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madchild
03-13-2004, 01:00 PM
NO FREEPOSTING till the battle has ended please!

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READ CONDITIONS
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- No Crew/Hate Votes allowed
- Votes must be accompanied with an explaination or won't be allowed.
Preferably layed out like:
punches-
wordplay-
structure/flow-
multi-
personals-
creativity-
enjoyment-
- 2 Round Battle like before. I Spit, then you spit twice, and I end.
- NO BANNING WILL OCCUR FOR THE LOSER
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Madchild Spit #1:
Yo hold up, you got it all wrong, I don't wanna just battle you/
I want to crash your whole crew and take you down like the Wu//
Fire lyrical vocabulary that strikes you like heavy weaponry/
Have you flippin' thru a dictionary looking for my secret recipe//
Watch your enterprise crumble before your eyes like Martha Stewart/
You're groups more retarded than B2K, hah YL, "I beat you to it"//
How you gonna have a member that doesn't even know if he's a virgin/
Emmanyei's confused cause he had his wang taken off by a surgeon//
A man yeh? Is am-I-gay fo'Bill? Have you boys askin,
"Did you stick it to u.s. like Clit-on, Emmanyei?"/
Either way, you wack like you get off on Anime//
This diss is overdue, overwhelms ya, Scooby Doo, like deja vu/
The difference between me and your fake ass crews debut//
Is Madchild's a young legend out right, style described as Esoteric/
Where as 7L (several) of your members are just another ass-hole-tear-rip//
I'll break down your death like the fabrication of crystal meth/
Poeticly slew ya like Shakespeare did Macbeth till his final breath//
1st Junior, you'll be sippin'back Sunny D for weeks until you can afford dentistry/
Cause I'm gonna be knocking more croc out'ja-w mouth than there is around Dundee//
Your mouthy Junior, your wraps have more fillers than Pillsbury/
White as the dough boy too, cause I made you into a Ghost like Patrick Swayze//
You callout is blowing up in your face like an m-80/
This is getting messy, pussy, better call up the cleaning lady//
When I'm thru with you, you'll be needing a new face lift like an '83 El Camino/
Leavin you with such a Scarface, you'd be thinkin of playin a role of Al Pacino//
You got more scraps from being dragged on the ground than a lowrider/
Cause you're on your knees suckin' alotto dicks that you could be a blow dryer// (ie.sucking dicks dry)
You remind me of a scavenger, cause all that material your going thru is garbage/
You wanted me to spit 1st, but now you're backstage, complaining if you go out next, "I'll be upstage!"//
I got you framed like a picture, it's perfect, priceless, call it a Kodak Moment/
Have your boys wondering where you at, Junior Mint?//
Next time I see your ugly mug it will be on my milk carton/
Left your brain not starting, can't dodge this hit c martin//
My bars confine your every movement more than jail/
The only thing you are writing is chain mail to a male//
Your crew was hesitant to sign on the dotted line _ _ _ _ _ _ afraid to disappear cause I'm a meat eater/
Madchild lines hit you and your crew harder than the dinosaur extinction was obliterated by a meteor//

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Spit Terms Explained:
- Wu refers to the Wu-Tang Clan. "Crash your crew" was a song done by the Genius (founding member of the Wu). The Wu has been on a slump lately.
- "I beat you to it" is a song by B2K
- Deja Vu means the peculiar feeling that a place, situation, person, action, or conversation is familiar and has already been experienced.
- Esoteric means confined to and understandable by only an enlightened inner circle.
- 7L & Esoteric are rap artists that rap together.
- Dundee refers to Crocodile Dundee and how he always has croc teeth on him.
- Ghost is a movie with actor Patrick Swayze in it playing a ghost.
- Al Pacino was in the 1983 movie Scarface
- '83 El Camino is a car made by Chevrolet
- Upstage means to be put in one's place.
- Obliterated means reduced to nothingness.
- c martin = A football player who is a running-back. Also refers to the chump running his mouth on Em.net.

madchild
03-15-2004, 03:03 PM
What kind of pussy calls out and expects his opponent to spit first. Then runs away to start another battle site, never to return again :?: - Junior

You Lyrical Thugz know how to represent :!:

Tech Skillz
03-15-2004, 09:08 PM
here's my shit bitch

when i'm through with you, you'll be ashamed and embarrased/
were's young legend, did ya'll break up your marriage/
you finaly chose to batttle without conditions/
leave you crippled from so many painful inflictions/
you critizised my battle, now it's my turn/
yo' mom caught you ridin' yl's dick, now she concerned/
yeah, i did take your shit and copy/
did it to piss ya' off 'cause no child can stop me/
never had beef, but you claimed it/
use your blood and your name leave on this forum painted/
i'm sick of this mothafucka tryin' to slow my pace/
but i'm gonna run up to ya' mothafucka and put my fist in ya' face/
you screamin', nigga what you hollarin'/
i'm gonna fuck you up, i'm done with tolerance/
you was sayin' i can't rhyme? nigga please!/
the only thing your rhymes are to this forum is a desease/
so i'm gonna rip you to pieces and put you though/
i'll fuck ya'll up wether it's young legend or you!:twisted:

Tech Skillz
03-16-2004, 09:27 PM
here i go

who's the biggest pussy, you or Beninzo, i don't know/
i'm gonna cut you up and leave your pieces scattered like and archipelago/
'cause you a child and he a senior, but you just an imposter/
guess what? you the first one on my biggest bitch roster/
you ain't gettin' beat ny a black or white emcee, but one that's latin/
i'm gonna dislocate your jaw, 'til i'm sure you stop rappin'/
ain't that a shame, tried to take my crew out and failed/
you tried to beat me? glue on that time is what you probably inhaled/
you commenced this beef, but this beef i'm gonna extinguish/
you get beat by someoen who's second language is english/
madchild, or should i say fagchild, i ain't yo' mom to ride yo' dick/
i said you suck once, i'll say it again, stop tryin' to condradict/
here's my dick start to blow, stop listen up and quit yo' flows/
'cause my spits gonna make your bone chill and you blood run cold/
represent? i'll show you how to represent, her it is/
we better than you, you a faker, in other words, just a bicth/
so get your pink colored keybord and start hittin' those keys/
'cause i'm about to chase you around while you ass flees!

madchild
03-17-2004, 06:48 PM
It takes 10 of Juniors rhymes to compare to one of mine/ 14
Combine all your crews minds just to rival my paradigm// 14 [1]
You have to study my lines cause like Shakespeare's their sublime/ 14
If I were the teacher you'd fail for not reading between the lines// 16 [2]
I insult intellectually impaired idiots incapable illiterately/
Unlike u, my intensity is off the rictor scale, too ill-to-rate me// [3]
My thoughts are chemically dependent, they take you out like Tide/ 16
Leave more shit stains in your underwear than an amusement park ride// 16 [4]
You ain't getting any higher than me, you reached your climax/ 15
I ripped thru your head faster than Jack, attacks with a battle axe// 15 [5]
I guess you can say I "Ripped the Jack", cause your head sprang out like a Jack-in-the-Box/ 20
Spinal cord disconnected, system shutdown like a blown speakerbox, left you-on-the-rocks// 22 [6]
Every diss you made for me was a myth as if you were telling a legend/ 19
Junior stalled & it backfired in his face more than an oldsmobile engine// 19 [7]
Oh look, you used words like "wild" to rhyme with "Madchild", bitch, my raps are compiled/
Get it right, charged and loaded, so when you hit my switch, they run executionary styled// [8]
I got the vision of a hawkeye, so don't tempt me to steal your deagle/ 18
Start blowing out brains, 1-by-1, like your crews under siege by Steven Seagal// 19 [9]
Made your boy-band out to look like a group of girl scouts/ 13
It's a thuglife when they're selling girl-guide cookies on routes// 14 [10]
Oh I forgot, you a gangsta getting stoned daily like an Afghan/ 17
You Thugz are hitting the rock more than Osama and the Taliban// 17 [11]
Junior, you wouldn't know flow even if you were going downriver/ 17
The boards got you more alienated than the face of Joan Rivers// 17 [12]
Madchild spiked your punchlines so hard that you drunk like a hoe/ 15
Smashed you in-ter-net so much that I served you like John McEnroe// 16 [13]
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Bar [1]: Paradigm - A set of beliefs that defines the ways in which we think and act.
Bar [2]: Sublime - Worthy of adoration or reverence; inspire awe.
Bar [3]: Illiterate - A person unable to read; "ignorant of quantum mechanics"; "musically illiterate".
Line 1 - Alliteration is the repetition of consonant sounds at the beginning of a word. One type of wordplay.
Rictor Scale - Measures the frequency of an earthquake.
Bar [4]: Chemically Dependent - An addiction to chemical agents.
Tide refers to the detergent agent, along with the figure of speech of the movement of waves.
Bar [5]: Climax - Also called the turning point. The highest point of interest.
Bar [8]: Mocks the so-called freestyle dissed drop from Junior where he rhymes my name with the ever so common wild.
Compiled and Executed - Is how programs run on a computer.
Bar [9]: Deagle- Is a gun. Also a reference to his crew member.
Bar[10]: Oxymoron - A figure of speech which yokes two contradictory terms .
Steven Seagal was an actor in the movie "Under Siege", where he basically single handedly too out the enemy.
Bar[11]: Stoned - ie. Rocks thrown at them for sucking. Refers to the punishment in third-world counties of stoning (to death), as well as, the drug reference.
Rock - ie. Hiding. Refers to the Taliban and them hiding in rocks (caves), as well as, the drug (cocaine) reference fed off of above.

madchild
03-17-2004, 06:54 PM
Thanks for not freeposting. You can vote now.

Kruxx
03-17-2004, 06:58 PM
There really aint much point in this :lol:

punches- Madchild
wordplay- didnt really see TOO much? But from what i scanned, Also Madchild
structure/flow- Structure went to Madchild, but I think Juniors Flowed better....Both
multi- Madchild
personals- Madchild
creativity- Also Madchild
enjoyment- Both


As you can tell...Madchild is the winner...

Killa Jones
03-17-2004, 07:43 PM
same as above
mad ripped it up

S.W.A.T
03-17-2004, 09:05 PM
yep

Vote: Madchild

madchild
03-17-2004, 09:26 PM
Housekeeping!

You can shut this one down Shinoda, this is a KO. Might want to clean up the mess.

jersey#12
03-17-2004, 09:30 PM
congrats madchild

shinoda
03-17-2004, 09:40 PM
Well done.LOCKED