Raider VS :$am3*$hyT*B!t€h:

[:$am3*$hyT*B!tCh:]

Rules
6 bars
First one to 3 votes wins

i'll drop first




Hittin this nigga up like I'm fucking serious/
Rockin Raiderz brains n make him delirious/

Furious/ speeding in the car/ brakeless/
Take this/ home and watch me make it//

Big time/ like I neva was too small/
At all/ Raider learn to lyrically brawl//

I'll smight ya'll/ easier than God can./
And have u runnin like a fuckin madman./

In the rap game u a rookie/
Yeah u made a rhyme pussy, u want a cookie?//

This 6 bars is all it took me/
Feeling sick now Raider? Why dont u sue me//


I dont really think I need to explain anything

Ok ur drop :D

[raider]

6 bars ok hmm let me think........

i'm bringin an un before seen wrath, i'm acheiving new havoc/
an with tha way i'm "passing" MCs, you'd think i'd be weaving through traffic//
smashin these vocals with absurd diction,keep on punchin like a verb addiction/
wishin this was all fiction, too many knocks got ya seein 3 of me thru blurred vision,
leavin kids 'geek'in if they 'catch' my 'hooks'...like 'nerd fishing'//
think on the fly, i'm lyrically versitile.. this streak is uncursable../
like i'm teachin science to these dumb cats.. show em how a human body's reversable..
i'll rip any MC who stands in my way, so sorry kiddo don't take it personal...//
thinkin your better than me, hoe-please.. i know more 'ringz' of people than old-trees/
game's fresh like poul-tries, fuckin with me'll leave your body 'bagged' faster than groceries//
the only way this kid could "pack heat" would be to take a mircowave/
after these mammoth punches in a battle, this bitch just breaks.... like a wave//
i'm god's assassin, Sam3's testing my fury, thinkin "no one's built like that.."/
but she'll only be remembered as Feline.. cuz curiosity killed that cat//(rraaarrr)

wack as hell but im rushin

[:$am3*$hyT*B!tCh:]

cool cool.

Uppin!

I hope ppl actually vote

[raider]

i highly

[I.R.EMCEE]

I like how raider does his shit, my vote's for raider.

Sam I think should get some new words in her vocabulary to make her rhymes better but for the most part her flow was decent.

[chappy]

Not worth breaking down... Raider took it even tho his spit was weak, but like he said he was rushing.

[Joe M]

yep, raider has it.

[:$am3*$hyT*B!tCh:]

Can people please actually vote?

Please break it down. :D Thanks

[raider]

dont get your hopes up

[:$am3*$hyT*B!tCh:]

fuck...

I want someone to actually break down the shit so I can know what I did wrong and what to fix.

Can anyone do that for me?

[ZenLand]

This battle definetly went to raider. SS I'll break down your verse to show you what I think you need to do.

Hittin this nigga up like I'm fucking serious/
Rockin Raiderz brains n make him delirious/
Ok. Theres no real punch here. When you're battlin come up with the punchline first then build on it. This is a weak opener too. You want your first and last bars to be your best.

Furious/ speeding in the car/ brakeless/
Take this/ home and watch me make it//
You don't even diss him here.

Big time/ like I neva was too small/
At all/ Raider learn to lyrically brawl//
Ok you attempted a punch but it was still weak.

I'll smight ya'll/ easier than God can./
And have u runnin like a fuckin madman./
Once again you attempted it but not good at all.

In the rap game u a rookie/
Yeah u made a rhyme pussy, u want a cookie?//
This doesn't even make since to me lol.

This 6 bars is all it took me/
Feeling sick now Raider? Why dont u sue me//
This is ok I guess.

Just keep it up SS. You'll get it eventually.

[FreeFlow]

Sam3 Bitch
Hittin this nigga up like I'm fucking serious/
Rockin Raiderz brains n make him delirious/
not really a great opener. the beginning and end have to hit hard. the opening sets the tone
Furious/ speeding in the car/ brakeless/
Take this/ home and watch me make it//
random bar
Big time/ like I neva was too small/
At all/ Raider learn to lyrically brawl//
weak
I'll smight ya'll/ easier than God can./
And have u runnin like a fuckin madman./
weak again
In the rap game u a rookie/
Yeah u made a rhyme pussy, u want a cookie?//
not a good punch
This 6 bars is all it took me/
Feeling sick now Raider? Why dont u sue me//
again beginning and end have to hit hard. the end is the finisher its gotta be like your best bar. this blended in with a bunch of weak bars.

Raider
i'm bringin an un before seen wrath, i'm acheiving new havoc/
an with tha way i'm "passing" MCs, you'd think i'd be weaving through traffic//
nota good opener
smashin these vocals with absurd diction,keep on punchin like a verb addiction/
wishin this was all fiction, too many knocks got ya seein 3 of me thru blurred vision,
leavin kids 'geek'in if they 'catch' my 'hooks'...like 'nerd fishing'//
weak punch and not really directed at opponent
think on the fly, i'm lyrically versitile.. this streak is uncursable../
like i'm teachin science to these dumb cats.. show em how a human body's reversable..
i'll rip any MC who stands in my way, so sorry kiddo don't take it personal...//
whack but prolly your best bar strictly cus of the multis
thinkin your better than me, hoe-please.. i know more 'ringz' of people than old-trees/
game's fresh like poul-tries, fuckin with me'll leave your body 'bagged' faster than groceries//
played
the only way this kid could "pack heat" would be to take a mircowave/
after these mammoth punches in a battle, this bitch just breaks.... like a wave//
weak
i'm god's assassin, Sam3's testing my fury, thinkin "no one's built like that.."/
but she'll only be remembered as Feline.. cuz curiosity killed that cat//(rraaarrr)
not a great ender

this is a weird battle. even though everyones votin raider i think this could have gone either way. but raider edges it out because hes had way mmore experience in battling and knows what to do. Sam3 its not enough to just say what your going to do to him. you have to use metaphors and similies and throw in double meanings and personals. you were just straight up rapping while talking trash. he had the better flow and structure and he threw in some simies and meta's(but obviously he's more lyrical)

just read some old battles and youll get the hang of ideas and what aspects you need to include in your battle game
and personally i think you got off easy(i seen some of his old battles and he came with that heat he would have ripped your ish up)
but yea vote goes raider even though im sure hes allready won