View Full Version : 0-0 Dash Vs. [Da~Iceman] 0-0
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[Da~Iceman]
07-13-2006, 12:10 AM
check second time i guess
i`m keying quick again.. i really should win this if ya`ll vote fairly, no flips right?
Disclaimer info: i already beat him, people on the predcition poll all said i would win this
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=19872
^ icemans pic, his hair is pushed back way to far
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Listen your a BASTARD FAKE like 'kids playin with fire' i`ll take this 'MATCH AWAY' while you`ll DASH AWAY with the FASTEST PACE seriously your the WACKEST GAY so i`ll "snap your leg" then "throw it at you", now you can "CATCH A BREAK"!! ci senor
sonned..
plus YA SPITTINS OLD and when it comes to rap, your A DISTANT SOUL plus everyone knows i`ll win, look at the PREDICTION POLL!!
over the years, ive been hittin these FREAKS WITH A BOLD GRIN (:D) and as i`m SPEAKIN OF OLD WINS ive already "served ice" like the fans were "NEEDING A COLD DRINK"!! tru story
we`ll see ice "evaporate" when i`m BURNIN YOU WITH FLARE KID i`m FAIR WITH a style thas gon get u "pushed back" "FURTHER THAN YOUR HAIR BITCH"!!
quick finisher
as for this battle, dont THROW THOSE SILLY FREES.. this was "straight murder" like a "HOMO KILLING SPREE"!!
dont flip its not allowed youngin..
[Da~Iceman]
07-15-2006, 07:41 PM
Lmao at youngin…thx for the great sportsmanship fam…and don’t worry flipping is homo shit…and just cuz he said he’ll win for sure I hope yall don’t go dick riding him…cuz this will be far from ez for him and me…
Anyways heres a key before I go out…
i`m known as a cunt to be honest
“Punch Down Ya Cranium” Like I’M KNOCKING SOUTH YA KNOWLEDGE, Place Ya Carcass On Spikes…I’M FLOPPING YOU ON IT, Plus At School…Dash Just A Cunt To Be HONEST, So He “Lives In The Net”…Like Female Arachnids DROPPING OUT OF COLLEGE…lmao
“Control His Brains To Compliance” And “Make Him See Colors” Like HALTERED RACIAL SPEAKERS…Your Spits Just Sour And Old…They Never Bring TASTEFUL READERS…So I’ll “Smash His Skull On Church Stands” To Really ALTAR HIS FACIAL FEATURES!!…sonned! :eek:…(Alter)
“Sever Your Body” While You Sleep, So You REST AND LIE BLEEDING, “Cleverly Reattach Your Lungs” As Your LEFT WITH SLY BREATHING, He’s No Longer Undefeated So Now He Rides Unfaded…Like Breaking Streaks While Having SEX WITH DRY CLEANING!!…:devil:
1. flipped his lil comment bout him thinking his multis are huge
…and you saying that I flip?? Pfft…
You Must Bite Ya Gore Battles, ‘Cuz You SHITTING FEAR, Contort Dash “Far From Straight” No Wonder He SPITTING QUEER…Fucking Fagot!!…And I’m Not Referring To “Sprinters At Sea World” When I Say Dash Is The Only One FLIPPING HERE!!…
…And The Straw That Broke Dash’s Back!!…
I’m “Above Dash” Like Quick Fathers…So I’ll SON HIS FRAME…“Snap His Spine In 2” Till He’s STUNNED IN PAIN…More? I’ll ‘Decapitate Dash Halfway’ And After The Battle…He’ll Truly Run Away With His Head HUNG IN SHAME!!…Dayum!!
:devil:
:cool:
Expos:
Bar1: net as in spider/arachnid
Bar2: halter means to control, rest is self i hope :)
Bar3: Peep sig, rest is self
Bar4: Self i hope
Bar5: Self...
If theres something you don't get. Feel free to ask.
Champion
07-15-2006, 11:01 PM
Dash:
Listen your a BASTARD FAKE like 'kids playin with fire' i`ll take this 'MATCH AWAY' while you`ll DASH AWAY with the FASTEST PACE seriously your the WACKEST GAY so i`ll "snap your leg" then "throw it at you", now you can "CATCH A BREAK"!! ci senor
^Haha.. but no real punch and the line was stretched
sonned..
plus YA SPITTINS OLD and when it comes to rap, your A DISTANT SOUL plus everyone knows i`ll win, look at the PREDICTION POLL!!
^Haha... nice personal
over the years, ive been hittin these FREAKS WITH A BOLD GRIN () and as i`m SPEAKIN OF OLD WINS ive already "served ice" like the fans were "NEEDING A COLD DRINK"!! tru story
^"Drink" was forced in there because it didn't rhyme, but everything else was executed nicely, and it was a nice personal that I'm feelin'
we`ll see ice "evaporate" when i`m BURNIN YOU WITH FLARE KID i`m FAIR WITH a style thas gon get u "pushed back" "FURTHER THAN YOUR HAIR BITCH"!!
^HAHAHH! Nice personal..
quick finisher
as for this battle, dont THROW THOSE SILLY FREES.. this was "straight murder" like a "HOMO KILLING SPREE"!!
^LMAO!!! DOPE closer
Da~Iceman:
Punch Down Ya Cranium” Like I’M KNOCKING SOUTH YA KNOWLEDGE, Place Ya Carcass On Spikes…I’M FLOPPING YOU ON IT, Plus At School…Dash Just A Cunt To Be HONEST, So He “Lives In The Net”…Like Female Arachnids DROPPING OUT OF COLLEGE…lmao
^That's a nice flip on his quote, but some of the multis weren't the same syllables, so it kind of rocked the flow here
“Control His Brains To Compliance” And “Make Him See Colors” Like HALTERED RACIAL SPEAKERS…Your Spits Just Sour And Old…They Never Bring TASTEFUL READERS…So I’ll “Smash His Skull On Church Stands” To Really ALTAR HIS FACIAL FEATURES!!…sonned! …(Alter)
^HAHA! Nice wordplay, took me a minute to get, but I'm feelin' it
“Sever Your Body” While You Sleep, So You REST AND LIE BLEEDING, “Cleverly Reattach Your Lungs” As Your LEFT WITH SLY BREATHING, He’s No Longer Undefeated So Now He Rides Unfaded…Like Breaking Streaks While Having SEX WITH DRY CLEANING!!…
^Haha... nice personal
You Must Bite Ya Gore Battles, ‘Cuz You SHITTING FEAR, Contort Dash “Far From Straight” No Wonder He SPITTING QUEER…Fucking Fagot!!…And I’m Not Referring To “Sprinters At Sea World” When I Say Dash Is The Only One FLIPPING HERE!!…
^Running stuff is kind of played on him, but the rest is nice
…And The Straw That Broke Dash’s Back!!…
I’m “Above Dash” Like Quick Fathers…So I’ll SON HIS FRAME…“Snap His Spine In 2” Till He’s STUNNED IN PAIN…More? I’ll ‘Decapitate Dash Halfway’ And After The Battle…He’ll Truly Run Away With His Head HUNG IN SHAME!!…Dayum!!
^Man.. that was an ILL closer
Punches: Dash
Personals: Dash
Multies: Tie
Metas: Tie
Flow: Dash
Wordplay: Tie
Creativity: I'ma go with Da~Iceman - that last line was crazy
Nameplay: Da~Iceman
Complexity: Tie
Consistency: Tie
Vocab: None really stood out to me
Overall Vote: Dash by means of categories... but this was a VERY close battle.
Props to both for delivering such great verses. :thumbup:
ZenLand
07-16-2006, 02:34 AM
Punch Down Ya Cranium” Like I’M KNOCKING SOUTH YA KNOWLEDGE, Place Ya Carcass On Spikes…I’M FLOPPING YOU ON IT, Plus At School…Dash Just A Cunt To Be HONEST, So He “Lives In The Net”…Like Female Arachnids DROPPING OUT OF COLLEGE…lmao
Haha Dope Punch
“Control His Brains To Compliance” And “Make Him See Colors” Like HALTERED RACIAL SPEAKERS…Your Spits Just Sour And Old…They Never Bring TASTEFUL READERS…So I’ll “Smash His Skull On Church Stands” To Really ALTAR HIS FACIAL FEATURES!!…sonned! …(Alter)
Dope Wordplay And punch
“Sever Your Body” While You Sleep, So You REST AND LIE BLEEDING, “Cleverly Reattach Your Lungs” As Your LEFT WITH SLY BREATHING, He’s No Longer Undefeated So Now He Rides Unfaded…Like Breaking Streaks While Having SEX WITH DRY CLEANING!!…
Another Good Bar, Liked it
You Must Bite Ya Gore Battles, ‘Cuz You SHITTING FEAR, Contort Dash “Far From Straight” No Wonder He SPITTING QUEER…Fucking Fagot!!…And I’m Not Referring To “Sprinters At Sea World” When I Say Dash Is The Only One FLIPPING HERE!!…
Nice..
I’m “Above Dash” Like Quick Fathers…So I’ll SON HIS FRAME…“Snap His Spine In 2” Till He’s STUNNED IN PAIN…More? I’ll ‘Decapitate Dash Halfway’ And After The Battle…He’ll Truly Run Away With His Head HUNG IN SHAME!!…Dayum!!
Lol Nice Closer
Listen your a BASTARD FAKE like 'kids playin with fire' i`ll take this 'MATCH AWAY' while you`ll DASH AWAY with the FASTEST PACE seriously your the WACKEST GAY so i`ll "snap your leg" then "throw it at you", now you can "CATCH A BREAK"!! ci senor
Nice Bar, But No Real Punch
plus YA SPITTINS OLD and when it comes to rap, your A DISTANT SOUL plus everyone knows i`ll win, look at the PREDICTION POLL!!
Yeah This is A Nice One
over the years, ive been hittin these FREAKS WITH A BOLD GRIN and as i`m SPEAKIN OF OLD WINS ive already "served ice" like the fans were "NEEDING A COLD DRINK"!! tru story
Drink Doesn't Rhyme With All The Rest
we`ll see ice "evaporate" when i`m BURNIN YOU WITH FLARE KID i`m FAIR WITH a style thas gon get u "pushed back" "FURTHER THAN YOUR HAIR BITCH"!!
Ya Best Bar, Nice Personal
as for this battle, dont THROW THOSE SILLY FREES.. this was "straight murder" like a "HOMO KILLING SPREE"!!
Only An OK Closer For Me
Overall: Both Came Hard With Good Punches And Personals From Both, But I Gotta give It To Iceman
Why? His Bars Were Filled With Punches, Personals, And Dope Wordplay, I Preffered His Verse Over Dash's
-Unfaded-
07-16-2006, 12:39 PM
dash
Listen your a BASTARD FAKE like 'kids playin with fire' i`ll take this 'MATCH AWAY' while you`ll DASH AWAY with the FASTEST PACE seriously your the WACKEST GAY so i`ll "snap your leg" then "throw it at you", now you can "CATCH A BREAK"!! ci senor
coo' punch, simple
sonned..
plus YA SPITTINS OLD and when it comes to rap, your A DISTANT SOUL plus everyone knows i`ll win, look at the PREDICTION POLL!!
pretty funni
over the years, ive been hittin these FREAKS WITH A BOLD GRIN () and as i`m SPEAKIN OF OLD WINS ive already "served ice" like the fans were "NEEDING A COLD DRINK"!! tru story
drink wus forced, other then that this was cool
we`ll see ice "evaporate" when i`m BURNIN YOU WITH FLARE KID i`m FAIR WITH a style thas gon get u "pushed back" "FURTHER THAN YOUR HAIR BITCH"!!
lmao...dope
quick finisher
as for this battle, dont THROW THOSE SILLY FREES.. this was "straight murder" like a "HOMO KILLING SPREE"!!
homo part is played , but i'm still feelin the punch
iceman
Lmao at youngin…thx for the great sportsmanship fam…and don’t worry flipping is homo shit…and just cuz he said he’ll win for sure I hope yall don’t go dick riding him…cuz this will be far from ez for him and me…
Anyways heres a key before I go out…
Quote:
Originally Posted by Dash
i`m known as a cunt to be honest
“Punch Down Ya Cranium” Like I’M KNOCKING SOUTH YA KNOWLEDGE, Place Ya Carcass On Spikes…I’M FLOPPING YOU ON IT, Plus At School…Dash Just A Cunt To Be HONEST, So He “Lives In The Net”…Like Female Arachnids DROPPING OUT OF COLLEGE…lmao
haha...nice opener
“Control His Brains To Compliance” And “Make Him See Colors” Like HALTERED RACIAL SPEAKERS…Your Spits Just Sour And Old…They Never Bring TASTEFUL READERS…So I’ll “Smash His Skull On Church Stands” To Really ALTAR HIS FACIAL FEATURES!!…sonned! …(Alter)
haha, sikk
“Sever Your Body” While You Sleep, So You REST AND LIE BLEEDING, “Cleverly Reattach Your Lungs” As Your LEFT WITH SLY BREATHING, He’s No Longer Undefeated So Now He Rides Unfaded…Like Breaking Streaks While Having SEX WITH DRY CLEANING!!…
not bad, pretty coo'
Quote:
Originally Posted by “Dash”
1. flipped his lil comment bout him thinking his multis are huge
…and you saying that I flip?? Pfft…
You Must Bite Ya Gore Battles, ‘Cuz You SHITTING FEAR, Contort Dash “Far From Straight” No Wonder He SPITTING QUEER…Fucking Fagot!!…And I’m Not Referring To “Sprinters At Sea World” When I Say Dash Is The Only One FLIPPING HERE!!…
LMAO>..crazy personal.
…And The Straw That Broke Dash’s Back!!…
I’m “Above Dash” Like Quick Fathers…So I’ll SON HIS FRAME…“Snap His Spine In 2” Till He’s STUNNED IN PAIN…More? I’ll ‘Decapitate Dash Halfway’ And After The Battle…He’ll Truly Run Away With His Head HUNG IN SHAME!!…Dayum!!
Not bad... ok closer
vote- iceman, he already had the edge with more lines but his personals were more effective and dash had some dope stuff but didn't match up to his punches
[Da~Iceman]
07-19-2006, 02:46 AM
please more votes...
[Da~Iceman]
07-20-2006, 05:18 PM
what happened to the people who promised to vote...just get this over with by plz 4-1 tko or 5
Jakey Boi
07-21-2006, 01:26 PM
Listen your a BASTARD FAKE like 'kids playin with fire' i`ll take this 'MATCH AWAY' while you`ll DASH AWAY with the FASTEST PACE seriously your the WACKEST GAY so i`ll "snap your leg" then "throw it at you", now you can "CATCH A BREAK"!! ci senor
coo
plus YA SPITTINS OLD and when it comes to rap, your A DISTANT SOUL plus everyone knows i`ll win, look at the PREDICTION POLL!!
too simplistic
over the years, ive been hittin these FREAKS WITH A BOLD GRIN () and as i`m SPEAKIN OF OLD WINS ive already "served ice" like the fans were "NEEDING A COLD DRINK"!! tru story
lol decent
we`ll see ice "evaporate" when i`m BURNIN YOU WITH FLARE KID i`m FAIR WITH a style thas gon get u "pushed back" "FURTHER THAN YOUR HAIR BITCH"!!
lol decent
as for this battle, dont THROW THOSE SILLY FREES.. this was "straight murder" like a "HOMO KILLING SPREE"!!
decent
ICE
Punch Down Ya Cranium” Like I’M KNOCKING SOUTH YA KNOWLEDGE, Place Ya Carcass On Spikes…I’M FLOPPING YOU ON IT, Plus At School…Dash Just A Cunt To Be HONEST, So He “Lives In The Net”…Like Female Arachnids DROPPING OUT OF COLLEGE…lmao
coo...lil stretched
“Control His Brains To Compliance” And “Make Him See Colors” Like HALTERED RACIAL SPEAKERS…Your Spits Just Sour And Old…They Never Bring TASTEFUL READERS…So I’ll “Smash His Skull On Church Stands” To Really ALTAR HIS FACIAL FEATURES!!…sonned! …(Alter)
bah...decent @ best
“Sever Your Body” While You Sleep, So You REST AND LIE BLEEDING, “Cleverly Reattach Your Lungs” As Your LEFT WITH SLY BREATHING, He’s No Longer Undefeated So Now He Rides Unfaded…Like Breaking Streaks While Having SEX WITH DRY CLEANING!!…
stretched an not feeling
You Must Bite Ya Gore Battles, ‘Cuz You SHITTING FEAR, Contort Dash “Far From Straight” No Wonder He SPITTING QUEER…Fucking Fagot!!…And I’m Not Referring To “Sprinters At Sea World” When I Say Dash Is The Only One FLIPPING HERE!!…
lol
I’m “Above Dash” Like Quick Fathers…So I’ll SON HIS FRAME…“Snap His Spine In 2” Till He’s STUNNED IN PAIN…More? I’ll ‘Decapitate Dash Halfway’ And After The Battle…He’ll Truly Run Away With His Head HUNG IN SHAME!!…Dayum!!
nah not feelin
o/v ice quite easily but could tell dash keyd
you said 3 of my bars were decent, and one was cool, yet u gave him hardly nothin for props but give him the vote? sorry man but it jus seems a bit fishy..2-1 it stands
[Da~Iceman]
07-21-2006, 11:29 PM
its a well broken down vote and i highly doubt anyones gona vote but w/e..i hate to bitch about votes unless there completly ridiculous...
Jakey Boi
07-22-2006, 07:47 AM
he had one dope bar....the flippin bar thts why i gave him it
[Da~Iceman]
07-24-2006, 01:46 PM
3-1...i dont care about that shit this site is homo at voting anways...
please VOTE
Slim Shady 22
07-26-2006, 06:24 AM
Dash:
Listen your a BASTARD FAKE like 'kids playin with fire' i`ll take this 'MATCH AWAY' while you`ll DASH AWAY with the FASTEST PACE seriously your the WACKEST GAY so i`ll "snap your leg" then "throw it at you", now you can "CATCH A BREAK"!! ci senor
lol, but stretched and weak punch
sonned..
plus YA SPITTINS OLD and when it comes to rap, your A DISTANT SOUL plus everyone knows i`ll win, look at the PREDICTION POLL!!
ok…nice personal
over the years, ive been hittin these FREAKS WITH A BOLD GRIN () and as i`m SPEAKIN OF OLD WINS ive already "served ice" like the fans were "NEEDING A COLD DRINK"!! tru story
I liked this, nice multies
we`ll see ice "evaporate" when i`m BURNIN YOU WITH FLARE KID i`m FAIR WITH a style thas gon get u "pushed back" "FURTHER THAN YOUR HAIR BITCH"!!
personals were great lol
quick finisher
as for this battle, dont THROW THOSE SILLY FREES.. this was "straight murder" like a "HOMO KILLING SPREE"!!
dope and funny
Da~Iceman:
Punch Down Ya Cranium” Like I’M KNOCKING SOUTH YA KNOWLEDGE, Place Ya Carcass On Spikes…I’M FLOPPING YOU ON IT, Plus At School…Dash Just A Cunt To Be HONEST, So He “Lives In The Net”…Like Female Arachnids DROPPING OUT OF COLLEGE…lmao
ye twas nice bar
“Control His Brains To Compliance” And “Make Him See Colors” Like HALTERED RACIAL SPEAKERS…Your Spits Just Sour And Old…They Never Bring TASTEFUL READERS…So I’ll “Smash His Skull On Church Stands” To Really ALTAR HIS FACIAL FEATURES!!…sonned! …(Alter)
im really feelin it..nice shit here
“Sever Your Body” While You Sleep, So You REST AND LIE BLEEDING, “Cleverly Reattach Your Lungs” As Your LEFT WITH SLY BREATHING, He’s No Longer Undefeated So Now He Rides Unfaded…Like Breaking Streaks While Having SEX WITH DRY CLEANING!!…
nice personal there, multies good also
You Must Bite Ya Gore Battles, ‘Cuz You SHITTING FEAR, Contort Dash “Far From Straight” No Wonder He SPITTING QUEER…Fucking Fagot!!…And I’m Not Referring To “Sprinters At Sea World” When I Say Dash Is The Only One FLIPPING HERE!!…
played, average
…And The Straw That Broke Dash’s Back!!…
I’m “Above Dash” Like Quick Fathers…So I’ll SON HIS FRAME…“Snap His Spine In 2” Till He’s STUNNED IN PAIN…More? I’ll ‘Decapitate Dash Halfway’ And After The Battle…He’ll Truly Run Away With His Head HUNG IN SHAME!!…Dayum!!
dope also…
Punches: Iceman
Personals: Dash
Multies: Dash
Metas: Iceman
Flow: Dash
Wordplay: Tie
Creativity: Iceman only jus edged it
Nameplay: Iceman
Complexity: Tie
Consistency: Tie
Vocab: Tie
Overall Vote: Da~Iceman took this but twas really close battle…sum nice shit there
[Da~Iceman]
07-26-2006, 11:15 AM
good looking out^...
4-1 good battle dash...major propz to you
Falix
07-26-2006, 01:24 PM
dash was more direct... if iceman didnt say Dash's name in random spoits (that had nthing to do with the punches) you woulda thought he was battling someone else. dash dissed iceman on iceman ya know? disses his name, his appearnce and such. and thats what a battle should really come down to, iceman had real good lines, but they coulda been for ne one...
1Dash
07-26-2006, 01:56 PM
so what ur sayin is i took this battle (@ falix)
Jakey Boi
07-26-2006, 08:41 PM
bit late now
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