This Bitch, After This He'll Be My Biggest Fan And Take My Quotes In His Sig
This Guy Thinks Hes A Comedian (http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=29969), But Keep Your Day Job Joe And Don't Plan No Gig

Time For The End.....

The Room Gets Grim And Scary As He's Carried To The Cemetary
He'll Be Madden/Mad In Hear/Here Like He's Listenin To NFL Coaches Commentary

Uppin Your Verse

ZenLand
06-03-2008, 05:53 PM
I Just Dropped A Quick 3 Bars. You Can Drop More If You Want It Don't Matter To Me

Joe M
06-04-2008, 03:17 PM
Good drop dude



Don't think all your K.O's are gonna scare me/
when i'm done with you, you'll looking gayer than a fairy/
have you crying 'how dare he!'/
you think your gonna beat me? bitch your funnier than Jim Carrey/
You think your tough cause ya avatar is of Al Pacino/
I'll lyrically lacerate this lame and lousy latino/

Joe M
06-04-2008, 03:24 PM
up to 3 votes I reckon

could peeps plz break it down

I.R.EMCEE
06-04-2008, 05:29 PM
Zenland’s:
If We Listen To Joe's Flow We'll Snooze, I'll Throw Some Blows To This Noob Because The Blood From His Nose Will Ooze
I Don't Understand Why He Comes In This Battle When He Knows He'll Lose
Nice personal with the quote added in and all.
Sorry Son But You Can't Take My Votes In This Bitch, After This He'll Be My Biggest Fan And Take My Quotes In His Sig
This Guy Thinks Hes A Comedian, But Keep Your Day Job Joe And Don't Plan No Gig
Again another nice personal to me, I like how this one flowed in my head.
The Room Gets Grim And Scary As He's Carried To The Cemetary
He'll Be Madden/Mad In Hear/Here Like He's Listenin To NFL Coaches Commentary
The commentary/cemetary multi didn't really sound that good but the multis inside of the rhyme were better.
Joe M’s
Don't think all your K.O's are gonna scare me/
when i'm done with you, you'll looking gayer than a fairy/
Lol, this line made me laugh but it was kind of weak.
have you crying 'how dare he!'/
you think your gonna beat me? bitch your funnier than Jim Carrey/
Another weak blow to me. I just wasn't feelin' it.
You think your tough cause ya avatar is of Al Pacino/
I'll lyrically lacerate this lame and lousy latino/
Weak to me again. This line would've been better if Zenland was actually latino.

Overall Zenland was better. My vote's for Zen.

ZenLand
06-04-2008, 10:22 PM
Uppin 1-0

FreeFlow
06-04-2008, 11:17 PM
Zenland’s:
If We Listen To Joe's Flow We'll Snooze, I'll Throw Some Blows To This Noob Because The Blood From His Nose Will Ooze
I Don't Understand Why He Comes In This Battle When He Knows He'll Lose
Nice personal coo multies
Sorry Son But You Can't Take My Votes In This Bitch, After This He'll Be My Biggest Fan And Take My Quotes In His Sig
This Guy Thinks Hes A Comedian, But Keep Your Day Job Joe And Don't Plan No Gig
another pretty good bar. with the evidence at least
The Room Gets Grim And Scary As He's Carried To The Cemetary
He'll Be Madden/Mad In Hear/Here Like He's Listenin To NFL Coaches Commentary
wasnt really feelin it. good wordplay but it just didnt work like i thought it would
Joe M
Don't think all your K.O's are gonna scare me/
when i'm done with you, you'll looking gayer than a fairy/
weak
have you crying 'how dare he!'/
you think your gonna beat me? bitch your funnier than Jim Carrey/
it would be nice if jim carrey was funny
You think your tough cause ya avatar is of Al Pacino/
I'll lyrically lacerate this lame and lousy latino/
nah son

zenland wins easy

Joe M
06-05-2008, 02:38 PM
thanks for the votes

2-0

ZenLand
06-05-2008, 06:05 PM
2-0 Uppin The K.O.

Garbage
06-05-2008, 07:46 PM
infact ... i vote for noone , just din't feel excitment when i read , both of u

I.R.EMCEE
06-06-2008, 11:08 AM
Shut up Garbage, you're just mad cuz you're trash

ZenLand
06-06-2008, 02:32 PM
Then Don't Freepost In The Thread Garbage.

2-0 Uppin

Garbage
06-07-2008, 06:13 AM
Shut up Garbage, you're just mad cuz you're trash
u shut up coz it's not ur buisness ... yeah i'm Garbage u think i give a shit when u say it ???? poor u

:$am3*$hyT*B!tCh:
06-07-2008, 07:53 AM
If We Listen To Joe's Flow We'll Snooze, I'll Throw Some Blows To This Noob Because The Blood From His Nose Will Ooze
This was a good opener, good diss.
I Don't Understand Why He Comes In This Battle When He Knows He'll Lose
Sorry Son But You Can't Take My Votes In This Bitch, After This He'll Be My Biggest Fan And Take My Quotes In His Sig
Good point, nice disses
This Guy Thinks Hes A Comedian, But Keep Your Day Job Joe And Don't Plan No Gig
Its alright.
Time For The End.....
The Room Gets Grim And Scary As He's Carried To The Cemetary
Best diss
He'll Be Madden/Mad In Hear/Here Like He's Listenin To NFL Coaches Commentary
Really nice flow



Don't think all your K.O's are gonna scare me/
when i'm done with you, you'll looking gayer than a fairy/
Pretty good opener
have you crying 'how dare he!'/
you think your gonna beat me? bitch your funnier than Jim Carrey/
Wasn't feeling it
You think your tough cause ya avatar is of Al Pacino/
I'll lyrically lacerate this lame and lousy latino/
Best bar, good diss


It was pretty close for me but overall is Zenland

ZenLand
06-08-2008, 01:19 PM
3-0 K.O. Closed Thanks To Those Who Voted