Dash Vs. Threeonethree ( Round 1)

[ZenLand]

Check In: Sunday , July 16th Midnight EST
Verses Due: Tuesday ,July 18th Midnight EST



4-8 Bars Max
(If your opponent checks in you must post some sort of verse for a win, if he doesn't check in, then you win by default.)

No: Recycling/Biting/Ghost Writing/Feeding Off Your Opponents Verse.

3-0 KO, 4-1 TKO, Or First To 5 Wins
No: Hate/Dick Riding/Unexplained Votes/Freeposting In Battles

If Theres Anyone You Dont Wish To Vote In Your Battle Clearly State The Name Of This Person And The Reasons Behind This

Crew votes if both battlers agree.

Acceptable Voting Methods:

(1) Bar-By-Bar Break Down.


(2) Catagories (With Full Explanations) That Must Include.

Punches:
Personals:
Multies:
Metas:
Flow:
Wordplay:
Creativity:
Nameplay:
Complexity:
Consistency:
Vocab:

Overall Vote:

Feel free to Pm Verses To Me, Ice Or Itty ( We Are The Judges )

[threeonethree]

check ...

[Dash]

didnt see this..

check

[Dash]

i been writin and writin for other sites, and had some personal shit, i know ya`ll dont want me to key but i am..

http://i4.tinypic.com/106wrkm.jpg

^^ his pic

- imp act/impact
- border view/bored of you
- 8/ate, add his name up (313 = 7), 7 is one behind 8.. mwahah. u suck!




i`ll start RIPPIN THIS GUY NOW.. SITTIN HIM RIGHT DOWN and honestly, if i dont get the votes, the voters brains must be as THICK AS YOUR EYEBROWS!!//
real talk, i speak truth and you dont SCARE ME, PREACHER! your style couldnt make an "imp act" if you "trained a FAIRY CREATURE"!!
your vocab, wordplay, multies and RHYMING IS SHIT, look on your photo thread, we aint LIKIN YOU PRICK.. consider this "circumcision", i`ma start "SLICIN THIS DICK" and now were "border view" like "chillin on the SIDE OF A SHIP"!!//
i aint bringin "heat to your feet" but i`ll HARM AND "BOIL YOUR SOLE" and honestly, you were "made to be soft" like "CHARMIN TOILET ROLL"!!//ha!
i`m a "vicious creature" whos non-stop "RIP TILL YOUR SKIN TARES"! your punches are "hittin nothin" like throwin your "FIST INTO THIN AIR"!!//



Finisher..

now i`ll GUN YOUR RHYMES SEE.. i`m more "dark" than colour FROM YOUR EYES B. once your "8" i`ll "add your name up" to show your "ONE BEHIND ME"!!// complexity?






fuck it, this was done in about 6 minutes!!

peace

[ZenLand]

313 is gonna drop 2morrow cuz he said hes busy, i'll let him cuz i hate dqs:mad:

[threeonethree]

aight thanks man.... i just got 1 more bar to write.. i will definatly drop before 12 am tonight..

i gotta go out to buy me some dope.. here is the proof... thanks zen

[Dash]

dont flip boyo.. aint allowed..

[ZenLand]

y/w bro...

[ZenLand]

313 dq'd, gave ya long enough bro