0-0 Red Devil Vs. Slim Shady 22 0-0

[Rowe]

Check In: Friday, July 14th Midnight EST
Verses Due: Sunday, July 16th Midnight EST



3-5 Bars Max
(If your opponent checks in you must post some sort of verse for a win, if he doesn't check in, then you win by default.)

No: Recycling/Biting/Ghost Writing/Feeding Off Your Opponents Verse.

3-0 KO, 4-1 TKO, Or First To 5 Wins
No: Hate/Dick Riding/Unexplained Votes/Freeposting In Battles

If Theres Anyone You Dont Wish To Vote In Your Battle Clearly State The Name Of This Person And The Reasons Behind This

Crew votes if both battlers agree.

Acceptable Voting Methods:

(1) Bar-By-Bar Break Down.


(2) Catagories (With Full Explanations) That Must Include.

Punches:
Personals:
Multies:
Metas:
Flow:
Wordplay:
Creativity:
Nameplay:
Complexity:
Consistency:
Vocab:

Overall Vote:

Voting ends Tuesday after the due date.

Feel free to Pm Verses To Me or a.i.d.s

Winner Face's The Champion Next Week

[Slim Shady 22]

checkin in
g/l red

[Red Devyl]

check in

[Slim Shady 22]

shit i forgot bout this, quick 3 bars..

Yo,

I seen ur battle bitch yo lines-are-wack, u getting killed in the battle league, ure spine-I’ll-crack, this devil is a fake ass nigga tht be tryin-to-rap!!

Im gunna fuck u up bitch yo head-will-burst, leave all yo wack ass lines wrecked-and-cursed u don’t stand a chance devil bitch this text-will-hurt!!

U shud be used to the heat but u a burnin-torch, ya cant rap u need a learnin-course this pain gon last forever ull be a hurtin-corpse!!

EXPOS
1:i seen his battles and i aint impressed
2: self
3: he shud be used to heat as he is the devil, his pain will last forever as the devil is eternal....

ye like i sed a quick spit

[Red Devyl]

Fuck no show guarantees now the devil is exhumed*
quit right now because your conscious level is confused

with my victory your old record is history
helping put sense into your name mystery**

both losses to indians because they broke u into scotlands islands
liek your skills are weak copper and we are pieces of sharp diamonds

Explanations
*= thats jsut for the people sayin i wont show
**= his record right now is 2-1 and his name is slimshady 22 so he will lose this and his record will be 2-2
***=scotland has shit lodda islands and he is from there so i will break him into pieces liek yaninthepan did. by the way yan and me both are indians

god damn my explanation was longer then my verse

[ZenLand]

I seen ur battle bitch yo lines-are-wack, u getting killed in the battle league, ure spine-I’ll-crack, this devil is a fake ass nigga tht be tryin-to-rap!!
Spine I'll Crack Shoulda Been left Out, Otherwise, Ok
Im gunna fuck u up bitch yo head-will-burst, leave all yo wack ass lines wrecked-and-cursed u don’t stand a chance devil bitch this text-will-hurt!!
Ehh.. pretty Good
U shud be used to the heat but u a burnin-torch, ya cant rap u need a learnin-course this pain gon last forever ull be a hurtin-corpse!!
Nah Not Feelin It

Fuck no show guarantees now the devil is exhumed*
quit right now because your conscious level is confused
Nah Week Opener Bro
with my victory your old record is history
helping put sense into your name mystery**
It Took Me A Second To Get It, But Then It Was Good
both losses to indians because they broke u into scotlands islands
liek your skills are weak copper and we are pieces of sharp diamonds
Ehhh It's Ok Bar

Overall: SS22
Red What Happened?

[Champion]

Slim Shady 22

I seen ur battle bitch yo lines-are-wack, u getting killed in the battle league, ure spine-I’ll-crack, this devil is a fake ass nigga tht be tryin-to-rap!!
^Multis were forced with the "spine I'll crack" ish - didn't connect, and the punch was weak

Im gunna fuck u up bitch yo head-will-burst, leave all yo wack ass lines wrecked-and-cursed u don’t stand a chance devil bitch this text-will-hurt!!
^Erm... that's alright

U shud be used to the heat but u a burnin-torch, ya cant rap u need a learnin-course this pain gon last forever ull be a hurtin-corpse!!
^That's your best bar, but isn't really hard hitting

Red Devyl:

Fuck no show guarantees now the devil is exhumed*
quit right now because your conscious level is confused
^Horrible attempt at anything

with my victory your old record is history
helping put sense into your name mystery**
^I get what you're trying to say, but you could have execute this A LOT BETTER, because without an expo, no would know what you mean

both losses to indians because they broke u into scotlands islands
liek your skills are weak copper and we are pieces of sharp diamonds
^Horrible punch, but okay personal on the yaninthepan thing... but WEAK line

Punches: Eh..
Personals: The Devyl
Multies: Slim Shady 22
Metas: Slim Shady 22
Flow: Slim Shady 22
Wordplay: Slim Shady 22
Creativity: Slim Shady 22
Nameplay: The Devyl
Complexity: Slim Shady 22
Consistency: Slim Shady 22
Vocab: Eh..

Overall Vote: Slim Shady 22

This battle sucked.

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ss22

I seen ur battle bitch yo lines-are-wack, u getting killed in the battle league, ure spine-I’ll-crack, this devil is a fake ass nigga tht be tryin-to-rap!!
no content

Im gunna fuck u up bitch yo head-will-burst, leave all yo wack ass lines wrecked-and-cursed u don’t stand a chance devil bitch this text-will-hurt!!
ehh..

U shud be used to the heat but u a burnin-torch, ya cant rap u need a learnin-course this pain gon last forever ull be a hurtin-corpse!!
lol..nice

red devyl

Fuck no show guarantees now the devil is exhumed*
quit right now because your conscious level is confused
not bad

with my victory your old record is history
helping put sense into your name mystery**
lol..cool creativity

both losses to indians because they broke u into scotlands islands
liek your skills are weak copper and we are pieces of sharp diamonds
ok

vote - tie , but if u don't like ties i vote red devyl since neither of them had any type of punch but red devyl had better attempts at personals

[threeonethree]

Im gunna fuck u up bitch yo head-will-burst, leave all yo wack ass lines wrecked-and-cursed u don’t stand a chance devil bitch this text-will-hurt!!

your HEAD-WILL-BURST , NECK-WILL-THIRST your WRECKED-AND-CURSED always LESS-THAN-FIRST like "relationship breakups on mobile phones" this TEXT-WILL-HURT!!
http://forum.eminem.net/showpost.php?p=171194&postcount=1


i`m comin to getcha, so much heat like BURNIN-TORCH, ya need a LEARNING-COURSE make ya YEARNING-SCORCH and wreck ya, like "broken stretchers" i`l drop ya HURTING-COURPSE!



U shud be used to the heat but u a burnin-torch, ya cant rap u need a learnin-course this pain gon last forever ull be a hurtin-corpse!!

biters = no no :o

[a.i.d.s.]

i give you the chance to explain yourself ss 22, if you dont, you'll loose.


please stop freeposting


of course i will delete your posts and keep it clean in here. thank you :)


and thank you 313.

[a.i.d.s.]

red devyl wins, by dq. ss 22 told me he bit of dash cuz he was under preasure (???) and that he leaves the forum as he doesnt want to be disrespected by you.