Ver$u$ vs Joe M

[Ver$u$]

aight
5 bars
first to 3 wins
no dickride or hate votes
verses' due by next monday
Irish podge cant vote r it will be a hate vote

gud luck to both mc's

[Irish~Podge]

This one will be interesting.... very interesting.

[Ver$u$]

aight havent done this ina wile but lets do it


little kid steppin ta me, id wish ya wud see sense
cuz ima but to kill this shit n make Joe M past tense

my rhymes'l make u cry n shiver, ur flow is as good as a dry river
little bitch u cudnt top this beef if ya stood on a cows liver

bitch im hammerin u, so ya better pray soon
ha, the only time this kid drops heavy bars is in weight rooms

beat me in a battle? son ul need a new idea
cuz the last time u had an ill flow i called it diarrhoea :shit: lol

i memba i met yo moms n i said "nice legs wat time do ya open?" lol
now i just killed u off quicker than she closed em




hahaha i think that was aight considerin i havent dropped in fuckin well over a year lol i have to get back into this shit, aight JOE sup to u big lad

[Joe M]

aight, haven't done this, ever, but i'll give it a go.

my rhymes will make a direct hit, Im like a sharp shooter/
Im looking at your ugly head now, Im inside your computer/

once im done with you, i'll finish the rest/
why are you mentioning my mom? all you do is incest/

im not sectarian, and I don't want any beef/
but you called my cousin a taig, so im gonna give you nothing but grief/

you say your a good rapper but your yet to prove it/
after reading my verse then yours, you'll want to remove it/

i'd recommend you quit spitting, trust me Versus/
cause if ya don't, you'll end up like every other rapper, in the back of hearses/



remember peeps, first time ever.

[threeonethree]

both wack.. versus guy bit the weight room line and probably other ones too because they are on such played concepts.. the other guy is just wack..

sorry id ont inkweo i bwaht waht i sayping i am high

[Ver$u$]

fuck u man, lets see u do it then, anyways uppin

[free92]

joey easy

[Deagle50]

no beef but to be honest, i think both were kind of weak, VS's started off ok but then it seemed like he just threw the end together, i see the points he was gettin at but it was a bad way of gettin there, and Joe's was kinda of the samething except it was like his effort in it was consistent and lil bit better diss. i dont know about the biting part 313 was talkin bout so i wont even bother with it

but all in all i say Joe M

[threeonethree]

ahemm..

well i want to clearify something here.. well i know i shouldnt give a fuck i dont care but still i would like say it..

actually i was a little high that day .. nothing big.. just cannibus and canibus' albums. well i apologize for that earlier vote (i dont give a fuck about it but just because i dont want the new comers to get disheartened)

heres what i actually think of the battle..

versus : you got your concepts like wordplay , metas etc . nothing big and they are pretty much played out (if not bitten from other same played out concepts), but still you will get better with time..

joey guy: your rhyme was what we call "kindergarden rhymes" . you need to put wordplay , metas , multis, punches etc in there(google it up if you dont know what these are).. but if you practice and study you can be good ..

i think verses guy got this battle..

threeonethree feels nice today :-s shoot me

[lissybabe]

uhm im not too experienced myself, but i quite liked joe's flow to be honest its his first time and hes got some good ideas going through his mind i think.

[Irish~Podge]

Joe wins!!!:D :clap: ...but i must say that both rhymes were good!:)

[Joe M]

Thanks for the comments peeps!

I know I suck, but I think im gettin better.

3-1 I take it.

[threeonethree]

are there any mods to put this closed battle in its right place jbt?

[Falix]

lol i vote Joe, his was better

[$tingeR]

your some wack fuckin voters. VERSUS wins this EASILY. although the other guy was good for a first try...VERSUS had more punches, wordplay...more everything. No way could Joe win....wtf...nothin personal joe.