Champion vs. Unfaded ( Round 1 )

[ZenLand]

Check In: Sunday , July 16th Midnight EST
Verses Due: Tuesday , July 18th Midnight EST



4-8 Bars Max
(If your opponent checks in you must post some sort of verse for a win, if he doesn't check in, then you win by default.)

No: Recycling/Biting/Ghost Writing/Feeding Off Your Opponents Verse.

3-0 KO, 4-1 TKO, Or First To 5 Wins
No: Hate/Dick Riding/Unexplained Votes/Freeposting In Battles

If Theres Anyone You Dont Wish To Vote In Your Battle Clearly State The Name Of This Person And The Reasons Behind This

Crew votes if both battlers agree.

Acceptable Voting Methods:

(1) Bar-By-Bar Break Down.


(2) Catagories (With Full Explanations) That Must Include.

Punches:
Personals:
Multies:
Metas:
Flow:
Wordplay:
Creativity:
Nameplay:
Complexity:
Consistency:
Vocab:

Overall Vote:

Feel free to Pm Verses To Me, Ice Or Itty ( We Are The Judges )

[-Unfaded-]

chekk, lets go 7 bars

[Champion]

Eh.. okay.

Checkness.

[Champion]

I'm only goin' five.

I'm cut short of time for more.

[ZenLand]

Champ's Verse:

To start this off, I’ll ‘phone’-this-kid, so the ‘dashes’ by his name will be prone-to-spit, but the lyrics I send get you in ‘cells’ when you ain’t ready to ‘Sprint’....!!

The price of skill has gone up since you ain’t ’bought-some’, put you on “True Hollywood Story” since you aren’t thoughtful, ‘Slant ya rhymes on E,’ ‘cause truth is, ya lines are ‘off-full/awful’!

‘Punchin’ me down-with-words? ...Pfft.. my lyrics have the ability to heat-you, ‘cause I’ll put a frown-on-verbs since I don't have to 'throw trash on boxers' to 'litter-Ali/litterally' beat-you...!!

Spittin’ atrocities with velocity ‘slurrin’ speach’ as I’ve been chewin’-MCs, I don’t have to ‘learn another language greatly’ to ‘in-fluence/influence-MCs

With lines I spit, I hurt-you-better-than most people, with ease-I-had-fall-back, ‘cause I ‘murked-this-veteran’ worse than diseases-at-combat..

Explinations:

1.) Sprint is a cell phone company thing, dash run.. his name has dashes by it; cell, jail
2.) The “E” in crew name is slanted; E is a channel.. y’all know; E as in empty like gas, and gas prices have gone up
3.) Punch is a verb, so is throw; rest should be self
4.) Fluent speaking of a language; kid is an alien race/other, so he must know another language
5.) He’s a veteran.. war... diseases at war can kill you

[-Unfaded-]

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i`m CHOOSING-FIRMEST-WORDS dats BRUISING-HERBS-IN-TURF, last round u got k.o'd,- so u tryna "turn the tables?"...then start MOVING-FURNITURE!!//
FUSING-WORDS-WITH-VERBS, you win? SAY-WHAT?..i ain`t tryna DISMAY-SLUTS but its like growing "almonds on meadows"...just PLAIN-NUTS!!//
ya REIGNS-FUCKED!, pierce ya skin and CRACK-YOUR-TISSUES till' ur BACK-IS-IN-TWO!, fuckin' wit faded?.."ur in trouble" like suffering from BLADDER-ISSUES!!//(urine)
i'll SNATCH-YA-PISTOLS, now ya FRONTIN-INSPID and PUMPIN-WIT-TWITCHES!, ur pic is like "visiting the dogpound"...NOTHING-BUT-BITCHES!!// (http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=27821)
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clearly SLAYING-YA-TEXT while i FIGHT-THROUGH-THIS-DUMMY! cuz if it ever came to "PAYING-RESPECT"....I'D-LOOSE-A-PENNY!!//

[[Da~Iceman]]

dont mind omar...


To start this off, I’ll ‘phone’-this-kid, so the ‘dashes’ by his name will be prone-to-spit, but the lyrics I send get you in ‘cells’ when you ain’t ready to ‘Sprint’....!!
first multies forced...no direct punch
The price of skill has gone up since you ain’t ’bought-some’, put you on “True Hollywood Story” since you aren’t thoughtful, ‘Slant ya rhymes on E,’ ‘cause truth is, ya lines are ‘off-full/awful’!
not bad w/p decent
‘Punchin’ me down-with-words? ...Pfft.. my lyrics have the ability to heat-you, ‘cause I’ll put a frown-on-verbs since I don't have to 'throw trash on boxers' to 'litter-Ali/litterally' beat-you...!!
another good w/p nice bar
Spittin’ atrocities with velocity ‘slurrin’ speach’ as I’ve been chewin’-MCs, I don’t have to ‘learn another language greatly’ to ‘in-fluence/influence-MCs
ehh meh w/p...
With lines I spit, I hurt-you-better-than most people, with ease-I-had-fall-back, ‘cause I ‘murked-this-veteran’ worse than diseases-at-combat..
played vet concept but its tite i guess...


i`m CHOOSING-FIRMEST-WORDS dats BRUISING-HERBS-IN-TURF, last round u got k.o'd,- so u tryna "turn the tables?"...then start MOVING-FURNITURE!!//
hah funny nice punch...
FUSING-WORDS-WITH-VERBS, you win? SAY-WHAT?..i ain`t tryna DISMAY-SLUTS but its like growing "almonds on meadows"...just PLAIN-NUTS!!//
decent nice concept
ya REIGNS-FUCKED!, pierce ya skin and CRACK-YOUR-TISSUES till' ur BACK-IS-IN-TWO!, fuckin' wit faded?.."ur in trouble" like suffering from BLADDER-ISSUES!!//(urine)
played concept but nicely flipped...
i'll SNATCH-YA-PISTOLS, now ya FRONTIN-INSPID and PUMPIN-WIT-TWITCHES!, ur pic is like "visiting the dogpound"...NOTHING-BUT-BITCHES!!//
Dayum...dopeness...
clearly SLAYING-YA-TEXT while i FIGHT-THROUGH-THIS-DUMMY! cuz if it ever came to "PAYING-RESPECT"....I'D-LOOSE-A-PENNY!!//
KO...straight dopeness here...

Punches: Unfaded, was more consistent
Personals: Unfaded's hit harder...
Multies: Unfaded...
Metas: Definatley unfaded the bitches and penny lines were creative...
Flow: Tie
Wordplay: Champ...un's urine line was played...
Creativity: Unfaded...
Nameplay: Champ
Complexity: Unfaded
Consistency: Unfaded
Vocab: Niether stood out alot...

Overall Vote: Unfaded...nice battle, champ just couldnt compete with un...stay up both '1

[ZenLand]

only got time to do this so sorry

Punches: Unfaded
Personals: Unfaded
Multies: Unfaded
Metas: Unfaded
Flow: Champ
Wordplay: I'll Give It A Tie
Creativity: Unfaded
Nameplay: None
Complexity: Unfaded
Consistency: Unfaded
Vocab: Unfaded

Overall Vote: Unfaded, Champ's verse Was Good But Un Topped It

It Was Kinda One Sided But It Was A Dope Battle, We'll Just Make This 2-0 K.O. Closed

[Champion]

^That's CHEAP!

Let's go the full way.

[ZenLand]

lol i was gonna i said that's all i had time for

To start this off, I’ll ‘phone’-this-kid, so the ‘dashes’ by his name will be prone-to-spit, but the lyrics I send get you in ‘cells’ when you ain’t ready to ‘Sprint’....!!
Multies left At The End
The price of skill has gone up since you ain’t ’bought-some’, put you on “True Hollywood Story” since you aren’t thoughtful, ‘Slant ya rhymes on E,’ ‘cause truth is, ya lines are ‘off-full/awful’!
Actually Liked The Word Play, Decent
‘Punchin’ me down-with-words? ...Pfft.. my lyrics have the ability to heat-you, ‘cause I’ll put a frown-on-verbs since I don't have to 'throw trash on boxers' to 'litter-Ali/litterally' beat-you...!!
Ehh Ok Bar IMO
Spittin’ atrocities with velocity ‘slurrin’ speach’ as I’ve been chewin’-MCs, I don’t have to ‘learn another language greatly’ to ‘in-fluence/influence-MCs
Nah..
With lines I spit, I hurt-you-better-than most people, with ease-I-had-fall-back, ‘cause I ‘murked-this-veteran’ worse than diseases-at-combat..
Decent Closer

i`m CHOOSING-FIRMEST-WORDS dats BRUISING-HERBS-IN-TURF, last round u got k.o'd,- so u tryna "turn the tables?"...then start MOVING-FURNITURE!!//
Tight opener
FUSING-WORDS-WITH-VERBS, you win? SAY-WHAT?..i ain`t tryna DISMAY-SLUTS but its like growing "almonds on meadows"...just PLAIN-NUTS!!//
It Was An Ok Bar IMO
ya REIGNS-FUCKED!, pierce ya skin and CRACK-YOUR-TISSUES till' ur BACK-IS-IN-TWO!, fuckin' wit faded?.."ur in trouble" like suffering from BLADDER-ISSUES!!//(urine)
Kinda Played But It Was Worded Good
i'll SNATCH-YA-PISTOLS, now ya FRONTIN-INSPID and PUMPIN-WIT-TWITCHES!, ur pic is like "visiting the dogpound"...NOTHING-BUT-BITCHES!!//
Lol Made Me Laugh
clearly SLAYING-YA-TEXT while i FIGHT-THROUGH-THIS-DUMMY! cuz if it ever came to "PAYING-RESPECT"....I'D-LOOSE-A-PENNY!!//
The Punch At The End Was Dope But The Multies Didn't Rhyme Good For Me

Overall: Unfaded

[Champion]

Still only 0-2 to him...

[ZenLand]

Champ It's A Tourny, We're The Judges It's Closed

[Champion]

Well that's not straight.